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Too much awesome.. Nxt updt romantic chahiye

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Originally posted by: -meru-
Too much awesome.. Nxt updt romantic chahiye

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CONTINUE...

Anant goes in terrace and was looking at full moon up in the sky. He was waiting for navya. She came near him. He looks at her. She smile at him. She looks at moon and started doing puja. She looks at moon from a transparent net and close her eyes. She looks at Anant and open her eyes. They both smile at each other. Anant takes a piece of sweet and makes navya eat it. They both stare at each other. Anant took out the box from his pocket and gave it to navya. She except it

ANANT - so.. Challenge completed. Vrat khul gaya

Navya nodded in no

NAVYA - ab tak vrat khula nahi he

Anant looks confused. Navya took a piece of sweet and make Anant eat it

NAVYA - tumhara bhi to vrat tha

Anant became happy and smile looking at her as she knows he had also kept fast for her. Navya was about to go from there when he stops her

ANANT - navya...

She was backfacing him. He moves towards her and bends at her ears.

ANANT - jane dil me kabse he tu, jabse me hu tabse he tu. Mujhko mere rab ki kasam, yara rab se pehele he tu

He gave a light kiss on her cheeck. She smile shyly and runs from there. Anant smile looking at her and nodded his head in disbelief.

***

In ritika's room, ritika closed the door and moves towards window. She smile looking at moon. She does the same ritual. She took the piece of sweet in her hand

RITIKA - is bar mera vrat tum nahi khol paye Anant. Par me pray karti hu future me ane wale har karwachauth par tum hi mera vrat kholo.

She smile and eat the sweet. She looks at moon and smile thinking about her and anant.

***

Next morning, ritika enters navya's room

RITIKA - navi...

NAVYA - ritu me naha rahi hu.. 5 min ruk

RITIKA - ok

She smiled. Her eyes falls on table where the box was kept. She opens the box to find the key ring which Anant had gifted navya

NAVYA - ritu

Ritika looks back to find navya standing in dark green color chudidar suit with wet hair

RITIKA - navi.. Ye tune kab kharida?

Navya gets surprised seeing the key ring in her hand. She takes it from her

NAVYA - ye.. Wo us din me market gayi thi, tab acha laga to le liya

RITIKA - par ye to adha hi he

NAVYA - ha wo... Wo

She was finding words to say. Ritika looks confused

RITIKA - acha chod.. Me to yaha kam se ayi thi

Navya sigh relief

NAVYA - kya Kam?

RITIKA - navi.. Mujhe teri ek saree chahiye thi pehenne ke liye. Tere pas to bohot sari he but mere pas ek bhi nahi

NAVYA - saree? Aaj koi function he kya tere office me?

Ritika stammered to answer

RITIKA - nahi aise hi

NAVYA - ok. Wo cupboard me rakhi he. Tujhe jo achi lagti he tu le le

Ritika nodded in yes and moves towards cupboard while navya started getting ready. Ritika chooses a silver color saree

RITIKA - navi.. Mujhe ye chahiye

Navya looks at her and nodded in yes. Ritika also smile

RITIKA (in mind) - Anant ko traditional look acha lagta he na so aaj me use surprise karungi ye saree pehenkar

Ritika smile shyly and became happy

***

After some time Anant and Ranbir were sitting in hall watching TV when navya enters. She switches it off

RANBIR - hey navya. What yar hum dekh rahe the

NAVYA - isse bhi ek important chiz he jo tum dono ko dikhani he

Anant and Ranbir looks confused. Suddenly ritika enters wearing saree. They both looks at her coming from staircase. Ranbir gets surprised looking at her. She was not able to walk properly as she is not used to it. She was about to fall when navya holds her

NAVYA - ritu..

Ranbir and anant started laughing. Navya and ritika looks confused. They were laughing holding their stomach.

RANBIR - oh my god ritu.. Kitni cartoon lag rahi ho tum

Again they both started laughing. Ritika gets tears while navya was indicating them to keep quiet

ANANT - tum ache se chal bhi nahi pa rahi ho ritika. Kya zarurat thi circus karne ki?

RANBIR - ye sab sirf navya pe suit hota he tumpe nahi

Navya looks at ritika. Ritika goes from there crying.

NAVYA - stop it guys. It was such a lame joke

Navya follow ritika. Anant and Ranbir looks at each other

RANBIR - I think thoda jyada hogaya. Ritika ko bura laga hoga

ANANT - hmm

Anant and Ranbir looks sorry and sad for ritika...

TO BE CONTINUED...

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Woww really awsum update ;)) waiting for next lmaoo kya zaroorat thee cartoon bannay ki

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Originally posted by: silla
Woww really awsum update ;)) waiting for next lmaoo kya zaroorat thee cartoon bannay ki

He he. thanks alottt. will continue next part soon. keep reading

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Woww super lovely awesome. Loved anya scn. Alot

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Originally posted by: -meru-
Woww super lovely awesome. Loved anya scn. Alot

Thank you so much. for reading and commenting.

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Originally posted by: JutheeAlam
Cute update

Thank you dear

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Originally posted by: silla
Next plz ;))

Sure dear. will update tomorrow

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CONTINUE...

Navya enters in ritika's room where she was crying. She moved towards her.

