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Posted: 8 years ago
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It was dark now. Anant stopped his bike infront of Mishra house. Navya gets down.
NAVYA - thanks for the coffee Anant. Bye
She was about to go when Anant holds her dupatta. She looks at him in surprise
NAVYA - kya kar rahe ho Anant? Koi dekh lega
ANANT - dekhne do. Me nahi darta
Anant moves towards her.
ANANT - London me bye aise nahi kehte
He pulls her dupatta and she falls on his chest
ANANT - itni duri nahi hoti
He said in a whisper and moves little closer. Navya gulped in nervousness.
ANANT - akhe khuli nahi hoti
They both closed their eyes. They were inches apart. Anant moves towards her. He was about to kiss her lips when she put her finger on his lips. They both open their eyes
NAVYA - ye London nahi shimla he. Aur yaha bye... Dur se hi karte he
She pushed him and laughs at him
ANANT - navya
She runs from there while Anant nodded in disbelief.
***
At night, navya was in her yellow color night suit. She was sitting near window reading her love story. But her concentration was far away from it. She was staring outside, smiling and thinking about Anant. Suddenly ritika enters there.
RITIKA - navi..
She was calling her but navya didn't listen. Ritika scrunched her eyebrow and moves towards her. She called her 2-3 times but she was busy in herself. Ritika thought of an idea. She took the pillow from her side and hit on navya's back by which navya shouted loudly.
NAVYA - aaahhh
Ritika started laughing. Navya looks at her and sigh relief. Ritika sits beside her
NAVYA - you scared me. Awaz nahi de sakti?
RITIKA - acha ji. Kabse tujhe bula rahi hu tera dhyan to kahi aur hi he
Navya bites her tongue and looks down
RITIKA - kya soch rahi thi itna muskurakar? Kahi kuch gadbad to nahi he? Tujhe pyar wyar to nahi hua he na?
Said ritika teasing her. Navya looks down feeling shy. Ritika laugh and navya looks at her in confusion.
RITIKA - sorry.. Tujhse ye pyar wagera nahi hoga. Tu to apne ma papa ki bht bholi beti he. Love story ki tu sirf book hi padh sakti he.
Navya smile lightly while ritika laugh at her
RANBIR - love ki bate horahi he to mera nam to zarur aya hoga
Said Ranbir standing at door. Both of them looks at him
RITIKA - oh god. Yaha kisine tumhe yad bhi nahi kiya
NAVYA - ritu...
Navya hits her for which she looks in anger. Ranbir sits in front of them
RANBIR - aww. Ab mujhe samajh aya tum mere bare me kya sochti ho
NAVYA - aisa nahi he Ranbir. Tum bolo. Kuch kam tha?
RANBIR - ha. Actually mujhe mere laptop ka charger thk karana tha. So both of you know any repairing center?
Ranbir asked to both. Ritika looks elsewhere ignoring him.
NAVYA - are ha. Ritu wo tere office ke pas he na ek store. Waha le ja na Ranbir ko
Ritika looks at navya and nodded in no while navya requested her. Ranbir hides his smile
RITIKA - ok ok. Kal chalenge
Ranbir smile and became happy
RITIKA - ab tum jaoge? I want to talk with my sister.
RANBIR - ha to karo na. Mene Kab mana kiya he
Ritika looks at him in anger. She gets up and stamp her foot and goes from there. Ranbir and navya looks at each other and started laughing
NAVYA - tum use kyu pareshan karte ho Ranbir?
RANBIR - kyuki mujhe bht maza ata he
They both again started laughing. Navya nodded her head in disbelief.
***
Next morning, Anant came from jogging. He looks at sugandha meeta along with navya and ritika. Navya was in her royal blue kurti leggings with hair loosely side plated. Anant looks at her and gave a flying kiss. Navya gets shocked and looks other way
SUGANDHA - Anant.. Aao beta betho
Anant looks at sugandha and nodded in yes
ANANT - mom.. Ye sab kya he?
He said looking at the clothes, dresses and jewelry all around.
MEETA - Kal ki tayariya. Kal karwachauth he na.
Navya looks at Anant while he also does the same. They smile at each other. Navya looks down. Ritika looks at Anant and smile. Anant's eyes falls on ritika. He scrunched his eyebrow and asked her while she nodded in no
SUGANDHA - aapko pata he bhabi, London me Indian ladies ka ek club he jo har sal ek function organize karte he karwachauth ke liye...
Sugandha was telling meeta while Anant was continuously staring navya. Navya's eyes became wide and tells him to look other way while he nodded in no. Ranbir came there suddenly.
RANBIR - good morning lovely people.
Ritika rolls her eyes in disbelief
RANBIR - so ritu, chale?
ANANT - hey tum log itni subah kaha ja rahe ho?
RANBIR - mera charger repair karna tha usi ke liye ritu ke sath ja raha hu
RITIKA - Anant tum bhi chalo na
Anant looks at navya
ANANT - no.. Me ghar par hi rahunga
Ritika feel sad
RANBIR - oho ritu.. Kitni bate karti ho tum. Chalo
RITIKA - it's ritika. Did you get that
She goes from there while Ranbir follow her. Everyone laugh at them
MEETA - acha navi.. Aaj tu clinic se jaldi ajana. Aur kal chutti lena. Samjhi
NAVYA - thk he ma
Saying she goes from there. Anant also excuse himself and goes from there.
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TO BE CONTINUED...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome lovely anya scn... Loved it alot plss. Cont sooon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#63
Omg ;)) I can't wait for next update thanks so much for amazing update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: -meru-

