Updated- 'Judge Me' Niraj ff-Part 13 Page 29

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Guys. It is my first attempt on writing for India forum
*shy smile*
hope u ppl will like it

"Judge me!"
"Nishu!I warn u " Saurav tried snatching the mobile from Nisha's hands
"caught ya !" Nishu winked at him.
the cousins had successfully exposed Sheiks and true colours to Viraj.
Since Nisha didn't get any reply from Viraj,she thought it was better for her and her career to stay from the perfectly perfect Viraj Sir.
Viraj too had shut himself. "The miseries and sorrows are meant to be sufficed alone" He exclaimed to himself before gulping down the fire whiskey in one shot. He had been in regular drinking these days. If only anyone could mark a difference.

Viraj flopped the shutters of his office window. He saw Nisha winking at Saurav.
"she winked?.That's not what she does quite often" He asked himself before quietly sneaking in the staff's working area. Viraj had used all his life's savings to provide extension to Lakshya 'drowning' academy until they got sponsorship from sources.
"Saurav! Aaawww" Nishu zoomed the picture and said
"Dekh! Nishu tu jayda kar rahi hai. " Saurav was feeling shy now.
"OK! for this picture,you do deserve a *Teddy hug* " Nishu jumped on Saurav before any information.
" bloody hell" Saurav and She fell on floor. Saurav snorted and held her by waist.
"I love" Nishu kissed his nosed

"Can we have PDA's out of my academy pls" Nishu froze on hearing a deep sexy voice from behind .
Saurav opened his mouth but was signalled by Nishu to stop. This eye to eye didn't go unnoticed by Viraj.
"OK! Sir" Nishu harshly replied
" okay ! miss.nisha" Viraj said and left
"f**k u Viraj u aren't jealous for Christ's sake" he mentally slapped himself for such a thought.

"Nisha! let's get married na!" Viraj suddenly heard both of them talking in whispers when he was trolling in parking . He waited for Saurav to leave.
Alcohol controlled Viraj now.

Nishu felt odd while walking in parking .She still loved that Viraj that Viraj-Sodding-Singh-Rathore.
She was singing to herself
"Dil sambhal jaa jaraa
phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu..."
until she felt herself being pulled by someone


"Nisha" Viraj breathed in Nisha's hair.
"Sir ! u??" Nisha felt an unusual warmth in his tight embrace in spite of the tight grip.
"Saurav ! U love him" He traced her ear lobe.
"yes!" Nisha knew what she was saying.

until
She felt Viraj's burning lips on hers.
she pushed him away
"u reek of alcohol" she fisted her hands and punched him lightly
" don't I reek of loneliness and frustration ! Don't I reek of unseen worries and sorrows. Don't I miss Nisha! judge me cause I drink ! judge me cause I behave perfect! for I was left saying "u aren't worth it" ! OK judge me cause I don't have body language! a guy who survived a paraplegia! I reek of alcohol ! I reek of it " He came forward but Turned back.

no proof reading . if u guys r interested pls comment I will continue the ss.
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Good start dear..
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Nice start...its something different...do continue the storyline soon...
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😳 thank you girls.
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Superb start dear..pls continue soon...
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jealous viraj ..would love to read more.
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Awesome! 👏 please continue :)
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wow sth different to read. please do continue with the story.
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