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Posted: 10 years ago
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mind blowing update...nisha's antics were just awesome... i m eagerly waiting to read next part... plzzz continue ASAP and if possible plzzz PM me.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank u ! and thank sumran ❤️ and others i was so nervous regarding this chapter! ty ty ty *flying kiss to each one*
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[I] : Part 7.
Precap: Viraj- Nisha kiss!
Sangeet ceremony in Gangwaal house.

"Chotae hukum!" Daadji said as he entered the penthouse.
Viraj exhaled a long breathe.
Not in ages had he tried this outfit.

" A Prince too becomes nervous " Viraj quoted to himself.
"Chotae hukum! U look fabulous" Daadi saw the kid he had pampered ,now as a Full grown up man! 32 wasnt that young figure but Viraj still maintained the glam he had in his early twenties. In sort the kid Viraj was now Drool worth manly Viraj.

"Sukriya! Daadji. Humari gaadi aur gifts taiyaar hai na?" Viraj said while ascending down the staircase.
"Ji" Daadji lead him to the parking.

Viraj within time was speeding his honda city towards The Gangvaal house.
He noticed his sandals! the same ond he had bought
* flashback*
"Sir I am telling u! This sandal looks so good" Nisha pouted in annoyance.It had been 4 hours since Viraj-Nisha were on shopping spree for the LA function.
" Miss Nisha how about this *adidas* loafers?" Viraj held both the loafers in his hands.
"they look more good in ur hand then ur feets sir" Nisha felt like hitting Viraj a square on his face.
Mens and their shopping! _ _

"Okay Viraj sir! We are buying this Black sandals!" Nisha grabbed Viraj to the counter.
"No we arent" Viraj crossed his arms
"We are" Nisha hugged those sandals ,like those were the most beautiful things in this world.

"Aha" An old lady said from behind.
Both Nisha and Viraj turned to her
"God bless u!" The lady showered the blessing wohi ekdum free of cost
"for??" Both of them shouted jointly
" Ur couple is so cute ! though this cutie looks more than ur age still u make sucha b'ful couple! the way u both were fighting" lady sniffed!
"Inko shayad apne din yaad a gae miss Nisha" Viraj giggled
"Mam! we aren't a couple" Viraj took the Lady to the counter.
"Miss Nisha! The sandals that declared us a couple! I guess we will buy it" Viraj said as Nisha focused on her real juice. turning a brighter shade of red !

*flashback ends*

Nisha sat in the washroom ,thinking about the span of cycles that took place within past few months.
Nisha wiped the mist that was on the mirror.

"I am beautiful! If I love will love myself the world will do the same.
God help those who help themselves" Nisha said to herself loud and clear.
Viraj sir told her to do this whenever she felt discontent about herself.
Who knew the both will fall in love? Who knew feelings would take a U-turn in such a way?
Now both Viraj and Nisha could proudly say "Life's unpredictable".

Nisha stepped out of the washroom.

"Have u seen my Nishu somewhere?" Saurav ,cocked his eyebrow in suspension.
" Stfu! I am Nishu ur Nishu" Nishu was surprised by this Saurav.
"Ohmygod! Who are u and what have u done to my Nishu" Saurav said while taking a full look of Nishu.
Saurav couldn't believe his eyes. Nishu stood in front of him in a Royal blue and peacock green contrast Angrakha suite.
Nishu had fully dressed up like a girl.
Nishu hugged Saurav.
"Hey babiness! Its ok u look beautiful believe me! " Saurav hugged her back.
"Saurav ! Mujhe iss zindagi se bhut darr lagta hai" Nishu said still tugging his cream colured shirt. Nothing in this world is more comforting than a best friend's embrace
"Darr aur Nishu ! Nishu zindagi se sab darrtae hai. " Saurav took her to the terrace.
" Mai zindagi se jayda kal se darrti hu . Pata Nahi kal kya leke aaega mere liae" Nishu sniffed.
"Darrtae hum sab hai Nishu kal se! Par iska yeh matlab nahi hai hum jeena chhod de? Kal jo hoga vo hoga tu aaj q senti ho rahi hai" Saurav held her hand.
He had promised himself to b there if at her worse.


