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Aditi_28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: NiRajCraZey
Amazing prologue and character sketch Jhanvi and Aditi Di...
*claps*
Nice to see a collab between 2 wonderful writer of the forum...The story is different from the others so it is unique and unique stories are very good! How much ever time updates take...You might never find such a wonderful collab ever! Nice you took inspiration from Shakespeare!

Thank you for those warm words Anjali! :))
Di? :O
*hugs* :)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

You both are obviously elder than me and I too have an elder sister so Di! :P

I was warm? :O

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Shivi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Aditi_28

Thank you for those warm words Anjali! :))
Di? :O
*hugs* :)

Arre Aditi! Promotion?!😃😆

Waise when Jhanvi di told me that you went to study I got inspired( and guilty). Doesn't matter if you didn't study. Poora molecular inheritance ka mcqs I solved. 😆

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Grishu30

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Beautiful character sketch...pls do send PMs..may b I vl off from this forum fr some days..Bt don't wanna miss it..

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Shivani

@jhanvi.55

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Aditi has already replied in detail, so here's a quick thank you from my end as well for all the lovely comments :)

@upasnasonic: thank you! 😃

@Mun: Thanks 🤗

@huda: will try to :D

@Rinu: Thanks for the praise! :D ☺️

@bhagya: your feedback is important! It is feedbacks only which motivates us to write and update soon :)

@Nuha: Thank You! 😊

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Bhagya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

@aditi thanks aditi :) I was giving this idea to u n shivi to comeup with something.
But this is also awesome good partnership 😃
You had exams na is it done? 12? 😛 just asking

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Shivani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: shailusri1983
Just saw your FF. Best of luck to this collaborative effort. But weekly updates are a bit too far. If possible try updating a bit sooner. But I know how difficult it is to manage your schedules in a college or university.
Drawing heavily from Shakespeare I see. But who doesn't love the master of drama. If you are planning to go along the lines of some of Shakespeare's famous plays, it would be awesome. I loved all the character sketches you gave. Do think of the works of Jane Austen, the Bronte sisters, George Eliot, and Thomas Hardy also if you are planning to take inspiration from the Classics of English literature.

If you are thinking in terms of a triangle between Viraj, Kabir, and Nisha at some point or the other in your FF, do read The Trumpet Major by Thomas Hardy. It is also the story of two brothers who are in love with the same girl. I remember crying after I read the novel. So all the very best for your creative attempt. Will eagerly look forward for it.

Thank you for the wishes! :)
I know weekly updates are late... but we'll see how it works out with our schedules, if we're able to manage we'll try and get the chapters up at shorter intervals than that... :)
We haven't planned it on the lines of any novel or story... we have thought of a basic plot and we're making up the rest on the go :D

I love Jane Auten's works, she is one of my favorites, haven't read much of the rest... will definitely read them when I can. I have Return of the Natives by Thomas Hardy on my shelf but haven't read it yet... will look for and read The Trumpet Major too :) Thanks for the references.

As for the love triangle... I'll quote Aditi, not sure about that :D

Thanks again :)

Edited by jhanvi.123 - 10 years ago

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Aditi_28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: NiRajCraZey
You both are obviously elder than me and I too have an elder sister so Di! :P
I was warm? :O

I used to think you are my age :P
You were very warm! :*

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Aditi_28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: _UptoNoGood_

Arre Aditi! Promotion?!😃😆

Waise when Jhanvi di told me that you went to study I got inspired( and guilty). Doesn't matter if you didn't study. Poora molecularinheritance ka mcqs I solved.😆

Thank you! :D
I feel guilty ab :P have to complete organic chem :P
Chalo, m going ;)
*waves* :D

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Shivani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#50

@nirajcrazey: Thank You so much anjali! :) :*

@shivi: haha! that was my intention in telling you Aditi had been off to study 😛
and yes her phone ki battery was down but that doesn't mean she didn't study 😃
Aditi can go ahead and shake her head again

Edited by jhanvi.123 - 10 years ago