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Continue...
NAVYA - wow apko b noodles pasand he
ANANT - apko b matlab
NAVYA - matlab noodles mere favourite he
ANANT - dats amazing.. Tumhari aur meri choice to kafi milti he
NAVYA - hmm
Suddenly navya remember something
NAVYA - oh god. Anant apko late nahi horaha apko office nahi jana
ANANT - oh ha. Tumse bat karne me office k bare me to bhul hi gaya
Anant gets up nd took towel to go for bath
NAVYA - anant...
ANANT - ha?
NAVYA - wo me... Me apke kapde cupboard se nikal du?
Anant looks at her with straight face. Navya was getting nervous.
ANANT - navya, u know how much I hate girls nd what does I think about them, par fir b mene tumhe apna dost banaya sirf isliye nahi ki tum alag ho balki isliye b ki tum achi ho.. Par iska matlab ye nahi ki me tumhe ek patni ka haq du..
Navya looked at him nd he continued
ANANT - shadi se mera bharosa to kab ka uth chuka he nd I am telling you me tumhe Kabhi ek pati ki khushi nahi de paunga. So plz navya don't try to change me nd plz don't try to change our relationship.. V r friends nd let it b
Navya smiled lightly nd anant went from there
NAVYA - no anant.. Me aisa nahi karungi. Aap mere pati he nd mene dadi ko promise kiya he ki me unhe unka anant wapis lakar dungi nd I vl do that...
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Navya was preparing breakfast for anant in kitchen.
SUGANDHA - navya beta
NAVYA - ji ma
SUGANDHA - wo me soch rahi thi q na tum apne ma papa k ghar ho aao. Shadi k bad se tum gayi hi nahi to ho aao
NAVYA - thk he ma. Bas anant office Chale jaye
SUGANDHA - are navya tum akele kaise jaogi. Me anant se kehti hu wo tumhe chod dega..
NAVYA - ji
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In car
ANANT - to... Aaj to aap apne ghar ja rahi he khush to bht hongi aap
NAVYA - khush to hu par isliye nahi ki me apne ghar ja rahi hu balki isliye ki me ma papa se milne ja rahi hu...
ANANT - ha to wohi to tumhara ghar hua na jaha tumhare mom dad rehte he
NAVYA - nahi.. Mera ghar to wo he jaha mere pati rehte he. Mera ghar to wo he jaha mere pati ka parivar rehta he
Anant was completely impressed by her words. It's not first time he is impressed by this girl but today she was extraordinary calling his home or family as her family nd home.. He again compared her with sonia who used to always suggest him to leave his family nd take new house for them so that she can call her boyfriend anytime...
NAVYA - anant...
ANANT - huh
NAVYA - wo ghar agaya, gadi rokiye
ANANT - hmm
He stopped the car.
NAVYA - thank you
ANANT - madam lagta he aap bhul gayi
NAVYA - oh ha... Dosti me no thanks no sry
ANANT - hm gud. Navya me tumhe pick b kar lunga. K?
NAVYA - k
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RITIKA - hmm ye to problem he
Asked ritz as they both were sitting in navya room nd chatting NAVYA - problem? Nahi to
RITZ - are nahi matlab? Uss buddhu ne tjhse kaha ki tu uski frnd he aur tu man gayi
NAVYA - ha isme galat kya he
RITZ - galat ye he ki ek ladka ladki Kabhi dost nahi ban sakte. Dhire Dhire Dosti pyar me badal hi jati he
NAVYA - chup. Pagal... Kuch b bolti he. Aisa kuch nahi he
RITZ - ha ha tu to aisa bolegi hi. Anant k category me hi ati he tu. Wah rab ne banadi jodi. Dono ek jaise
NAVYA - chup kar ritz. Ye sab bolne se acha he tu mjhe suggest kar me kaise anant ki help karu
RITZ - hmm... Tjhe pehela wala anant chahiye
NAVYA - ji ha
RITZ - to ek rasta he...
NAVYA - kya...????
...
At night anant picks up navya from her home. They both reached bajpayee house. After dinner anant was in his room nd navya was in kitchen doing work at the same time thinking how to work on ritz plan
NIMMI - bhabi ab tak aap soi nahi
NAVYA - ha bas ja hi rahi thi.. Nimmi sun to
NIMMI - ha bhabi bolo na
NAVYA - wo papa kaha he mjhe unse bat karni thi
NIMMI - papa to room me he, ma nd dadi b he. Q
NAVYA - great... Tum mere sath chalo me batati hu
...
OM - bolo bete kya bat thi
NAVYA - papa aap se permission leni thi
OM - ha bolo
NAVYA - wo papa. Parso Sunday he na to me soch rahi thi ki Kahi bahar Chale
SUGANDHA - bahar? Matlab
NAVYA - wo ma, anant Sara din kam me rehte he thak jate he, aur dadi uss din keh rahi thi ki unhone apne aap ko saza di he kam me apna man laga kar. To me soch rahi thi ki q na do Dino k liye bahar Chale sab mil kar. Anant ka man lag jayega..