Meanwhile downstairs.
Viraj took a entry in the GH.
"Arrey Viraj ji aaiaegae. Arey Lakshmi bahu! Aman ko bata do ki unkae bhai aa gae hai" Dadaji welcomed Viraj with a warm heart.

"He looks a sex god today!" Kirti said as low as possible to b audible
" How blah Kirti! Geeezz" jawla felt odd at the mention of 'sex '
"I totally agree!" Dolly winked at kirti.
"He's looking so dopoer today!" Dollu further said
"Dapper Dolly" Umesh corrected Her English winglish sister.

Kirti and Dolly again looked at Viraj .
Viraj wore a cream pathaan kurta paijama! And too glam it up he wore a blue half cut jacket.
"Kirti ? " Viraj waved his hands in front of her
"Yes Sir" Kirti replied
" I am Universal Sir?" Viraj chuckled.
"No Sir! I mean sir" Kirti was out breathe by this sudden confrontation.
" Viraj! Call me by my name" Viraj said
"Ok sir! Oops Viraj" Kirti laughed.
"Viraj beta! Aa tu uparr ja ! Aman thara intezaar kar rahi hogi chhatt par!aur sangeet fancation vi wahi per hoga" Daadi said as she put "A kala tika " on Viraj's head.
"Daadi ? Yeh kis liae tha?" Viraj asked.
"Tu kitna acha lag raha hai" Daadji said as she went towards her room.


Viraj laughed. He was so nervous in this whole indian dress. He could hear voices fron the stairs.
As soon as he entred he saw Saurav and Nisha hugging.

" Hum ab ajnabi hai ! Behave Viraj" Viraj talked to himself.
He coughed to grab thier attention.

" Hi sir! Omg u look so dashing today" Saurav said as he stretched out his hand .
"Thank u Saurav! Hope I didnt disturb u peeps" Viraj held Saurav's hand in a firm handshake.

"Viraj bhai ! U look so sexy today" Aman came in and so did all the cousins.
" Viraj sir toh paida hi hott huae tae Aman bhabhi" Sukku said to Aman & everyone laughed along .
Except one ! She never in her wildest dream had thought this
*Viraj sir in kurta paijama! *.
Soon the ceremony had started. Everyone was busy was singing. From the "aae meri zohra zabi " to "sheela ki jawani" nothing was being left.
Viraj was busy stealing glances of Nisha!
The way the suite clinched to her body made Viraj go all gaga!
Viraj saw how Nishu got irritated when the bangels disturbed her in jerking her hands.
How she in every five seconds adjusted her dupatta and how her suite matched his jacket.
.Ramesh was watching Viraj . Nothing goes unnoticed by Nisha's father.
"Usse ghoorna band karogae?" Lakshi said to him
"Ha! Par lakshmi agar issne humari beti ko itta sa bhi dhukh dia toh mai apna santulann khoo baithuga" Ramesh glared in Viraj's direction.
"Uffo Ramesh! Chalo Kal k barae mae babuji ko baat karni hai"
Lakshi dragged Ramesh from within metre of range of Viraj.
"Viraj ! Aap bhi gana gaiae" Kirti said in between
"Hum aur gana?" Viraj was caught off guard.
"I sound like a frog while singing" Virah snorted.
"Sir! I think u match the voice of mahendra kapoor" Umesh said
"Ji jija!" Viraj said to Umesh.

"Viraj sir ganaa! " the cousins started chanting in unison.

"Sir pls! Sab itna bol
rahe h toh"Nisha spoke in a low voice
Viraj stood up
"but I dont know a new song!" He spoke
"Bhai! purana gana bhi chalega!" Aman linked her arms in his and said
"Humra gana pura atmosphere melancholic kar sakta"
Viraj said!
"Are u singing or should i throw u down the terrac ?" Said Dadaji as he entred with other older warriors of house.
"Ji dadaji!" Viraj took the guitar from Saurav's hand
changing the cords to G ,he started


Chalo Ek Baar Phir Se, Ajnabi Ban Jaye Ham Dono
Chalo ekk baar phir se...

Viraj stared at Nisha!

Na Main Tumse Koi Ummeed Rakhoon
Dilnavaazi Ki
Na Tum Meri Taraf Dekho Galat Andaaz
Nazaron Se
Na Mere Dil Ki Dhadkan Ladkhadaaye Meri
Baaton Mein
Na Zaahir Ho Tumhaari Kashm-kash Ka Raaz
Nazaron Se
Chalo Ek Baar Phir Se..

