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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Somulove

Nice prologue waiting for the updates continue soon please


updating...😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part-1

After meeta left..she slowly open the envelope..notice a fresh beautifully written a biodata(for marriage).don't know why she is reading the biodata again and again..it never happens with her again..yeah its true that soo many good proposals came for him but she never paid attention towards them..but she is more curious to know that person without his picture.she wants to find out the person who is hidden in that biodata..only through this basic information which is not enough to judge a person not because her mother told her bt she herself wants to judge him..the reason behind this is unknown to her..

Kya soch rahi hain tu ? asked ritika (navya's best friend)

Kuch nahi..baas aesehi..said navya

Dekh main tujhe bachpan se janti hu..koi toh baat hain jo tujhe andaar se kha jarahi hain..bata mujhe..said ritika..

Wo mere liye ik rishta aayi hain..then she said everything to her..

Toh ae toh good news hain ..tu aise expression de rahi hain jaise koi pahar toot para..ritika is in funny mode..

Isliye main tujhe nahin batana chahti thi..par tu majak kar rahi hain..navya pauted..

Ooo meri jaan..chal chodh serious mood pe ati hu..bata tujhe kaisa laga..asker ritika curiously

Sach kahu..aise kabhi maine kisika biodata itni baar nahin parhi..jaise koi shaant sa simple sa hain..kuch alag hain ismain ..jo baki sabmain nahin dekha main..something different..navya thought..

Ooye hoye bina picure ke teri aae haal hain toh picture dekh ne ke baad kya hoga tera kaliye ritika teasing her

Aisa waisa kuch nahin..baas par ke jo mehesus hui wo hi batayi main..said navya cutely..

Ok chaal ghar chalet hain..ma pareshan hogi..then they both left and went to their home..

At home:

Meeta: navya wo mujhe kuch bat karni hain tujhe..

Navya: ha ma bolo..kya hua..?

Then suddenly bell rang..

Main dekhti hu..said navya

Oh my God..di jiju aap log acchanak se aa geyi hain..said navya excitedly..

Renuka: aab toh aana hi parega ..tere shadi jo horahi hain ..

Navya: didi aap bhi na..mujhe koi shadi nahin karni hain..main yahin rahungi aap logo ke pass (in a sad face)

Renuka: oo meri guriya jaise behen..saab ko jani parti hain..aur toh aabhi udas horahi hain..sirf rishta toh e aayi hain..aise thodi tujhe bida karungi..pagal

Then they both hug each other and adored each other

That time someone is coughing and looking at the sisters duo

Gautam: dono beheno ka aagar prem alap khatam hojaye toh main kuch kahu?( in a permission mode)

Renuka: ji permission granted ..

Navya and renuka laughed a lott

Gautam: ik kam kyu nahin karte..main chala jata hu..aur ladke ke baremain puch tas karleta hain..aur is bahane use mulakat bhi hojaye gi..(in a exciting mode)

Renuka: ae good idea hain..whats say navi?

Navya: par..agar use pata chal geya toh? Said innocently..

Gautam: aare use kuch pata nahin chalega..main saab sambhal lunga..tu chinta mat kar..pagal

Renuka: ok

Gautam: main kal hi jake pata lagati hu..

Next day gautam reach the anant's office..yes the office where anant works as a senior officer at a bank..

Kya main mr.anant bajpaye se mil sakta hu..asked gautam at a receptionist..

I have to ask sir..said recepsonist..

Gautam: ok..i am waiting

Receptionist: u talk to his boss sir..he can tell u where he is right now..

Here is the cabin

Gautam: thank u

Then he went to his cabin..

Gautam: may I come in sir?

Man: yeah sure..come in

Then they both shake their hands

Man: have a seat..what can I help u ?

Gautam: I know sir I have come at the office time..but I need some information which is very important..

Man: yeah sure ask..

Gautam: want to know about anant bajpaye..

Man: oh anant..he is a nice guy..i must say..a very hard working person,gentle in behavior,sweet taklker..soo many things..

Gautam: that's good..(in a impressing mode)

Man: yes..he was in another department..but due to his capability and sincereity due to his work..i took him at IT section..now he is doing wonderful job since 2 years..very nice person..i must say.

Gautam: wow..sir that's soo nice..

