Updated- 'Judge Me' Niraj ff-Part 13 Page 29 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome! Waiting for next part

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Oh my then plz update soon waiting for it! 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww..loved it..poor viraj..:(
Waiting 4 ur next update..:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ishqnme

By when are you going to update next.


soon love! soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank u soo much guys *bowdowns*
sukriya! sukriya!
Will b updating tomorrow stay tuned for some *wink* drama ! that too mihu style mae
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: titlimihu


Posted: 24 January 2015 at 1:53pm | IP Logged
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thank u soo much guys *bowdowns*
sukriya! sukriya!
Will b updating tomorrow stay tuned for some *wink* drama ! that too mihu style mae



Tomorrow kab Ayega???


Kab?

I am waiting and waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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waiting for your tomorrow😭😭
update soon😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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aaaw girls m so sorry! these practicals screwed me up
@10pm today! i have part written just hv to post
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Part 6 Saurav mentally patted his back "haila Saurab ,u never knew you could b this brave" Saurav thought. Viraj cocked his head in disbelief at his tears ,he wiped them away " Saurav!" He shouted "Get ready to b killed Saurav! Nishu tere pyaar mae mai shaheed ho jauga" Saurav cursed Nishu under his breathe " Saurav! I will not tolerate this rude behaviour" Viraj was high Talk about self pride. " Sir! I know I was bit rude" Saurav calmed himself "-1 for overacting Saurav _ " Saurav thought " Bit ? excuse me Mr.Saurav.You were QUITE rude! hum jantae hai ki aap jantae ki hum.. Hum ab ekk Alcoholic hai! Iska yeh matlab nahi hai ki aap hume sunna sakte hai.Rahi baat Miss.Nisha se related toh aap aj se befikarr rahe hum aapke aur unke beech mae kabhi nahi aaegae" Viraj fisted in anger. "Lagi lagi lagi aag lagi ! Huhaha Viraj sir dekhte hai aap kaise beech mae nahi aatae! mai mission" Milan" karwa k rahuga! phir chahae meri jaan q na chali jae " Saurav laughed at the thought. " Now what for are you laughing Saurav" Viraj saw him. "Nothing Sir! and sorry for the previous behaviour. wo Nishu ki ankho mae aansu !" Saurav spoke as his looked at Nishu, who was sitting on the scooter and gazing the sky "Hum samjhtae hai Saurav! pyaar aisa hi hota hau! agar Hum apki jagah toh hum bhi apni jaan laga dete unki ekk hassi aur khushi k liae" 'Agar hum Apki jagah hotae Saurav! Agar ' Viraj too looked at Nisha Both the guys were looking at her "god knows how much do I love her! Our silly fights our bunks our selfless defence mechanism for each other! Nishu i love u and will do anything for u and ur proudy love ! Yeh Viru is difficult to b budged from his self pride and world! but i will" Saurav smiled thinking this. "Miss.nisha! heaven knows how much do i love u now!I rejected u ! well i deserve a kick on my arse for that but I was confused that time in Virtual love and real love! Arthi was my mindset of love but u were the real mean of love in my life. I will do anything for your happiness! jo khusiyaan hum apko na de pae. " Viraj controlled his tears. how contradictory life can be! At same time someone laughs and someone cries over the same thing! " Night Sir" Saurav spoke seeing Viraj watching Nishu. "GoodNight " Viraj marched in his penthouse. Viraj entered his penthouse . he opened the door and suddenly someone jumped in front of him "Aap toh hume darra hi di Aman" He kept his hand on his chest "I could have just died of the heartattack " Viraj lowered his breathe. " That was so f**king funny bhai! look at ur horror stricken face" Aman continued laughing " oh yeah" Viraj rolled his eyes and sat on couch Aman- Bhai suniyae Viraj-Ji sunaiae Aman punched him for copying her. "ooowww" Viraj laughed. "Kal! subha sangeet hai." Aman said to Viraj "Aur hum ladies sangeet mae kya tabla bajegae" Viraj made a poker face. "Arrey bhai! Ladies Sangeet ni hai! its general one" Aman continued speaking and blackmailing Viraj , "Agar aap time pe nahi pauchae bhai! toh tussi jandae ho mai ki kara gi" Aman said while opening the door. "Ji Aman hum waqt pe pauch jaegae" Viraj bowed down . "Aur ha bhai! pls koi boring sa suit mat pehen aana -_- " Aman said to before existing the penthouse. Viraj sat on the couch . thinking about his life when his i-phone blinked "huh :-/ itne raat gae humne kon yaad karega?" Viraj thought as he checked it. "Viraj! think about the Italy offer once agaim you ass" - Nishesh Viraj sighed ! Nishesh his friend had been so adment these days to call him to Itlay ! "bugger off Nish! not in a good mood plus LA is my jaan"- Viraj Viraj rolled up on the couch.And he didnt knewwhen the queens of night engulfed him in her embrace. NEXT DAY AT LA Nisha was lazily walking in the academy to the changing room. She rubbed her eyes to get a more clearer view of the surroundings. "Bola tha Jawalu aur uss fashion queen kirti se ki mat karo 1 bajae k baad gappae ! par nahi -_- koi meri sunnae tab toh" the guard looked at Nishu suspiciously. " Lagta aaj Nisha madam phir se derr raat tak jaagi hai! aaj toh Ram bharosae h office" Guard crossed his heart. Nishu was ranting nonchantly . She entered the changing room. "I cant believe it!" Nishu laughed at herself . "I look so horrible" Nishu was about to pull her top up when she heard someone
"Miss Nisha!" Viraj uttered in horror.
" Viraaajjj Sir" Nishu immediately pulled her top down thus covering her midriff .. "Aap ladies changing mae kya kar rahe hai?" Nishu pulled him in utter disgust.
"Ladies ? ohhh my goodness Miss Nisha? are u drunk?" Viraj smelled Nishu .
"Probably No! are you ?" Viraj was about to speak when Nishu spoke "Mai bas Neend mae hu! plus yeh ladies changing hu "
"Tabhi ! hum sochae! aur apki general knowledge k liae yeh Mens changing room hai" Viraj laughed at Nisha's silliness
Nisha-"oh my fuc"
Viraj- Miss Nisha! language.
Just then they heard some commotion on the door. Nishu pulled Viraj in the nearest closet.
"a aap aap kya kar" Viraj couldn't speak anymore as Nisha had covered his mouth with her hands Viraj and his toughness was melting.
"Chup rahiae ! kisi ne mujhe yaha dekh lia toh kitni bezzati ho jaegi !"
Nishu pulled him more close thus covering the small distance amongst them.
Viraj now had his face in the crook of Nishu's neck. he breathed ! Nishu felt his uneven breathe . She was feeling uncomfortable! until Viraj scooped her tiny hands in his large ones.
"Its ok to b not ok Miss Nisha" Viraj whispered in her ears.
"I am gonna regret this !" Nishu said
"Huh what?" Viraj titled his head in confusion.
" This" Nishu said as she grabbed Viraj by his shoulder and climbed on his feets. All thanks to Viraj's shoes Allen Solly ! it didnt hurt Viraj .
"This" Nisha pulled his tshrt and pulled his head down