Awesome lovely anya scn... Loved it alot plss. Cont sooon

Thank you so much. I am glad you like it
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Posted: 8 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: silla

Omg ;)) I can't wait for next update thanks so much for amazing update

Thank you. keep reading
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Posted: 8 years ago
#66
CONTINUE...
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Suddenly Om and deepak enters there.
OM - bhabi ab aap hi samjhayiye deepu ko
Sugandha and meeta look confused
MEETA - kya hua bhaisahab?
OM - batata hu. Sugandha tumhe wo Mr and Mrs Verma pata he na?
SUGANDHA - ha wohi na apke friend
OM - ha wohi. Meeta bhabi, mere bohot ache dost he Mr Verma. Actually kya hua, Ranbir ne yaha ki kuch photos social sites pe upload ki he, wahi unhone navya ko dekha. Aur dekhte hi unhe bohot pasand agayi
Meeta became happy while deepak nodded in disbelief.
SUGANDHA - are wah. Matlab adi ke liye?
Om nodded in yes
SUGANDHA - it is such a good news. Bhabi, bohot achi family he. Aditya to anant aur Ranbir ka friend he. Sachme apni navya ke liye bohot acha rishta he
MEETA - ha.. Deepak.. Bhaisahab sahi keh rahe he
DEEPAK - lo.. Tum bhi shuru hogayi? Yaha me Om ko mana kar raha hu aur yaha tum hi mujhe bol rahi ho?
SUGANDHA - bhaisahab aap ek bar sochiye to. Bacche bade hogaye he unke shadi ke bare me sochna to padega hi
OM - ha deepu. Dekh me tujhe ye nahi bol raha ki abhi navya ki shadi kara de. Tu pehele navya se bat Kar, unki family se bat kar, adi ko dekh le fir faisla kar
MEETA - ha ji. Ache rishte bohot mushkil se milte he. Hume ab navya aur ritika ki shadi ke liye sochna chahiye
Everyone convinced deepak. He nodded in yes. Om, sugandha and meeta became happy
***
In evening, deepak was in his room sitting on bed thinking something. Meeta enters to keep the clothes in cupboard
MEETA - deepak, kal aap chutti le rahe he na?
Deepak doesn't reply. Meeta looks confused. She moves towards him and patted on his shoulder
MEETA - deepak...
Deepak looks at her. She sits beside him.
MEETA - kya hua? Kya soch rahe he?
DEEPAK - hamari betiya itni badi hogayi meeta ki aaj unke liye rishte arahe he?
Meeta smile at him
MEETA - ye to achi bat he na ji. Ab dekhiye na hamari navi ke liye London se rishta aya he
Deepak smile thinking about navya
MEETA - sugandha bhabi bata rahi thi. Bohot ache log he. Aditya to eklauta beta he unka. Hamari navi ke liye perfect choice he.
Deepak nodded in yes
DEEPAK - hamari dono betiya London jayegi
Meeta looks confused
MEETA - kya matlab?
DEEPAK - meeta shayad.. Ritu Anant ko pasand karti he
Hearing deepak meeta gets surprised. She became happy.
MEETA - Sach.. Are wah.. Ye to bohot achi bat he
DEEPAK - ha.. Soch raha hu ritu se is bare me bat karke Om ko bata du
MEETA - ha ye sahi rahega
Deepak and meeta smile and became happy for their daughters.
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Navya enters from clinic. Om, deepak along with sugandha and meeta were sitting at hall. Meeta indicates deepak while he nodded in yes