NAVYA - ritu.. Tu ro kyu rahi he?

RITIKA - me kitni stupid hu na navi

Said ritika between her cries. Navya feel sad for her

RITIKA - me tere jaise banne chali thi. Mujhe laga me bhi tere jaise kapde pehenkar tere jaise sundar lagungi. Kitni pagal hu me

NAVYA - tujhe mere jaise banne ki zarurat nahi he ritu. Kyuki tu pehele se hi bohot achi he. Aur tu saree me sachme achi lag rahi he

RITIKA - fir wo dono hase kyu?

ANANT - kyuki hum stupid he

Navya and ritika both looks back to find Anant. He enters and moves towards ritika.

ANANT - hum stupid he jo samajh hi nahi paye ki tum kitni pyari lag rahi ho

Ritika wipes her tears while navya smile

ANANT - ritika, tumhe kisike jaisa banne ki koi zarurat nahi he. Tum jaisi ho waisi hi bohot sundar ho

RITIKA - Sach?

ANANT - ekdum Sach

Ritika smile at him

ANANT - Aur mene tumhe hurt kiya na. Isliye sorry

RITIKA - ek dost kabhi dusre dost ko sorry nahi kehta. It's ok

Anant smile and does his hand forward

ANANT - mujhse dosti karogi?

Ritika shakes hand with him. She again gets teary when Anant hugs her. First she gets surprised but then felt happy. Navya looks at both of them. She looks at ritika smiling. She turns around and was about to go when Anant holds her hand. She looks back at Anant who was staring her. She smile at him. Suddenly Ranbir came there. Anant left navya's hand as well as release ritika from hug

RANBIR - I am so sorry ritika. Mujhse sachme galati hogayi. Mujhe aisa behave nahi karna chahiye tha. Please mujhe maf kardo ritika

RITIKA - no

Ranbir looks sad while Anant and navya became surprised. Ritika smile

RITIKA - it's ritu for you

Ranbir smile at her. They both hug each other. Anant and navya also join them in a group hug.

***

Next day was Sunday. Navya who was dressed in purple color short kurti and white ankle length jeans enters kitchen where meeta was working

NAVYA - good morning ma

MEETA - good morning

Navya looks at meeta who was looking very tired.

NAVYA - kya hua ma? Apki tabyet to thk he na?

MEETA - ha bacche wo bas thodi thakawat horahi he.

NAVYA - show me

Navya check her forehead and her pulses

NAVYA - mamma... Aapko bukhar Chad raha he. BP high to nahi hogaya apka?

MEETA - are nahi. Ye sab to hota rehta he. Chal ab mujhe breakfast banana he

NAVYA - koi zarurat nahi he. Wo sab me kar lungi. Aap jakar aram karo

MEETA - beta ek din to chutti milti he tujhe. Usme bhi tu kam karegi?

SUGANDHA - uski tension aap mat lo bhabi

Sugandha enters there along with Anant. Anant and navya looks at each other

SUGANDHA - aap jakar aram karo. Me dekhti hu yaha

NAVYA - aap nahi aunty. Me. Aaj aapko aur mummy ko chutti

ANANT - ya right. Aaj sara kam hum karenge. Both the moms enjoy your holiday

Said Anant side hugging meeta and sugandha. Navya smile at them

SUGANDHA - chalo thk he. Tum dono Ranbir aur ritika ko bhi sath me le lo

As soon as sugandha said this Anant looks sad at navya while she hides her smile.

SUGANDHA - chaliye bhabi

Sugandha and meeta goes from there. Anant looks at navya who was laughing

ANANT - badi hasi arahi he tumhe?

He said moving towards her.

NAVYA - are ma kya hua?

Anant looks back and navya runs from there and laughs at him for teasing him

***

Navya enters meeta's room carrying a glass of milk. Meeta was resting on bed

NAVYA - ma

Navya sits near her. She gave her the glass

NAVYA - have it. Better feel hoga

Meeta smile at her

NAVYA - mamma.. Aap q itna tension lete ho?

MEETA - me kaha tension leti hu?

NAVYA - acha? To blood pressure kaise badh gaya?

Meeta looks down avoiding the question

MEETA - jab tak meri betiyo ki shadi nahi hojati tab tak tension to rahegi hi na

Now navya looks down. Meeta holds her hand

MEETA - navi.. Dekh me tujhe pressurize nahi kar rahi. Bas suggest kar rahi hu. Om bhaisahab ne bohot acha rishta suggest kiya he. Tu ekbar usse mil leti bat kar leti to acha hota

Navya looks down feeling sad. Meeta tries to read her mind

MEETA - aur agar aisa he ki tujhe koi pasand he to tu mujhe bata sakti he.

Navya looks in wonder at meeta while she smile

MEETA - me teri mummy ke sath sath dost bhi hu. Hu na?

Navya nodded in yes. Meeta waited for her to speak

NAVYA - ma... Wo... Me... An...

RITIKA - ma...

Suddenly ritika enters. Navya stop seeing her. Ritika moves towards meeta

RITIKA - mamma. Aunty ne bataya apki tabyet kharab he. Kya hua aapko?

She looks tensed. Meeta caresses her face.

MEETA - don't worry beta. Thoda rest karungi to thk hojaungi

RITIKA - thodi nahi bohot rest leni he apko