ISHQ HUA....( new update @ page 15)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi guys this is my first ff on our beautiful couple ANYA.. i missed them alot nd want to write this ff for them..
CHARACTERS-
1.ANANT BAJPAYEE- 28 yrs old, handsome, kind hearted, rich and successfull business man. he is the owner of BAJPAYEE INDUSTRIES. his life circled around his bussiness nd family.
2.NAVYA MISHRA- 23 yrs old,beautiful nd silent girl. she is of very caring nature. she is an orphan nd lives in an orphanage. she is simple example of beauty wid brains.
3.NIMISHA BAJPAYEE- 23 yrs old, lovely sister of anant. she helps her brother in his office work.
4.RAHUL BAJPAYEE- 10 yrs old,eldest son of mohan and rama bajpayee. he is very silent boy. he wants to become a g8 bussiness man like his anant chachu.
5.PIYA BAJPAYEE- 7 yrs old, daughter of mohan and rama bajpayee. she is vry bubbly and wants to become actress.
6.ROHAN BAJPAYEE-7 yrs old, second son of mohan and rama bajpayee and twin brother of piya. he is very naughty and a g8 fan of virat kohli. he wants to become next virat kohli.
REST ALL CHARACTERS WILL BE SHOWN AS THE STORY PROCEEDS..
SUMMARY-
Anant lives with his sister nimisha and three children of his dead brother and sister in law. actually these children were very small when mohan and rama died in a car accident. and since then anant takes care of them. but now he is in search of a care taker for these children and meets navya. the story follows as navya as a care taker for them and how anant and navya falls in love. this story tells there journey of love..😉
PLEASE TELL ME GUYS WHETHER TO ONTINUE OR NOT.. WAITING FOR UR REPLY..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ccooolll aweeessoommee...diff story...surely continue it dear...best of luck...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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THANK YOU SO MUCH...
CHAPTER 1-
there is a dark night. streets of mumbai are totally silent when there is a noise of someone running. a beautiful girl in a white chudidar is running in a hurry with a bag in her handsearchuing for life. behind her are some mens trying to catch her. finally she enters an unknown mansion and hides behind a pillar to save her life. after some time she saw that those mens are gone. she looked here and there for help when suddenly happens to her. she started feeling pain in her head it spins and she fell on ground..😲
NEXT MORNING..
same mansion. there is a big hall and a handsome guy was sitting on a big sofa working on his lappy. suddenly a voice disturbed him..
DOCTOR- xcuse me Mr. bajpayee.
ANANT- yes doctor. so how is she now?
DOCTOR- still unconsious. she is very weak. and seems to be frightened of something.
ANANT- dont knw. well is there anything to worry?
DOCTOR- not at all mr. bajpayee. she will be fine. plz inform me in emergency. take care.
ANANT- thank you doctor. bye.
IN ROOM..
she is trying hard to open her eyes.feeling very weak. she was not able to recognise anything. she was in a big room.when suddenly her trail of thoughts broken hearing a sound of door...😲
TO BE CONTINUED..
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CHAPTER 2-