Man: but I want to know why u want to know soo many things about him?

Gautam: actually sir..i have come here for my sister in law s wedding purpose..soo that's y..

Man: oh I see..i understand..u can ensure me that he is a very nice person , a responsible, caring, loving,gentle person..u can see it..

Gautam: thank u soo much sir..due to soo many information..and one more thing I want to meet him..

Man: yeah sure..right now he is not at office..he has gone out for some work..i am giving u address..u can meet to him there

Gautam: thank u soo much for the help..

Man: my pleasure..here is the card..

Then gautam went to the branch where our hero is busy in his work..

Gautam: excuse me..

Man: yes

Gautam: where can I meet him?

Man: oh anant..u want to meet him..in that section

Gautam: thanks..it seems whole office knows him very well

Man: yes..oviously..the most genius person..everyone knows him very well

Gautam: oh I see..

He is getting impressed one by one..

Then he went to the room where he is working

Gautam: anant bajpaye..right?

Anant: yes

A simple white coloured shirt little stripe,in a formal dress up..proper hair style just like a gentle handsome good looking person..just smile and greet him

They both shake hands and greet to each other

Gautam: have gone your head office but did not find u ..so came here

Anant: yeah..have come due to some office work..what wil u take?

Gautam: nothing..just come to see u..hope u know the matter..

Anant: yeah I know..have got a biodata from the marriage bureau women..

Gautam: yes..

1Anant: first I want to say about myself..

Gautam: yes tell ( in a concern mode)

Anant: I have a small house which is built by me..i am a salarised person from a middle class family,,so hope u understand

Gautam: yeah I know..have got to know soo many things ..but want to see u..so mulakat hogya finally..

Anant: yeah (smilingly)

They both talk for some time..

Gautam: nice to meet u anant..

Anant: me too..

Precap: anant will come to see navya at her home.😉

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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Wonderful update
amazing start
would love to read next update
plz cont asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Awww so cute update :) continue soon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovelypari19

Such an interesting prologue
plz plz post update soon


thank u soo much for the comment..yup updated :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: silla

Wowww continue soon


thank u silly :) my wedding ceremony is coming so that's y little busy :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: lovelypari19

Wonderful update
amazing start
would love to read next update
plz cont asap


thank u :) busy in wedding preparation :) will try dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: JutheeAlam

Awww so cute update :) continue soon dear


thank u :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Hey! Awesome prolgue and first chapter.
So Navya is a career orientated person who is not ready for marriage but this recent bio-data of a guy suddenly made her realize that she wants to know more about this person. I can perfectly relate it with the reality as it happens in real life too.
On the other hand Anant is a very hard working and genius guy. Quite impressive and a gripping start I must say. Would love to know what happens next.
Cont. Soon!! :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part-2
Finally the day has come..when two strangers will meet each other..
Meeta-uffo kitni saari taiyari karni hain..ladke wale aarahe hain..mujhe toh bohot tension horahi hain ji..
Deepak-
Uffo meets itna pareshan hone ki kya jarurat hain ...WO log shaam ko aane wale hain ..tab tak Saab kuch intezam hojayega..tum chinta mat koro..
Meeta- mujhe bas navya ki fikar horahi hain ji..bohot mushkil se Maine usse manaya hain ..main nahi chahti ki uski dil tute
Deepak-jo kismat main hogi wahi hoga..Saab kuch kismat k havale kar do
By the time meets and Gautama come and to ask that whats going on ?
At navya's room:-
Navya is getting ready..she is wearing a red coloured anarkali..looking simple elegent .leaving her hair open in front with light make up..she is looking beautiful with natural beauty and looking in to the mirror..
Renuka- a are wah..koi toh bari hot lag rahi hain..
Navya-di aap bhi na..kuch bhi..
Renuka- aare aj toh anant ki chutti hojayegi..
Uska naam anant hain ..( in a mind )
Renuka: abhi se uske kheyal oo khoyi hain tu..( in a teasing mode )
By the time navya wear her eye glass which is very high powered..
Renuka: aaj k din bhi tu aae peheneki..mat pehen..
Navya: no DI..main chahti hu aagar koi mujhe pyaar kare main jaosi hu waise pyaar kare di ..
Renuka-agree with u..


Edited by lina19 - 9 years ago

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