"Nisha!" Viraj finally gave in He thrusted her against the closest wall and sealed her lips with his. Nishu could taste his black coffee . he licked her lower lip nibbing it. Meanwhile Nishu's hand ruffled Viraj's hairs. And she had them soon inside his tshrt. Viraj lifted her up a little to match his pace. Nishu bitted his lips to ask for permission to invade further Viraj could have jumped off the building at this moment if nisgu asked him he leaned in and open in yes! soon both of them were oozing with passion. their tounges were marking new solaces. Yes! that's what a proper French kiss is .
When the fire ignites
the passion burns
the intentions dwell
the romance embraces
but nothing goes on alive when the battles of mind they fight -
Mihu (lol )
Nishu pushed Viraj after the * regret kiss*
"Saurav ?' Viraj hung his head in shame he had promised him Saurav things. "Sir! Aaj se we are strangers " Nishu said finally finding words to speak
"Par hum rozz milegae " Viraj slumped down on the floor.
"ha par anjaano ki tarah" Nishu walked out .
"Miss Nisha! Saurav k sath ghar chalae jaaeiae ! sangeet mae derr na ho" Viraj spoke aa Nisha closed the door at his face
"y is it so hard to stay away from u Viru " Nishu thought as Saurav saw him outside the mens changing room
"tu yaha bhi ghuss gayi" Saurav gaped
"I was in urgent need to pee! ladies wala was full so went in there" Nishu bored a expression of Numbness
"Haila! how could b nisu " Saurav spoke in dadi's accent
" y cant a girl in this country even pee when she wants to pee chuhae" Nishu spanked saurav.
"okay okay okay!" Saurav who saw Viraj coming out the changing room locked his arms with Nishu's. "Hum kya 10th grade k gf bf jo haath mae haath daal k ghumae gae " Nishu said
"Nishu faltu bakwass mat kar chal sangeet mae dance jaregae Sath Sath" Saurav shouted loud enough for Viraj to hear
"Why cant i stay from u miss.nisha y? "
Viraj sighed as Daadji handed him over his ironed clothes.

precap: what happens when Nisha dances on 'tera naam japti phiran'. Saurav to propose!..




guys m chooo solly if this part wasn't upto the level n boring. i wrote it while my psychology class seminar! pls do comment
Edited by titlimihu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res
and update the heading to part 6 updated pg 10! Everyone must have been waiting for the update!
Edited by TasmiaFay - 10 years ago

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