DEEPAK - navi...
Navya looks at him
NAVYA - ha papa
DEEPAK - beta wo.. Tujhse ek bat karni he
Navya looks confused. Deepak looks at meeta
MEETA - navi.. Tere liye rishta aya he
Navya became surprised.
NAVYA - kya?
DEEPAK - ha bacche London se aya he
Said deepak looking at Om. Navya smile hearing it as she thought it was Anant
SUGANDHA - ha navya. Hamare family friends he. Unka beta he Aditya Verma
Smile disappear from navya's face
NAVYA - aaabbb... Aunty mujhe abhi shadi nahi karni.
MEETA - par beta ek bar mil to le
NAVYA - na bola na mummy. Mujhe nahi milna. Bol dena us... Kya nam bataya..?? Ha Aditya Verma se
Saying she left from there in room.
OM - lo... Isne to ekdum mana hi kar diya
SUGANDHA - I think hume use thoda time dena chahiye
Everyone agree to it and nodded in yes
***
Navya enters the room and throws her purse on bed
ANANT - haayyee...
Navya gets surprised hearing anant's voice. She looks at him who was resting on bed. He moves towards her
ANANT - apki di hui har chot mujhe badi achi lagti he
Said Anant coming towards her
NAVYA - tum yaha kya Kar rahe ho? Bahar sab log bethe he
ANANT - to kya hua. I told you. Me kisise nahi darta
Navya smile looking at him. He moves closer to her
ANANT - waise bhi pyar kiya to darna kya
Anant smirk. Navya smile shyly and looks other side. She was backfacing Anant.
ANANT - suna he tum har sal karwachauth ka vrat rakhti ho. Kiske liye?
NAVYA - koi bhi ho. Tumhe usse kya
Anant bends towards her. He came near her ear.
ANANT - pata he mujhe kiske liye rakhti ho. Aur ye bhi pata he ki is sal wo tumhare sath he
Navya smile shyly and looks down. Anant took a box from his pocket. He took out two key ring which were joint and of heart shape. He show it to navya
ANANT - ye dekho
NAVYA - kya he ye?
ANANT - is bar hum dono ka sath me first karwachauth he. Isliye tumhare liye chotasa gift. Is heart ka ek part tumhare pas rahega aur dusra mere pas
He makes it in two parts and shows her the two key rings
NAVYA - ouch... Dil todna to koi tumse sikhe
ANANT - ise dil todna nahi jodna kehte he
Navya smile and turns around to look at him.
NAVYA - chori chupke pyar ka izhar to koi bhi kar sakta he. Sabke samne karo to manu
Anant smirk while navya folded her hands
ANANT - ok. Challenge excepted
Navya looks at him in surprise
ANANT - Kal sabke samne tumhare karwachauth ka vrat me todunga. Dekh lena
NAVYA - dekh lenge
Anant smile and keep the key ring in his pocket and goes from there. Navya smile at him...
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TO BE CONTINUED...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Katal krdungeee mein is rituu pituuu ka ...aur yeh deepak n meeta irritating koi bhi Anya ke baray mein nahi soch raha selfish pagal log :(
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: silla

Katal krdungeee mein is rituu pituuu ka ...aur yeh deepak n meeta irritating koi bhi Anya ke baray mein nahi soch raha selfish pagal log :(