Om sugandha dadi nd nimmi looks at each other nd smiled.
DADI - bas itni si bat beta? Hamari bahu kuch kahe aur hum na mane aisa ho sakta he. Q om
OM - bilkul ma. Navya hum sab bahar jayenge ghumne..
SUGANDHA - ji bilkul.
NIMMI - ha bhabi aap boliye kaha jana he, me khud tickets book karti hu, boliye kaha jane ka man he apka
NAVYA - wo papa hum sab gao Chale?
All were shocked hearing navya saying that she wants to go to their village.
SUGANDHA - gao?
NAVYA - ji ma mene suna he hamara gao bit bada he, bht acha he aur anant ko kafi pasand b he. To isliye...
Dadi come near navya nd touch her cheeck wid love.
DADI - bht kismat wale he hum jo hume tere jaisi bahu mili jo hamare anant k bare me Itna sochti he
Navya smiled
SUGANDHA - hum zarur gao jayenge. Q ji
OM - bilkul.. To tay raha Sunday ko hum sab jayenge hamare gao
NIMMI - par papa bhai ko kon samjhayega
NAVYA - wo me dkh lungi
finally navya was happy that she is going to see anant happy...

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ANANT - kya kaha tumne
NAVYA - wo... Anant wo... Hum sab... Matlab hum sab log hamare gao Chale?
Anant can't believe his ears as he heard navya asking him permission to go. Hence he was asking her again nd again making himself confirm.
ANANT - tum gao q jana chahti ho
NAVYA - actually mjhe gao dkhna tha isliye
ANANT - navya, tumhe ye jitna easy lagta he ye utna easy nahi he
NAVYA - matlab
ANANT - matlab ki hamare gao me hamari bht badi family he, tauji, taiji, bhaiyya, bhabi, aur sabse important aur sabse badi, hamari badi dadi matlab dadi ki bhabi ...
Navya was little afraid after anant stated all names who live in their village. But at this time the more important work was to take anant to their village so that he can enjoy their nd she can get close to him.
NAVYA - mjhe Koi problem nahi he
ANANT - kya
NAVYA - ha anant mjhe Koi problem nahi he. Mera to bht man he gao ghumne ka, infact mene Kabhi Koi gao dkha hi nahi that's why I am so excited. Aur rahi bat gao k logo ki to wo b to hamara parivar he nd parivar se kaisa darna.
ANANT - r u sure
NAVYA - pakka sure... Ab aap ye sab chodiye aur mjhe batayiye ki hum jayenge na
ANANT - ab tumhara Itna man he jane ka nd if you are ready to take risk then it's k.. Me tayar hu
Navya happiness was having no bound. She shout happily nd went downstairs to tell everyone whereas anant was amazed by her act.
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BAJPAYEE HAVELI this was written on the main entrance of the big quilla which was just like a mahal in which maharajas nd maharaniya would be leaving thought navya.
DADI - navya, beta ye he hamara ghar... Bht purana he..
NAVYA - bht khubsurat he Dadi
SUGANDHA - beta, sar dhak lo, yaha ghar ki bahuye sar dhake bagair nahi reh sakti.
Immediately navya covered her head with her sari pallu. All came outside the haveli to welcome them. Navya touched everyone's feet nd anant kept on looking at her nd her manners. Suddenly everyone got alert hearing someone voice.
BADI DADI - agaye tum sab
Everyone looks back to see badi dadi standing there. Seeing her dadi also covered her head with veil as she was her jethani..
DADI - pranam bhabi ji
BADI DADI - khush raho... Ye kya bat hui savitri (dadi) itne salo bad padhari ho mjhe to laga tum sab hume bhul hi gaye
OM - kaisi bat kar rahi he badi ma, apko kaise bhul sakte he
BADI DADI - huh. Tabhi to anant ki dusri shadi hogayi aur hame shadi k bad pata chala
SUGANDHA - wo badi ma sab kuch itne jaldi hua ki...
BADI DADI - rehne do tum to sugandha. Tumse ek bahu to sambhli nahi gayi...
Actually badi dadi is very strict personality nd doesn't listen anyone's. She always taunts her bahus.
BADI DADI - kaha he mere bache
Anant nd nimmi went near her nd touch her feet. She blessed them.
BADI DADI - to batao bhai anant, kaha he tumhari patni...
ANANT - ye he Dadi, navya...
Navya comes near her nd took her blessing.
BADI DADI - hmm to tum ho wo khush nasib jise mere pote ka sath mila he
NAVYA - Namaste badi dadi
BADI DADI - khush raho... Waise anant... Tumhare wo kya kehte he... Ha... Chiooize ha Chiooize bht acha he (choice)
Everyone sigh relief as navya was excepted by bd. She welcome everyone whole heartedly...
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I know guys vry boring update but it was necessary to take story further.. Sry for short one...

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