Nisha was trying hard to hold back her tears.Saurav understood and cursed Viraj for hurting himself and Nisha as well. to say Saurav was angry,was an understatement. Saurav held Nisha's hand squeezing it tight.

Tumhen Bhi Koi Uljhan Rokti Hai Peshkadmi
Se
Mujhe Bhi Log Kehte Hain, Ki Yeh Jalve
Paraaye Hain
Mere Hamraah Bhi Rusvaaiyaan Hain Mere
Maajhi Ki

Tumhaare Saath Bhi Guzri Hui Raaton Ke
Saaye Hain
Chalo Ek Baar Phir Se..

Viraj pierced his finger in the cords. thus tearing his finger enamels.
What in name of good lord was wrong !
"The fauly in our stars brutus the fault in my stars" Viraj thought

Taarruf (aadat) Rog Ho Jaaye To Usko Bhoolnaa
Behtar
Taalluk (Rishta) Bojh Ban Jaaye To Usko Todnaa
Achchha
Voh Afsaana Jise Anjaam Tak Laana Na Ho
Mumkin
Use Ek Khoobsoorat Mod Dekar Chhodna
Achchha
Chalo Ek Baar Phir Se..
By the time he ended Every member of the family looked at him with an expression of aaaww on thier faces.
" Excuse me!"Viraj said as he stood up and went inside .


"Chorra!" Viraj turned on hearing.
He saw daadji ruffling his hairs as he sat on the stairs.
Withoit even a single thought Viraj hugged Daadji.
"Chorra marae ko na jana kabse yeh aabhass ho gaya tha ki tharae ko koi baat andar hi andarr khaae ja rahi h" Daadji said as Viraj cried hugging her.
"Daadi! Hum logo ko aur kab tak khootae rahegae" Viraj said in between his sobs.
Daadi lifted his face and wiped his tears.
"Har mara raam ji! mai hu na tharae pass" she smoothed his face
"Jae rahi dusri baat kisi chorri ki! toh Viraj beta
'waqt se pehlae aur kismat se jayada kabhi kisi ko kuch na milta h' Samjhae" Daadi adjusted his hairs.
"Jo daadji! sukriya" Viraj said.
"lo nishu aa gayi! bhai dhyaan rakh apne Viraj sir ka Nishu" Daadji winked at Nishu and left.
Nishu grabbed Viraj's hand and looked at it
Viraj withdrew his hand.
Nishu again held it. Viraj again withdrew it.
This time Nishu held his wounded hand with all force.
"Wait" Nishu dripped his hand in an mug of water.
"ow ow ow" Viraj yelped in anticipation.
"Thank u" he said as Nishu banged his hand.

"Sir! can u take us to club?" Nisha said while bitting her lower lip.
"hmmm! what" Viraj looked up to see all cousins folding thier hands and saying pls
"Kaun se club jana chahiae aap loog? hum dadaji se baat karte k ate h" Viraj smiled.



phew ! long update yuhuu!
guys how was it? tell me if i dragg story !
comments pls /I]
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Viraj in kurta n cut jacket would look like this
link- https://m.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=336656009839808&id=326620524176690&set=pb.326620524176690.-2207520000.1422725675.
Edited by titlimihu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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speechless 👏
Edited by rocking_bhawna - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fabulous!!!!!
So next update is on 2nd Jan right?

I cannot wait to read more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Maintain an Index in the first page Niharika / Mihika :P
Though I can access one easily here
Creative Pieces and Works of the Cousins on the NAUC IF - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4292868
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Going to a club huh? I can sense something naughty on your mind?
Waiting for the next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: titlimihu

Part 6

Saurav mentally patted his back "haila Saurab, I never knew you could be this brave" Saurav thought. Viraj cocked his head in disbelief at his tears, he wiped them away " Saurav!" He shouted.

"Get ready to be killed Saurav! Nishu tere pyaar mein main shaheed ho jaunga" Saurav cursed Nishu under his breathe " Saurav! I will not tolerate this rude behaviour" Viraj was high Talk about self pride. " Sir! I know I was bit rude" Saurav calmed himself "1 for overacting Saurav " Saurav thought.