Chill yar. they assume that anya are only friends and nothing more than that. don't worry everything is going to be fine. keep reading
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Surely will update tomorrow
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CONTINUE...
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At ritika's room, ritika lite the diya infront of her parent's photo.
RITIKA - apko pata he, is bar me first time karwachauth ka vrat rakhne wali hu. Anant ke liye
She said smiling. Deepak came at her room and stop at door looking ritika talking to her parents
RITIKA - aap dono khush to he na mere liye? Aapko meri choice achi lagi na?
DEEPAK - bohot achi he
Ritika gets surprised. She looks at door to find deepak standing there. He gets inside and moves towards her
DEEPAK - meri beti ki choice kabhi galat ho hi nahi sakti
He said cupping her face
RITIKA - this is wrong papa. Apne meri bate kyu suni?
DEEPAK - are to kya hua? Papa se kya sharmana
Ritika smile shyly and hugs deepak. He caresses her head
DEEPAK - I am so happy for you beta
He gave a lite kiss on her forehead. She looks at him
DEEPAK - tu kahe to Om se bat karu?
RITIKA - nahi papa. Abhi nahi. Me Anant ke sath thoda time aur spend karna chahti hu
Deepak smile and nodded in yes
RITIKA - aur papa promise me. Aap ye bat kisiko nahi batayenge
DEEPAK - ok baba. Promise
Ritika hugs deepak while he smile looking at his happy daughter.
***
Next day, navya was getting ready in her room for karwachauth. She was in her off white color anarkali suit with open hair and big earing. She was wearing her bangles when Anant enters her room. He was dressed in red color kurta and off white pyjama. He smile looking at her
ANANT - ehm
Her eyes falls on him. She smile at him
ANANT - bhagwan ne mujhe bohot beautiful gift diya he
She smirk and again started wearing her bangles
NAVYA - jhuti tarif karna to koi tumse sikhe.
He enters inside and came near her
ANANT - chalo jhuti hi sahi tumne ye to mana ki me tumhari tarif karta hu
He took out the box from his pocket. Navya smile looking at the same gift he wanted to give her yesterday
NAVYA - gift tab jab challenge pura
Saying this she was about to go when he holds her wrist. They both looks at each other
ANANT - itna pyara he tumhe ye challenge?
NAVYA - because I love challenges
He pulls her towards him
ANANT - mujhse challenge karogi to har jaogi
NAVYA - shayad yahi me chahti hu
They smile looking at each other. Anant kissed her wrist and left from there. Navya smile shyly looking at him
***
In ritika's room, ritika was getting ready in light blue color chudidar suit. Just then Ranbir enters. He smile looking at her
RANBIR - pyar hua ekrar hua he
Ranbir started singing. Ritika looks at him and nodded in disbelief
RANBIR - pyar se fir kyu darta he dil
He came near her and offers her his hand
RITIKA - no
RANBIR - come on
She accepted his hand and they both started dancing
RANBIR - kehta he dil rasta mushkil malum nahi he kaha manzil...
He makes her go round and she falls on his chest. They both looks at each other. Ritika looks away and stand still
RANBIR - sorry
RITIKA - you should be
RANBIR - ritu aaj tum sachme achi lag rahi ho
RITIKA - me hamesha achi hi lagti hu
RANBIR - ya ya.. Khudki tarif
RITIKA - tumse hi sikha he
They both started laughing
RANBIR - me to tumhe bulane aya tha. Meeta aunty bula rahi he
She nodded in yes and both of them headed downstairs
***
In garden, sugandha and meeta were doing karwachauth puja. They followed some rituals and does arti of Om and deepak respectively. Anant looks at them and then at navya who was standing beside him. He patted on her shoulder. She looks at him
ANANT - get ready
She looks confused. He winks at her and holds her from shoulder
ANANT - are navya.. What happened?
Everyone looks at them. Navya gets surprised and looks confused
MEETA - navi.. Kya hua
ANANT - lagta he aunty chakkar arahi he. He na navya?
Anant smirk at her. She hides her smile
NAVYA - ha ma wo thoda weakness hogaya he
DEEPAK- navi tu beth ja
Navya sits on chair while Anant was still holding her from shoulder
OM - Ranbir... Jao pani le aao
Ranbir brought water and gave it to anant. Anant makes her drink water and hence her fast break. Anant and navya smile at each other when ritika inturpts them
RITIKA - navi.. Tu thk he na
Navya nodded in yes
MEETA - Kamal he. Har sal to vrat rakhti he fir is bar kaise chakkar agayi?
SUGANDHA - koi bat nahi bhabi hota he
Meeta looks confused and nodded in agreement
OM - chalo hum log andar chalte he
All of them went inside. Anant looks at navya and winks while navya smile at him..
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TO BE CONTINUED...

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