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bhakti

@Nany

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

superb update yaar...
u r one of my fav writer...did a great,wonderful job...
amazingly amazing update...

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Shivi

@_UptoNoGood_

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: MissAsian
Hey wow i'm loving this story
U've become my favourite current writer
Continue ASAP (tomorrow?)
And can it be super long? ;) ;)

@bold: Yay!😃 Have you read my ss too?

Thanks! Will try to update around midnight. Even longer? Can't promise.😛

Originally posted by: eshasrk
Wow another amazing update, I am just loving this story and I am loving this Nisha. Hope to see this Nisha in the show very soon.
Great, superb !!!!
Plsss update soon

Thanks!😊 Aren't we all hoping?😉

Originally posted by: Krazzy4u786
Amazing update😊
Loved it

Thanks!

Originally posted by: dinazz
oh ! what an amazing update😃
thank god viraj came at the right time and saved her.
and gave that guy to the police.
lovely
cont soon😃

P.S. what if the same thing happens in nauc? that pilani guy coming back and trying to hurt her when viraj will come and save her. and lol😆 she would hit viraj and that would shock him out of his wits.😆😆and something funny would be worth watching it .

Thank you!

@p.s.- I don't think it would be funny at all. If she did hit him, it'd only be because she is greatly traumatized, not in her senses. Sorry, I'm a little sensitive about people suffering from trauma... I hope I didn't offend you.

Originally posted by: dhruvika1991
Nicely written

Thanks!😊

Originally posted by: neetr91
Superb update...loved it...do continue soon.

Thank you!😊

Originally posted by: Nany
superb update yaar...
u r one of my fav writer...did a great,wonderful job...
amazingly amazing update...

Thanks!😳

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Anjali

@clary

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Amazing one again shivi...read ur ss from start to end and now this NS...u r officially my favourite writer in the forum

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Shivi

@_UptoNoGood_

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: EhtNainalover
Amazing one again shivi...read ur ss from start to end and now this NS...u r officially my favourite writer in the forum

☺️ What do I say? Thanks!😳

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shivani_agl

@shivani_agl

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

its like reaaly awssmmm!!!!

i really wait for your updates!!!

keep posting!! loved it... very realistic...

you should write more often!!!👏

kudos to you👍🏼

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Shivi

@_UptoNoGood_

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: shivani_agl
its like reaaly awssmmm!!!!
i really wait for your updates!!!
keep posting!! loved it... very realistic...
you should write more often!!!👏
kudos to you👍🏼

Thank you!😃😳

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rocking_bhawna

@rocking_bhawna

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

mind blowing update...you have become my fav writer in this forum too...plz cont asap

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swatishrimankar

@swatishrimankar

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Superb..m. pls update fast ...

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MissAsian

@MissAsian

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Of course i've read ur SS 😛
But for some reason, at the time, it wpuldn't let me like or comment on anything in my account

But it's finally working again.

YES I SAID LONGER 😈 coz i just love ur work 👍🏼