" Bit ? excuse me Mr.Saurav. You were QUITE rude! hum jante hai ki aap jante ki hum.. Hum ab ekk Alcoholic hai! Iska yeh matlab nahi hai ki aap hume suna sakte hai. Rahi baat Miss.Nisha se related toh aap aj se befikarr rahe hum aapke aur unke beech mein kabhi nahi aenge" Viraj fisted in anger.

"Lagi lagi lagi aag lagi ! Huhaha Viraj sir dekhte hai aap kaise beech mae nahi aatae! Main mission 'Milan' karwa ke rahuga! phir chahe meri jaan hi kyu na chali jaye " Saurav laughed at the thought.
"Now wha are you laughing for Saurav" Viraj saw him. "Nothing Sir! and sorry for the previous behaviour. Wo Nishu ki ankho mein aansu..." Saurav spoke as his looked at Nishu, who was sitting on the scooter and gazing at the sky.

"Hum samjhte hai Saurav! Pyaar aisa hi hota hai! Agar Hum apki jagah hote toh hum bhi apni jaan laga dete unki ekk hassi aur khushi k liye" 'Agar hum Apki jagah hote Saurav! Agar '

Viraj too looked at Nisha. Both the guys were looking at her "God knows how much do I love her! Our silly fights our bunks our selfless defense mechanism for each other! Nishu I love u and will do anything for u and ur proudy love! Aur yeh Viru, difficult to b budge from his self pride and world! but i will" Saurav smiled thinking this.

"Miss Nisha! heaven knows how much do i love u now!I rejected u ! well i deserve a kick on my ass for that but I was confused that time in Virtual love and real love! Arthi was my mindset of love but u were the real love in my life. I will do anything for your happiness! Jo khushiyaan hum apko na de paye. " Viraj controlled his tears.

How contradictory life can be! At same time someone laughs and someone cries over the same thing! " Night Sir" Saurav spoke seeing Viraj watching Nishu. "GoodNight " Viraj marched in his penthouse. Viraj entered his penthouse. He opened the door and suddenly someone jumped in front of him "Aapne toh hume daraa hi diya Aman"

He kept his hand on his chest "I could have just died of the heartattack " Viraj lowered his breathe. "That was so f**king funny bhai! look at ur horror stricken face" Aman continued laughing " oh yeah" Viraj rolled his eyes and sat on couch

Aman "Bhai suniyae" Viraj : "Ji sunaiye" Aman punched him for copying her.
"ooowww" Viraj laughed. "Kal! subha sangeet hai." Aman said to Viraj

"Aur hum ladies sangeet mein kya tabla bajaenge" Viraj made a poker face. "Arrey bhai! Ladies Sangeet nahii hai! it is a general one" Aman continued speaking and blackmailing Viraj , "Agar aap time pe nahi pauchae bhai! toh tussi jande ho main ki karangi" Aman said while opening the door. "Ji Aman hum waqt pe pahuch janege" Viraj bowed down.
"Aur ha bhai! pls koi boring sa suit mat pehen ke aana -_- " Aman said to before exiting the penthouse.

Viraj sat on the couch, thinking about his life when his i-phone blinked "huh :-/ itne raat gae humne kon yaad karega?" Viraj thought as he checked it. "Viraj! think about the Italy offer once agaim you ass" - Nishesh Viraj sighed ! Nishesh his friend had been so adment these days to call him to Itlay ! "bugger off Nish! not in a good mood plus LA is my jaan"- Viraj.
Viraj rolled up on the couch. And did not know when the queens of night engulfed him in her embrace.

NEXT DAY AT LA:
Nisha was lazily walking in the academy towards the changing room. She rubbed her eyes to get a more clearer view of the surroundings.
"Bola tha Jawalu aur uss fashion queen Kirti se ki mat karo 1 baje ke baad gappe ! par nahi -_- koi meri suney tab na"

The guard looked at Nishu suspiciously. " Lagta hai aaj Nisha madam phir se der raat tak jaagi hai! Aaj toh Ram bharose hai office" Guard crossed his heart.

Nishu was ranting nonchantly . She entered the changing room. "I cant believe it!" Nishu laughed at herself. "I look so horrible" Nishu was about to pull her top up when she heard someone-
"Miss Nisha!" Viraj uttered in horror.

