Updated- 'Judge Me' Niraj ff-Part 13 Page 29 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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waiting for nxt update plz continued soon nice one!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
thank u guys for ur lovely support.
let the love coming. *kisses hugs*
PS : m big taher n vibhu fan bear me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 3
Viraj was doing some paper work in his office. Everything laid scattered here and there. "And I can't get a f**king file " he slammed the paper weight on the table.
"Chotae hukum!" Daadji peeped in from the door! He was concerned for the kid he saw growing up in front of his eyes.
" Arrey daadji aap!" Viraj immediately faked a smile. "Chotae hukum! Aap theek toh haii!" Daadji asked care dripping from his voice.
"Daadji! Baithiae!" Viraj made daadji sit on the chair. "Hume kya hoga!" He smiled again. "Chotae hukum! Chota muh badi baat hum aapko tab se jantae hai jab se aap bhi khud na jantae tae! "Daadji said slowly.
" Daadji! Hum pyaar karte tae unse. Humne phir uss insaan ko khoo dia jinse hum pyaar karte tae!' Viraj stood up and walked around.
" Apne aap ko samay de. " Daadji wanted Viraj to come out this battle of life with flying colours without any help from him.mean ! but SOme battles are better fought alone.

"Hum yeh bhi nahi jantae ki pyaar asall mae hota kya haii"Viraj mocked himself and opened the window facing the road.

Nisha didn't wanted to go home. She was sure Viraj won't the office early! She decided to keep an eye on him.
"Hum kya kar rahe haii!" Saurav brought them coffee from the nearby stall.
"Time pass" Nishu giggled.
"Viru pe nazar" Saurav sipped the coffee.
"Yaar! Ha wohi sahi . He's into." Nishu stopped midway of sentence.
" He's into what!" Saurav had Viraj as his idol too. He also didn't wanted him to lose a single battle of his life.
"Bolaegi kya muhurat nikalwau!" Saurav smacked her.
"He drinks" Nishu said
"Milk! Chocolate shake! Apple juice ! Kya peeta hai bae vo!" Saurav made a *I_don't_ know_what_u_are_speaking* face
"Alcohol! He is an alcoholic now!" Nisha explained him the kiss scenario.

"W*F" Saurav said "don't joke nishu " Saurav said.
"Yes! And after that kiss I .I told him that I love u " Saurav coughed loud.
Nishu immediately paced his back.rubbing slowly his.
Saurav said in between "tabhi Viraj sir gives me that looks when I am around u " Saurav said
"What u mean Saurav k bacchae"
"Arey ! He loves u. He really does its just that in the pace of time things went wrong. Shekhar and buaji back stabbed him. He was broken and holy effing confused"Saurav kept his head on Nishu's shoulder.
"Pata nahi -_-" Nishu was tired of thinking.
She was going to say to Saurav to stop taking support of her shoulder before people misinterpreted it.
"Ab hum couple haii! Bhul Gyi u loves me nishus" Saurav hugged him.
"BC! Mauka ka pura faeda utha"Nishu punched him lightly.


" Oh! Saurav Miss.Nisha spending quality time " Viraj said as he came.
"Sir ghar Jana ka Mann nahi tha" Saurav spoke before nishu could.
Saurav knew he had to a cupid ad mist them.

"Oww' Viraj had an eye lock with Nishu.

"Nishu!Nishu!Nishu" Saurav jerked her.
"Bol" Nishu said calmly.
"U sit here only! I will come in few mins. I have something for u " with that saurav sneaked out .
Leaving the loners alone.

" U happy miss.nisha?" Viraj said sitting besides nishu on her vespa .
"Yes." Nishu didn't wanted to fall for him again.
Distance was necessary for them according to her.
Until the lights of the area was out& Darkness prevailed. Nisha who until now was running away from Viraj. Held him tight.
"Its OK miss .nisha" Viraj circled an arm around her.
"Okay?" He repeated.
" Okay!" She answered.



Okay! Guys I really miss some light Nisha-Saurav scenes hence hisab yaha chuka lia.Criticism is welcomed.
Do comment. And let me know
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Nice update...so saurav is going to play cupid ...do continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Nice update
so Saurav is trying to bring them together😃
And Viraj jealous😆
continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
mind blowing update...plzz continue ASAP
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Awww so sweet
Viru is jealous😳
Very cutie , sweetie update
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guys thank you for such a sweet response. Though Not much comments but still Satisfying. So here goes the next part.

