Were we ever meant to be?: A Niraj FF(Last Part on Page 49) 29/03/2015 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesomely wrote...n viraj's dream was very nice
Next part me niraj alone at viraj's place...hmmm...interesting...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 5

"I'll order food for both of us from outside. I've seen your cooking skills" said Viraj. Nisha too nodded her head. She was too shaken for the morning to try another cooking experiment for the rest of the day. Such a situation never came in her house. Her mother was an excellent multi-tasker who did everything from her job to her cooking and managing the family and children perfectly. If she was out of town, Vimla Taiji or Umesh Bhaiyya would cook for her, Papa, Suku and Bunty. It never entered her wooly head that she might have to learn making at least a cup of coffee.

Viraj said, "The food will come in twenty minutes. Let's do something interesting before that."

Nisha started thinking about it, "Antakshari...dumb charades...or..."

Viraj suggested, "We'll play hide-and-seek. You remember that night when you got locked up with me when you came to say sorry and get your contract papers signed. Both of us were playing hide-and-seek unknown to each other. It was great fun. Shall we do that again?"

Nisha thought carefully to herself, "There's nothing very risky in this. It's just a game and that too a harmless and childish one. Viru too will not keep harping about his love in all the direct and indirect ways possible if he is occupied" before she said out aloud, "Ok. Let's play hide-and-seek. What are the rules of this game?"

Viraj said, "The person who is out will count from one to ten and the other person will hide before that. If you are found out before two minutes, you're out. If you're not caught you win. The loosing person has to drink a shot of Vodka as a punishment. Is that clear?"

Nisha was getting a bit wary, "The rest is Ok. We will take out the Vodka bit."

Viraj convinced her, "What will be the fun and thrill in the game if we take the only fun bit out? And don't you have confidence in yourself that you will not get out. This punishment is for the looser only."

Nisha suspiciously agreed but got carried away with the flow of things when the game began. She got out five times and he go out five times. By the time the food came, both of them were thinking why they were walking with their hands while they ought to walk with their legs. Viraj paid Rs 5000 instead of paying Rs 1000 which was their actual bill and apologized to the delivery boy that he forgot to give him his tips and gave Rs 1000 extra.

Both of them were searching for the chairs near the table to sit on but could not find any as they had thrown them here and there during their game. Finally they decided that the table was the best place to sit on. Somehow they completed that horror of a meal spilling food all over and feeding each other in between. Robotic Darji, if he had been there at that time, would have had a fit seeing all this. He would never think of taking the day off even in his dreams for fear of clearing the whole mess later on.

After this, Nisha decided that it was time for some entertainment. She decided that she would do a belly dance on that table. Viraj decided he would encourage her like the cheer girls in a twenty-twenty cricket match. The table rocked and rocked like a ship in the storm before it fell along with Viraj and Nisha.

"Tha...t was awe...some Ni...sha" Viraj spoke in a muzzled voice.

"I...m...t...ired. We...ll play some...thing else w...hich is ...not ...so...tire...some" Nisha suggested.

"One...word ...answers to one... word ques...tions" Viraj said.

"Done...Viru...done" Nisha agreed.

Viraj: Sing...ham

Nisha: Ter..ror

Nisha: Ka...bir

Viraj: Kabab...mein...haddi

Nisha: Bad...bad. But my..turn Kirti

Viraj: Clas...sy

Viraj: Darj...i

Nisha: Robo...tic

Nisha: Pa...pa

Viraj: Sasur...ji

Nisha: Wrong...wrong. Your turn ...to ask

Viraj: Vi...ru

Nisha: Lo...ve

Viraj: Right...right

Nisha: Wrong...wrong

Viraj: I said... ri...ght

Nisha: No...wro...ng

Both of them start fighting with each other and get tired. Nisha finally said, "Enou...gh. Anoth...er...game. We'll...go round ...this ta...ble and promise...the ...things we'll...do for ...each ...oth...er."

"Done...ta...ble ...phe...ras"

Viraj: I...go...first accord...ing to...the rules...of phe...ras and you...fo...llow me.

ONE

Viraj: I'll nev...er give Darji and ...staff a day ...off

TWO

Nisha: I'll nev...er make cof...fee for you in my life ins...tead I'll ask you to make for me.

THREE

Viraj: I'll nev...er take your NO se...riously.

FOUR

Nisha: I'll al...ways be pa...tient with you be...cause I know you are a tube...light in under...standing people ...and ...things.

FIVE

Viraj: I'll nev...er be an...gry with you ...even if you ...do ...some...thing fool...ish.

SIX

Nisha: I'll see to it that ...people... don't cheat you ...and take you ...for granted.

SEVEN

Viraj: I'll ne...ver stop ...loving you

Nisha hits him very angrily and says in between her sobs, "If you...loved me...so much...why did ...you break...up...why did...you patch up...Kaira...why Kabir ...and I...why everything ...not ...all right."

Viraj says, "You told...I'm tube..light...that's...why"

Both of them fall asleep beside each other holding each other's hands tightly like two innocent lovable cherubs.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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awww...so sweeet..!!!loved that hide and seek part...please update ASAP..if there is no inconvenience...just loving ur ff..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: twin-22

awww...so sweeet..!!!loved that hide and seek part...please update ASAP..if there is no inconvenience...just loving ur ff..

I've planned the whole story before itself. It may have ten more parts. I usually update once a day if I am not too busy. Happy that all my cousins love to read the updates. As far as this part is concerned I was not able to completely write what I visualized in my mind. But I hope that my cousins will make up for that by adding their imagination to this part while reading.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was so so mazedaar...i am laughing till now...thinking about it...
aur hide & seek and uske baad vodka ka asar...oh my god...hahaha...
n those phere around the table...it was ridiculous...my stomach is still aching ...i was laughing so loud...
update soon...eagerly waiting...


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shailusri1983


I've planned the whole story before itself. It may have ten more parts. I usually update once a day if I am not too busy. Happy that all my cousins love to read the updates. As far as this part is concerned I was not able to completely write what I visualized in my mind. But I hope that my cousins will make up for that by adding their imagination to this part while reading.

@last line;that we will surely do...cuz our imaginations about niraj r boundless...!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omg...awesome..really loved it dear...pls continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: achirasingh16

It was so so mazedaar...i am laughing till now...thinking about it...

aur hide & seek and uske baad vodka ka asar...oh my god...hahaha...
n those phere around the table...it was ridiculous...my stomach is still aching ...i was laughing so loud...
update soon...eagerly waiting...


I too was laughing while I was writing. My only fear was whether all my cousins would think this whole thing was too childish. I've always wanted to see Viraj and Nisha having a whale of a time doing silly things at least occasionally instead of all the serious things they keep doing and talking in the show. Somewhat like what nisha and her cousins do. Here's a character who has never had a proper and lively childhood. It would be nice if the serious VSR could discover the child in him with Nisha at least occasionally. After he will be part of the cousins gang when he and Nisha marry. So why not practice it before hand.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
This was sooo cute!! 🤗
And I totally agree with what you say about the kid in Viraj. He deserves a vent out, if and when he needs it.
Edited by Aditi_28 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aditi told me about your ff, and i'm glad she did! :) :)
Read all the updates in a go! This is really interesting and fun to read! 😃
Loving it ❤️
Update soon :) and all the best for your viva and all 👍🏼

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