" Viraaajjj Sir" Nishu immediately pulled her top down thus covering her midcalf .. "Aap ladies changing mein kya kar rahi hai?" - Nishu pulled at him in utter disgust.

"Ladies ? ohhh my goodness Miss Nisha? are u drunk?" Viraj smelled Nishu
"Probably No! are you ?" Viraj was about to speak when Nishu spoke "Main bas Neend mein hu! plus yeh ladies changing hai "

"Tabhi ! hum soche! aur apki general knowledge ke liye bata dein yeh Men's changing room hai" Viraj laughed at Nisha's silliness

Nisha-"oh my fuc"
Viraj- Miss Nisha! language.

Just then they heard some commotion at the door. Nishu pulled Viraj in the nearest closet.
"AAA aap aap kya kar..." Viraj couldn't speak anymore as Nisha had covered his mouth with her hands Viraj and his toughness was melting.
"Chup rahiye ! kisi ne mujhe yaha dekh liya toh kitni bezzati ho jayegi!"

Nishu pulled him more close thus covering the small distance between them.
Viraj now had his face in the crook of Nishu's neck. He breathed ! Nishu felt his uneven breathe.
She was feeling uncomfortable! Until Viraj scooped her tiny hands in his large ones.
"Its ok to be not ok Miss Nisha" Viraj whispered in her ears.

"I am gonna regret this !" Nishu said
"Huh what?" Viraj tilted his head in confusion.
" This" Nishu said as she grabbed Viraj by his shoulder and climbed on his feet. All thanks to Viraj's shoes Allen Solly ! it didnt hurt Viraj .
"This" Nisha pulled his Tshirt and pulled his head down

"Nisha!" Viraj finally gave in He thrusted her against the closest wall and sealed her lips with his. Nishu could taste his black coffee. He licked her lower lip nibbing it. Meanwhile Nishu's hand ruffled Viraj's hairs. And she had them soon inside his Tshirt.

Viraj lifted her up a little to match his pace. Nishu bit his lips to ask for permission to invade further...

Viraj could have jumped off the building at this moment if Nishu asked him he leaned in and open in a yes!

Soon both of them were oozing with passion. their tounges were marking new solaces. Yes! that's what a proper French kiss is .
When the fire ignites
the passion burns
the intentions dwell
the romance embraces
but nothing goes on alive when the battles of mind they fight -
Mihu (lol)


Nishu pushed Viraj after the * regret kiss*

"Saurav ?' Viraj hung his head in shame he had promised him Saurav things.
"Sir! Aaj se we are strangers " Nishu said finally finding words to speak.
"Par hum roz milenge " Viraj slumped down on the floor.
"haa par anjaano ki tarah" Nishu walked out .
"Miss Nisha! Saurav ke saathh ghar chale jaayie ! sangeet mein der na ho jaye" Viraj spoke as Nisha closed the door at his face

"Why is it so hard to stay away from u Viru" Nishu thought as Saurav saw him outside the Men's changing room. "tu yaha bhi ghuss gayi" Saurav gaped.

"I was in urgent need to pee! ladies wala was full so went in there" Nishu bored a expression of Numbness. "Haila! how could b nisu " Saurav spoke in dadi's accent.

" Why? cant a girl in this country even pee when she wants to pee choohe" Nishu spanked saurav. "okay okay okay!" Saurav who saw Viraj coming out the changing room locked his arms with Nishu's.

"Hum kya 10th grade ke GF-BF hai jo haathh mein haathh daal ke ghumenge ge " Nishu said
"Nishu faltu bakwaas mat kar chal sangeet mein dance karenge SAATHH SAATHH" Saurav shouted loud enough for Viraj to hear.

"Why cant i stay from u Miss Nisha? y? "
Viraj sighed as Daadji handed him over his ironed clothes.

precap: what happens when Nisha dances on 'tera naam japti phiran'. Saurav to propose!..


guys m chooo solly if this part wasn't upto the level n boring. i wrote it while my psychology class seminar! pls do comment


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Edited by ishqnme - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awe it was sweet update
viru singing a song
now I can imagine nishu in girly attires😉
oh my my club 😲
just can't wait to see what happens next
very interesting👍🏼
do continue soonishhh
will eagerly wait for the next update

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