ISHQ HUA....( new update @ page 15) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow congrats on yr OS u r doing great would love to read more
do continue soon looking forward
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
nice yaar but pls update regularly
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Superb dear. ..enjoying the storyline. .please continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved the storyline continue soon please
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Posted: 11 years ago
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THANK YOU guys for liking my story nd sorry for not writing as u all expected . but next tym i will try to write properly..😊
CONTINUED...
NIMISHA- kya? aise kaise chali gayi? mujhe kisine bataya bhi nahi? (nimisha was shouting on all servants as she came to know that navya have left)
ANANT- koi kahi nahi gaya hai nimmi..
(she turned around and looked at anant who was standing near door with navya standing beside him. nimisha moved toward navya and hugged her tightly)
NIMISHA- tum thk to ho? kya hua? y r u crying? ( she asked concerning)
ANANT- chaijee aap navya ko andar leke jayiye plz..
(chaijee took navya with her in room while nimmi looked confusing towards anant)
ANANT- tu beth yaha me tujhe sab batata hu..
(anant tells nimmi eveything what happened with navya)
NIMMI-😭OMG how can be someone so cruel. god plz give strength to navya..
ANANT- me to uske piche uski medicines dene gaya tha jo wo room me bhool gayi thi. par mene use us halat me dkh liya..
NIMMI- apne bohot acha kiya bhai ki aap navya ko yaha leke agaye. aur thank u use ye job dene k liye.😊
ANANT- hmm. navya yaha safe rahegi. aur uska man bhi lag jayega bacho k sath. mujhe pura yakeen he wo bht achi CARE TAKER banegi..😊
IN ROOM..
navya was crying keeping her head on chaijee's lap. chaijee was rubbing her hands on her head making her cool down.
CHAIJEE- shhh... bas beta. zindagi har mod par hamara imtehan leti hi he. par hame iska samna bahadur banke karna chahiye. tumhare zindagi me bht dukh aye par dkhna jaldi ye dukh khushiyo me badal jayenge..
(first time in her life navya felt a motherly touch in someone. she was happy that she got someone like chaijee to whom she can share her all deeds..)
CHAIJEE- ab bas shant ho jao aur kuch kha lo..😊
NIMMI- ha navya kuch kha lo fir me tumhe un 3 shaitano se milati hu..
( navya turned around to hears nimmi's voice. she looked at her with teary eyes. nimmi goes towards her and consoles her saying everything will be alright. navya took her dinner and goes with nimmi in children's room)
IN CHILDREN"S ROOM..
nimisha shows the whole room to navya. she also shows her thir cupboard and makes her understand each single detail of each kid)
NIMMI- navya rahul sabse bada hai aur sabse samajhdar hai. actually mohan bhai aur rama bhabi k jane k bad wo ekdum shant ho gaya hai. apne me hi khoya rehta hai. tumhe uspar thoda jyada dhyan dena padega.
NAVYA-(lost in thinking) me samajh sakti hu. bachpan me parents k chale jane ka dard kya hota hai😭 tum bhi to...
NIMMI-😭 hmm.. well. ye sab chodo.. are ye 3 hai kaha?
(she calls them)
NIMMI- bacho ye he tumhari new care taker..😊
NAVYA- hi lovely kids.. may i knw ur lovely names?😊
(all of them introduces themselves to navya. she asked them their likes nd dislikes nd tried to b friendly wid them)..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its next morning. every one in mansion was busy in their work. but a beautiful voice of arti came from mandir.. yes she is navya wearing pink colour chudidar having little wet hairs. some tendrils was coming on her face. she was natural beauty. her hands were joined and eyes were closed praying something..
NAVYA- bhagwan ji plz give me strength to work and start my new life. and plz shower ur blessings on this house nd people living here..
(after praying she turned around nd got shocked.. anant was standing just behind her folding his hands near his chest nd having a slight smile on his lips.. he was completely mesmeriseed by her beauty she was complete like a fairy for him)
NAVYA- good... good morning mr.bajpayee😕
ANANT- morning navya.. well ready for ur new life?
NAVYA- ya absolutely ready..
(she was about to leave when he called her...)
ANANT- navya...
NAVYA-( she turned back) yes..
ANANT- (coming closer to her) thank u for praying for my family.. ( and he goes from there leaving navya all surprised)
IN CHILDREN'S ROOM...
all 3 of them were sleeping like angels. navya was like aaawww seeing them like this. she goes towards rahul)
NAVYA- utho rahul. see its mrng😊
RAHUL- ( while getting up) gud mrng didi😊
NAVYA- gud mrng rahul😊 (she goes near rohan) utho rohan come on come on chalo( making him get up) jaldi rohan dekho virat kohli banane k liye jaldi uthna padta hai😛
ROHAN- kya didi. ye kaisa rule hai? ( suddenly navya looked at rahul who was joining hands and praying god for his good dayy. she was completely impressed by him)
PIYA- 5 mins didi. plzzz...
NAVYA- no piya. u will b late for school. aur waise bhi mene padha hai ki jyada sone se ankho k niche dark circles ajate hai..😛
PIYA- kya? sachee?😕 lo me to uth gayee..
NAVYA- gud children.. chalo ab jaldi fresh hojao i will bring milk for u😊
( navya brought milk for them and make them ready for school)
IN BREAKFAST TABLE..
NIMMI- chaijee ye navya kaha hai kahi dikhayee nahi de rahi..
( suddenly navya enters. anant was reading newspaper but as she enters his eyes again catches the beauty infront of him)
NAVYA- gud mrng nimisha.
NIMMI- gud mrng navya. ab sabse pehele 1 kam karo. abhi se bacho ko uthana start kardo. abse uthaogi to pta nahi kab tak uthenge...
( she was not yet completed when her eyes falls on stairs from where 3 of them were coming downwards in completely ready for school.. all were shocked )
CHILDREN- gud mrng everyone😊
NIMMI- its really gud abt this mrng..😛 OMG i cant believe my eyes..
CHAIJEE- really.. navya, how u did this beta?
NAVYA- (just smiled)
ANANT- (impressed by her) thank u so much navya..😊
NAVYA- its alright mr. bajpayee😊
TO BE CONTINUED..
GOING TO BE LOTS OF FUN IN COMING PARTS.. HOPE U LIKED IT...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Awesome updates dear! 👏😳 Loved both parts a lot.. ❤️😛 & plz don't ask sorry dear.. ur way of writing is really nice..! 👍🏼 Looking fwd for ur next update..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
First of all sorry for not hitting like button as tats not working from my phone n all the updates were fab :) i m eagerly looking forward to next update dear :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Its going super duper interesting...looovveee it...can't wait for d next update...plzzz give it soon...thanx a tonnn for such a lovely ff...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Have gone through all the updates superb real story begins now thanks dear

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