Were we ever meant to be?: A Niraj FF(Last Part on Page 49) 29/03/2015

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Shailaja

@shailusri1983

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: twin-22
it was an awesome update...!!finally viraj opened up to nisha...loved the entire part...viraj's love as well as regret is very aptly described...haye..when will we get a viru like this in the original show...???to be honest the viraj of these past few days is pissing me a lot...so the ffs r nw d only way for me to feel the dynamic vsr...!!do continue asap

True. Honestly I feel that CVs have not given a proper thought on what to do with VSR. They brought in Kabir sent VSR to London. Later when all the Niraj fans like us protested, told us that he actually did not go to London but stayed back as he was still in love with Nisha. Kaira came back and now Nibhir's forced marriage is a reality. Hope they clearly decide what they are going to do and keep the characters true to their original sketch. A love story succeeds and becomes an epic one only when it progresses gradually and not drastically. Too many things and tracks should not be tried at a time. There will be too many loose ends and justice will not be done either to the tracks or the characters. First things first. I want an OMM BP on the show. Fed up of too much negativity. I don't have much hopes from the VSR of the show as of now. Just hope Kabir at least brings out the truth. He seems to be smart.

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Anjali

@clary

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

The most finely written piece I have ever read on india forums! I am speechless...Ab rulaogi kya! When r u updating next?
U have explained Viraj's feeling perfectly!

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Grishu30

@Grishu30

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Fabulous update dear...u HV described virajs feelings very well..awesome..pls continue soon..

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Shailaja

@shailusri1983

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: NiRajCraZey
The most finely written piece I have ever read on india forums! I am speechless...Ab rulaogi kya! When r u updating next?
U have explained Viraj's feeling perfectly!

Rulana toh padega! Woh love story hi kya joh hame hasaya nahi, hame rulaya nahi, hame love karne ke liye majboor kiya nahi, hame jeena sikhaya nahi! Niraj are very close to my heart so I've given my very best for this FF. Sorry but main apko rulanahi rahi hoon, yeh Niraj ka pyar aur VSR ke feelings hai joh tume rula rahi hain

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Shailaja

@shailusri1983

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: Grishu30
Fabulous update dear...u HV described virajs feelings very well..awesome..pls continue soon..

Thank you. Do keep reading and sending me your responses

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Rinet Eby

@Rinu08

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

No more words to say,this is wow 👏 such an amazing updates with such a fabulous words.Not only in our forum stories, even in NAUC I don't think they will come up with such an explanation about why Viraj's character is lonely and living in a shell of lonely like this way.

Shailusri hope I can call you like that, you are an amazing amazing writer and Hatts of to you.👏

Eagerly waiting for next one.

Edited by Rinu08 - 10 years ago

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smileeee

@smileeee

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

You are extra ordinary... This part is just mind blowing , very well written... Finally viraj's unspoken feelings thats awesome, Wish to see the same realization & confession in show too.. Really hope CV's dont disappoint us in this case.

You are Brillitant writer. Have a great future.. Thanks a ton for sharing this , you have made my day , i reading it again n again, truly admired by your way of expressing feelings...

:) :)

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Shailaja

@shailusri1983

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Rinu08
No more words to say,this is wow 👏 such an amazing updates with such a fabulous words.Not only in our forum stories, even in NAUC I don't think they will come up with such an explanation about why Viraj's character is lonely and living in a shell of lonely like this way.

Shailusri hope I can call you like that, you are an amazing amazing writer and Hatts of to you.👏

Eagerly waiting for next one.

Thanks. I'm Sailaja but you can call me Sailu. I'm a student of literature. I'm doing my doctoral research on Indian English Fiction. I love stories and unravelling the depths of the characters I read. My work is over. After my viva-voce exam I'll get my doctoral degree. Moreover Niraj remind me of myself and my husband. My husband is exactly like VSR.

Just like VSR my husband faced a lot of problems during his younger days while I was the pampered princess in my family. Ours was an arranged marriage but do not know when we started loving each other. Only thing there was no OMM or drama in our relationship. We have a sweet little son.

It was my husband who encouraged me to pursue my studies after marriage. He used to encourage me whenever I would falter trying to balance my responsibilities betwen my home and my dream. If I am on the verge of becoming Dr. Sailaja it would not have been possible without him. But now he is in the US for an assignment. This is his dream job. So of course I had to support him. But due to certain personal reasons I had to stay back in India along with my son. I've not seen him for months together. I miss him badly. So that's why Niraj's story is very dear to my heart. It reminds me of our love.

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Shailaja

@shailusri1983

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Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: smileee
You are extra ordinary... This part is just mind blowing , very well written... Finally viraj's unspoken feelings thats awesome, Wish to see the same realization & confession in show too.. Really hope CV's dont disappoint us in this case.
You are Brillitant writer. Have a great future.. Thanks a ton for sharing this , you have made my day , i reading it again n again, truly admired by your way of expressing feelings...

:) :)

It may not work exactly like that. Such long confessions work when you are writing and the other person is reading it. On television shorter and crisper confessions work. There have to be dialogues from Nisha's side also otherwise it might sound like another of those VSR bhashans or pep-talk.

I still remember how the guy who was playing the role of the hero in our college play had a horrible time spouting that two page long confession I wrote. I bet he would have given up acting after that. He also promised me that he would never ever confess to anybody in his life time. He also had another request to make. Never confess your love to a guy. He will go off to sleep before you are done with your five page confession. But this problem never came as mine was an arranged marriage.