THODASA PYAR HUA HE.... THODA HE BAKI....last update @page 79 - Page 4

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Awesome update. .it's turning out beautifully .please continue soon :-)
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awww nice update..cont sooon 😳
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#33
Nice updates continue soon please
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Very well written liked it continue soon please
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CONTINUE...
Anant enters his room nd threw his bag on bed. He was very angry on himself as why he cared about any girl. Why he spoke like this to someone who has insulted her... Suddenly his cell rang.
ANANT - bol ranbir
RANBIR - anant tjhe sameer ka call aya tha na
ANANT - ha
RANBIR - so tu chal raha he na party me
ANANT - no
RANBIR - q are anant come on yar hamara dost he wo usne apni success party rakhi he v should go
ANANT - tu janta he na I hate such kind of parties
RANBIR - janta hu bt navya k liye chal. Navya b invited he na isi bahane mil legi sab se
ANANT - k k me dkhta hu
He cuts the call nd decided to talk with navya
...
Downstairs the muh dikhayi ceremony was over nd every one were almost left.
DADI - navya, beta tu b ja so ja thak gayi hogi na
NAVYA - nahi dadi it's k yaha kitna kam pada he me change karke ati hu help karne
SUGANDHA - uski Koi jarurat nahi he navya ye sab naukar kar lenge. Tu ja
NAVYA - k aunty
SUGANDHA - kya kaha aunty? Me tumhari aunty nahi sas hu. Ma bologi to mjhe acha lagega
Navya smiled nd said gud nyt to everyone.
She enters the room nd look at anant working on laptop. She goes near mirror nd started removing her jewellery. Anant keep his laptop aside nd goes near her. She took out all her jewellery nd turns around to go bt got hitted by anant. She was about to fall when anant holds her from her waist nd she support herself keeping her hands on his chest. They stair each other for sometime. He broke the eye lock nd makes her stand.
NAVYA - thank you
ANANT - it's k... Wo navya
Navya was surprised as he first time took her name
NAVYA - ji
ANANT - wo actually mera ek dost he sameer usne kal rat ko apni success party rakhi he nd v both are invited
NAVYA - hmm
ANANT - to kya tum mere sath chalogi
Navya looked at him nd nodded in yes while smiling little. He also smiled back
ANANT - k. Tum kal ready rehna me office se ane k bad tumhe pick karunga
NAVYA - k
...
Next evening navya was ready waiting for anant to go. She was looking stunning in her purple colour sari with big earing. She was waiting for him when nimmi came
NIMMI - bhabi
NAVYA - ha
NIMMI - wo bhai agaye he apko niche bularahe he
NAVYA - k
She goes outside the house. Anant was waiting for her in car. When she arrived he was again lost in her. He thought why he always gets lost in her beauty. Yes she is beautiful bt something attract him towards her some strong feelings. Infact he was really very impressed by her. He compare navya with sonia now. Sonia who always used to wear short dress nd navya how decent she is in sari...
They both arrived at the party place. Navya hug ritz nd ritz asked whether she was happy or not on which she nodded lightly..
Every one were enjoying party. Every couple was dancing bt anant nd navya were standing quite on a corner
SAMEER - yar anant chal na dance karte he
ANANT - no sameer plz
SAMEER - come on yar bhabi ko b lekar chal
NAVYA - no sameer it's k
RITZ - oh navya plz chal na yar
Finally they both agreed nd went on dance floor..
SAMEER - hey guys let me introduce newly wedded couple our own anant nd his wife navya...
ZEHENASEEB ZEHENASEEB
TJHE CHAHU BETAHASHA ZEHENASEEB
MERE KAREEB MERE HABEEB
TJHE CHAHU BETAHASHA ZEHENASEEB
anant give his hand to navya nd she expects it. He touched her waist with another hand nd she hold him by shoulder
TERE SANG BITE HAR LAMHE PE HUMKO NAAZ HE
TERE SANG JO NA BITE USPE AITRAZ HE
ISS KADAR HUM DONO KA MILNA EK RAAZ HE
They look at each other eyes nd as it was again got lost. They started swinging nd dancing...
HUA AMIR DIL GARIB
TJHE CHAHU BETAHASHA ZEHENASEEB
ZEHENASEEB ZEHENASEEB
TJHE CHAHU BETAHASHA ZEHENASEEB
Anant makes her go round three times nd she was about to fall when he catch her again from waist. He makes her stand nd again start swinging holding her from waist
LENA DENA NAHI DUNIYA SE MERA
BAS TJH SE KAM HE
TERI AKHIYO K SHEHER ME
YARA SAB INTEZAM HE
KHUSHIYO KA EK TUKDA MILE
YA MILE GUM KI KHURCHANE
YARA TERE MERE KHARCHE ME
DONO KA HI EK DAM HE
Anant nd navya were totally lost in each other. He pulls her little closer. They were inches apart. He leaves her nd make her back facing his front like back hug. He again start swinging nd she also respond
HONA LIKHA THA YUHI JO HUA
YA HOTE HOTE ABHI ANJANE ME HO GAYA
JO B HUA HUA AJIB
TJHE CHAHU BETAHASHA ZEHENASEEB
ZEHENASEEB ZEHENASEEB
TJHE CHAHU BETAHASHA ZEHENASEEB
She turned around nd keep her head on his chest while he caresses her hair. They both closed their eyes nd feel each other
HUA AMIR DIL GARIB
TJHE CHAHU BETAHASHA ZEHENASEEB
ZEHENASEEB ZEHENASEEB
TJHE CHAHU BETAHASHA ZEHENASEEB
The song got complete nd every one clapped for them. Ranbir nd ritz were so happy to see their dance. Hearing clapping sounds they open their eyes nd leave each other...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Superb updates continue soon please
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#37
Loving the way story progressing.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Loved the romantic dance of Anya
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Getting interesting with every updates
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#40
Cute update ..next part please soon :)

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