The Dark Before The Dawn - A Nazar/PiyAnsh FF (Completed) - Page 16

Originally posted by: nushy1995

Ganga Ki Dheej.

It was an old show and used to air on Sahara One.

Loved the ML there. In fact, he is the first ML of ITV whom I loved.

Okay, never heard.

Cool.

Originally posted by: Madhura..

Okay, never heard.

Cool.

It was super unpopular. 😆 In fact the TRP was so low that they had abruptly ended it. As usual, I watched it years later on YouTube. 😆 Mohit Raina and Leena Jumani were the leads.

Originally posted by: nushy1995

It was super unpopular. 😆 In fact the TRP was so low that they had abruptly ended it. As usual, I watched it years later on YouTube. 😆 Mohit Raina and Leena Jumani were the leads.

Okay. Well during those times, atleast all shows had some plots and theme. Talking on trps, I never knew or followed how many trps a show gets.

Cool, you did. Thanks for telling.

Nowadays I believe, a few web series are really interesting and crisp. I saw this simple one on Cheesecake, enjoyed it on a dog and couple, issues of corporate life were highlighted so well and ofc personal issues and dog bonding.

Originally posted by: Madhura..

Okay. Well during those times, at least all shows had some plots and theme. Talking on trps, I never knew or followed how many trps a show gets.

Cool, you did. Thanks for telling.

Nowadays I believe, a few web series are really interesting and crisp. I saw this simple one on Cheesecake, enjoyed it on a dog and couple, issues of corporate life were highlighted so well and ofc personal issues and dog bonding.

Nor did I. But as I said, I watched it years later and when the show ended abruptly, I thought they didn't upload all the episodes on YouTube. So I googled it and got to know it went off air due to low TRP.

I agree with you on plot and theme. In fact I watched the show quite some time ago. So apart from the basic plot, didn't remember much. When I watched a couple of days ago again, I realized how beautifully they portrayed the ML's character. And even when the FL was a damsel in distress , you could still sympathize with her as her background and the custom of the village played a huge role. 🤔 But what I loved most was the clarity she had as a wife. 👏

Nowadays confession, consummation - these things are blown over in some serials and the fans go gaga over it. But I watched the confession scene and the FL's dialogue was bang on! She accepted that she was indebted to the ML but she fulfilled her duties as a wife because she fell in love with him. It wasn't because of his help but his personality which made her fall in love with him.

And I kept thinking, a show which aired 10 years ago and had an uneducated FL, still managed to portray her hurt in a better way that many educated, career oriented FLs of today's shows. So how much have we really moved forward? 🤔

Sorry, got overboard with its praise. 😆 Definitely there are some amazing shows right now. Still I feel we should give more credit to earlier shows than we do usually. 😊

Yeah, I read about Cheesecake. 😊 I'll surely try to watch it later.

Finally I am back... 🤗

I really loved the conversation between Pia and Ansh...

I loved all those points which you highlighted through Pia's words.

I loved Ansh's loved Ansh's words too... The things which you made him say, his confession to her and finally him asking her for another chance...

I loved Ansh and Neha's scenes... The way she called Ansh a dumb person, told him to go and talk to Pia and told him to help her remind about his sensitive side... Just loved it.

And the last part was really funny... When Pia said that her Maa's advice led her to Hrithik Roshan... I just cracked up.

Now, I am waiting for the next part...

Originally posted by: nushy1995

Thanks dear! 🤗

I was a bit worried as it may look like Maggi instant patching up, which it is in one way. 🤪 But can't stretch more than this because then there will be too much of sadness and gloominess. Plus Piya is a World Class Besharam when it comes to Ansh. So decided to end it within one chapter.

Enjoy the party. 🥳

Most welcome... 🤗

Well, it doesn't look like Maggi at all.

Yes, it would have been too much of gloominess if this separation would have been stretched more...

And I completely agree with you that Pia is a world class besharam when it comes to Ansh...

Thanks... I enjoyed the party a lot but not my stay there...

Don't know why all my cousins love that super idiotic BB... I had to put on my headphones to prevent that noise from reaching my ears...

I just wish the CVs had your insight. The plot is super and you did justice. Way to go.

Originally posted by: cloud007

I just wish the CVs had your insight. The plot is super and you did justice. Way to go.

I wish that too! 😛 😆

Jokes apart, I am glad you liked my story. 😊

Chapter 6 & 7

My instinctive reaction 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏


Your hard work really shone through here.

You sensitivity portrayed Piya’s inner turmoil & beautifully tied up their reunion.

I wish they had shown this in the actual episode instead of the divine intervention....felt hypocritical.

Loved fire made fire flies.

Belated Happy New year

Originally posted by: Hallyumint

Chapter 6 & 7

My instinctive reaction 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Your hard work really shone through here.

You sensitively portrayed Piya’s inner turmoil & beautifully tied up their reunion.

I wish they had shown this in the actual episode instead of the divine intervention....felt hypocritical.

Loved fire made fire flies.

Belated Happy New year

That's really sweet of you Alisha! 🤗 Thanks a lot! 😊

Not trying to brag here but the truth is, I have always wanted the makers to give insight into the protagonists' character, be it Mo or Piya or Ansh. If you can recall, I was so excited about Pr Track and then it became...... 🤬

Piya and Ansh definitely have shades based on which I could continue the story. But even I wished for the makers to highlight their turmoil and then give a meaningful reunion. But we got reunion within one episode.

Considering how separation and reunion are handled horribly in most of the prime-time shows, I would say Nazar-NaMah mashup was much better. But yes, even I wasn't completely satisfied with it and still keep praying for one solo episode for them to confess their true feelings instead of irrelevant drama and action sequences.

So fulfilled my wish through the FF. 😊

Yeah, Madhura once mentioned firefly and I really loved the scene in Maleficent 2 where Philip proposed and when Arora said yes, all those leafy creatures started flying around them. Amazing scene it was! 👏 So decided to include something similar. 😊

Happy New Year to you too! 😊