Part 4
Precap : Viraj Nishu and blackout in area.

"Are u OK?" Viraj asked in concern while adjusting himself on the bench.
" How many times do I need to assure you Sir" Nishu swiftly removed his hand from her shoulder.
" No! Just that I thought you . You were afraid of darkness I guess" Viraj said looking around. The academy looked like some English east India company's headquarters.
"Umm! I was Sir! Now I guess nothing is beautiful than this darkness" Nishu said gazing at the sky full of stars.
"How so Miss?" Viraj raised an eyebrow , he wanted to hear childish Nishu's mature answer.
"Look at that sky. Does the stars shine in bright. No na! Morning mae. We forget them.Similarly we never know how much a person shines for us until we loose them!" she said pointing towards stars.
"True" Viraj just thought. Her every word was right he never knew what she was to him until he lost her.

It was past half hour since Saurab had left.
"Yeh Saurab bhi na pata nahi Kaha reh gaya" Nishu said while stretching her hand a little bit out of the teen shade.
" Aa jaegae Saurab" Viraj forgot she was With saurab not Him.
"Is it raining?" Nishu questioned as she rhythms her fingers in air.
"Kya" Viraj asked said
"Baarish?" Nishu said again.
Viraj stepped out of the teen shade
"See Miss Nisha ! It is not raining!" He turned to her and said
Just then with the loud roar of thunder it was pouring.
" OK Miss Nisha ! It is raining " Viraj pouted in defeat.
"Gotcha! I told u" Nishu couldn't suppress her laughter.
Viraj who was standing in the pouring rain stood still, seeing Nishu laughing
he was elated her fits of laughs felt like soothing rhythm to his ear.
"Sir" Nishu suddenly stopped.
"I can't hear u" Viraj mouthed to her among the fizzes of rain.
"Come to shed" she mouthed back.
"Oh" Viraj took baby steps towards the shed. Never in his life had he felt so good in rain.
Some rains are good
Woh bin mausam barasatae.
Nishu was getting impatient of Viraj model walk to the shed by now
"He's so slow" she said and ran to him caught his hand and dragged him to the shed
Viraj was too shocked to analyze the whole thing that took place.
"U could just catch cold & flu" Nishu said while making him sit.
"Haila!" Viraj snorted.
"Sir u know na you aren't used to these whether changes stay back" Nishi commanded him
"Aye aye captain" Viraj said noticing her vast knowledge on Viraj Singh Rathore's need.
Nishu had just put her hand in Viraj's hair when she realised what exactly she was about to do. She was just about to let her guards down and let Viraj enter in her life again.
Vuraj looked up seeing her lost in some thought and her hand still above his head.
He was about to say something to her when a loud noise grabbed their attention.
" Why the f**k on this earth it rains" Saurab said while entering the shed.
Nishu quickly turned to Saurab ,
"Cause of the water cycle u silly" Nishu made him sit too
"Saurab nakhare mat karna! " Nishu said while helping him in shrugging his sweat shirt removing water drops from it.
"No nishu pls" Saurab sat
"Nahi! Agar nahi kia toh tujhe zukhaam ho jaega aur phir tu papa bolega dada sunai dega" Nishu held his head and ruffled his wet hairs.
"Mele Baal!" Saurab chided and removed her hand
Nishu again ruffled them. Saurab rolled his eyes and held her hand.
Nishu playfully slapped him and continued until she was sure his hairs are no more wet"


Viraj sat like a lonely child there. Shoving his hands in pockets and watched them.
He coughed and said "can I get a hanky or something my hairs " he pointed towards them .
Nishu took out a hanky and gave it to him.

"Sir how's the wheater
"Saurab smirked.
" Good!" Viraj answered.

" Binn mausam barsaat Mae Sir aap bhi bheeg gae" Saurab knew his moves well.
Viraj looked at Nishu who was hiding behind Saurab .
"Binn mausam barsaat hi aksarr kuch logo ko pass aur kuch ko durr le kar jati hai" Viraj smiled a half hearted smile...


To b continued.


Guys if u think I m going deep in details do let me know. I am kinda sucker of meaningful romance so pls tell.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Omg...awesome update...like viraj ,i also dont like nisha and saurav to be together😔...
plzz niraj ko phir se sath le aao...BTW love your version...plzzz update ASAP
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Awesome update dear...thanx fr updating..continue soon..

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