a small girl around 7 yrs old enters and stood near her and said- hello how r u nw?
NAVYA- i m fine thank you.😕
PIYA- u knw u were consious. aur mere chachu ne aapki madat ki.😊
NAVYA- oh thank... (b4 completing her words she looked at door and saw a girl standing wid a tray in her hands)
NIMISHA- how r u nw?
NAVYA- good. kya aap mujhe bta sakti he me yaha kaise?
NIMISHA- you were found in our garden area. tum behosh thi to tumhe mere bhai ne yaha laya. dnt worry doctor ne kaha hai ab tum theek ho bas weakness he ye mediciness lene se theek ho jaogi.😊
NAVYA- thank u so much. apne mere liye bht kiya he.
NIMMI- oh plz. its k. by d way myself NIMISHA BAJPAYEE. and u r in BAJPAYEE MANSION. may i knw ur name??
NAVYA- ya its NAVYA.. NAVYA MISHRA.
NIMISHA- k navya.. piya u go nd get ready 4 school..
PIYA- ok bua. take care navya didi..😊
NAVYA- thanks..
IN HALL..
ANANT- (talking on phone) nahi yaar ranbir ab tak nahi mila.
RANBIR is anant's best friend nd works with him in his office. he is cheerfull kind of guy and also has a gf RITIKA)
RANBIR- tu tension mat le koi na koi mil jayega. chal tu office aja fir bat karte he..
ANANT- k bye..
a voice came from behind- kiska phone tha beta?
( she is chaijee. when mohan, anant nd nimmi were of young age their parents died nd since then chaijee takes care of them)
ANANT- ranbir tha chaijee. me use bta raha tha ki ab tak bacho k liye care taker nahi mili.
CHAIJEE- tu q fikr karta he mil jayega koi na koi. chal tu breakfast karle fir tujhe office bhi to jana hai.😊
ANANT- jee.😊
IN ROOM...
NAVYA- ab mje chalna chahiye.
NIMMI- are aise kaise , tum weak ho doctor ne tumhe rest k liye bola he. tum theek hojao fir chalijana.
NAVYA- but..
NIMMI- no navya. tum meri bat mano aur rst karo..
TO B CONTINUED...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was totally awesome. Loved the cs,the first as well as the second part. Do cont. soon!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Firstly thank you so much for starting a new ff. .storyline seems to be interesting. .loved the first part please continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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CONTINUED...
It was evening now. Navya was arranging room properly.
NAVYA- (in mind) mujhe ab yaha se chale jana chahiye. is se pehele ki wo log mujhe dhundhte hue yaha tak ajaye mujhe jana chahiye.
she took her bag and moved outside to leave.
IN HALL..
CHAIJEE- ye le chai. bohot thak gaya hai na?
ANANT- ha. aaj meeting bohot der tak chali.
suddenly he hears a noise of anklets. he turns around nd looked at navya who was coming downstairs. he got lost in her beauty. they have a eyelok which got broken up by chaiijee..
CHAIJEE- are beta why are u here? aram karo.
NAVYA- no thanks ab mujhe jana chahiye.
ANANT- but aise achanak? mera matlab he sham ho gayi he aap kal subah chali jana.
NAVYA- no no thanks. apne waise hi mere liye bohot kiya he.
ANANT- OK
NAVYA- thank u so much mr... mr. bajpayee.
ANANT- its k.
she moved from there and he kept on looking at her while going. something wierd happened to him while talking with her. something different, special😳
Navya was walking on road looking here and there. she was covering her face with duppatta so that no one can identify her. suddenly a car stopped infront of her. those same mens came out. she got shocked and was moving backward when suddenly 1 man catch her wrist..
MAN- ab kaha jayegi navya rani.? bohot bhag liya ab chal..😡
NAVYA- nahi me nahi aaungi. mujhe jane do.. plz..😭
she struggled when another man catches her 2nd hand..
2 MAN- chup chap chalti hai ya kisi aur tareeke se samjhau??😡
she started crying badly😭 she got frightened when suddenly a voice came from behind...
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ANANT- wo kahi nahi jayegi..
all of them turned around and looked anant standing there ready to beat them..
MAN- kon he be tu?
ANANT- teri maut..😡
he gave a tight punch to that man. that man fall on ground. Navya hide herslf behind as she knw that this time also this man will save her life..😳
ANANT- bhago yaha se. aur agli bar kisi bhi ladki k same aankh uthane ki koshish bhi ki to aisa hal karunga ki kabhi nahi bhoologe..😡
2MAN- dekh lenge tujhe. aur tu navya rani tu to gayi ab..😡
all of them left from there.
Navya sat on bench near road and cried😭
ANANT- (by giving her water) tum theek hona?
NAVYA-😭jee.. thank u..
ANANT- daro mat navya. ab wo chale gaye hai. waise kon the wo? tum janti ho unhe?
NAVYA- wo.. wo darasal. wo..😭 (she paused)
ANANT- koi bat nai. if u r nt willing to tell me then its. 😊 chalo ab utho..
he stood up and started to walk when suddenly she said..
NAVYA-😭 wo mere mamaji k gunde the..
he stopped and looked at her she was still crying he again goes near her and sits besides her..
NAVYA-( continued) i m an orphan. me 1 orphanage me rehti hu. me jab choti thi tabhi mere paerents ki death hogayi thi😭. me orphanage me rehna pasand karti thi.phir achanak 1 din mere mamaji aye mujhe lene. mujhe bohot khushi hui ki me apne ghar jaungi, apne logo k pass..phir 2 3 sal me apne mamaji k yaha rahi. par jab me 23 sal ki hui tab mere mamaji ne apne asli rang dikhaye..unhone mujhe 1 WILL pe sign karne ko kahaaur mene unpar bharosa kiya. par mera bharosa toot gaya jab mjhe pata chala ki unhone mujhe 1 gunde ko bech diya😭
(she cried for sometime and then continued) mujhe jab pata chala ki wo will mere papa ki thi wo unhone mere nam ki thi par mere mama ne use chin liya. mene unhe bohot request ki unhone meri ek nahi suni. aur jab wo mujhe bechne ja rahe the me waha se bhag gayi. 2 mahino se me chup rahi hu. par kal unhone mujhe dhoondh liya. me bhagte bhagte apke ghar chali ayi aur wahi behosh ho gayi..(tear dropped from her eye)
ANANT- (also having tears😭) shant ho jao navya. ab me hu na?
NAVYA- (looked in his eyes) matlab?
ANANT- chalo mere sath batata hu me tumhe..
they got up and started walking back to mansion...
TO BE CONTINUED...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its going super damn niceee...I am just loving it,,...awweesssoommmeee...

PS. Whenever u update ur FF, edit ur topic n put d pg no, of d update in ur post...it will bcum easy for ppl to recognise Dat u have updated...

Thanx...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow loved the storyline a lot dear! 👏😃 Read all the parts.. Plz do cont. the next part soon.. 😛 Good going! 👍🏼

p.s. & plz do edit the topic with part no. & pg no. so that it'll be easy for us to search for ur next update.. 😊

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