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Posted: 12 years ago

contd..

part24:

He ran 2wards the car parking and started his car in hurry.Everything was picturizing like a movie before his eyes from the starting"The first meet of navya in hospital,when she presented the most memorable and precious gifts for his birthday,the day when she sprayed pepper gun in his face,and wiped his face with water,he could feel her touch,but when he turned 2 see her,she was not there.Valentines day celebration in mall,how they struggled to win that game and the title"Best Jodi-2013".Then it was the same day they get married,fought with each other mainly bcoz of their ego and they get separated for around 3 months".

When these memories were flashing in his mind,he was abt to hit the lorry infront of him,but he somehow managed to move away from it and hit the tree in the side road and his head was bleeding lightly.But he came out to senses and turn the car,started driving fastly.Atlast he reached the destination.It was the railway station,he parked the car and run into the mass crowd.He checked the platform number of Mumbai-chennai express which was to start at sharp 5:57 from the junction.Moving out all the crowd finally he reached the platform by someway.

He was searching for his life.He don't want to loose her again.He hardly searched in every compartment but he couldn't find her.His head was aching that he couldn't move further bcoz of bleeding from his forehead.He was slowly losing his consciousness. It was 5:50pm now and the receptionist is announcing that the train is just have 7 more minutes to move from the station.He dnt know where to go now,where to search his life.

He prayed to god in his mind"ganapathi plz help me find my navya,plz dnt take her away from me".just then a dupatta from the window covered his face through the air.The dupatta was a known one to him.He could feel that his soul is just near him.He slowly uncovered his face by taking out the dupatta and saw the girl who was sitting in windows seat.It was navya who was closing her eyes and crying😭.tears rolled down her cheeks.His happiness touched the peak.He dnt have any words to utter except the only word that brightens his life"Navya".

She could feel his voice it was none other than her one and only Anant.She opened her eyes and saw the person who was standing near her in the platform.A chill air give an electrifying shock to both of them.Their eyes get locked into their eyelids nothing comes out from the sweet lockup except the salty tears sloping down their eyes.Atlast he broke the silence.

A:y u did tis to me navya?tell me!!!😭

She has no words to his question except her silence and her tears😭.

N:Anant,plz go from here

A:No,I wont go anywhere,until u come with me

N:Anant plz'.try to understand

A:first u try 2 understand navya.what do u think in ur mind?if u go from here,u thought I'll for get u right,no it wont happen,my heart is beating 1ly for ur presence,if u went away I'll bcome a dead one😭.

Navya was pleased by his words,but she couldn't move with him.

A:come with me navya,lets move from here.

The train started to move slowly but she is not coming out.

A:navya train jaarahi hai,get down from it

N:that's what I'm saying Anant,train is moving,go from here(crying badly)😭

Meanwhile a porter striked Anant with a hook unknowingly which give a high punch in his chest.

He fell down crying out "Navya"in the platform.Navya was damn shocked😲 seeing tis.She pulled out the train chain and get down from it.She rushed to Anant and stand beside him.Everyone in the platform surrounded them.She was freezed.He lost his consciousness.She place his head over her lap and cried out loudly😭.Tears are shedding like a river from her swollened eyes😭.Her cheeks turned red😭.

N:Anant plz woke up,I need u,I cant live without u,plz Anant woke up.From the day when I saw u,I decided that u r my life😭.without u I'm like a fish without water,plz open ur eyes to give me life😭.I'm sry Anant,u tried 2 convince me at many times but my mind didn't accept that bcoz of my ego,now I'm saying Anant"I love u,I love u so much Anant I love u more than anything else in the world😭 "

She rested her head in Anant's chest and cried hardly😭.The time it reached sharply 6:00.the whole crowd's gaze was at these lovely couples.She is weeping barely lying in Anant's chest😭.Anant looked her through his one eye😉 and coughed.she heard his voice and saw him.He smirked seeing her😉.

She was confused😕.He pointed out the clock which reached sharp 6:00 indicating her😉.She saw the time and looked at him.He grinned and winked at her😉.Navya understood what happened.Her anger raised to the peak😡.

N:u cheater''''😆😆.(and was abt to hit him with her hand)

But Anant escaped from her and ran away.She started chasing and ran behind him😆😆.

N: Anant stop,u cant escape from me today,I'll get u😆

A:lets see that Mrs.Bajpai😆

N(still running couldn't catch him):how dare u do tis,cheater cock?😆😆

A:dnt call me cheater cock,u r a thief,u tried to take my heart with u na?😆

N:Me,Me thief😆

A:S,u r a thief😆

The whole crowd was laughing 😆on seeing their cute fights.Suddenly they realized what they were doing and stopped their fight.Anant stretched out his hand and sighed navya for a hug😉.She felt very happy and run towards him and give a tight hug to her prince charming😳.The whole crowd applauded for their chemistry and salute them for their love🥳👏.


sry guys,tis is the update,i think it is over dramatical,plz dnt throw chappals,hit like and throw ur honest comments😃


Edited by gowripriya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
In 1st part u just scared me :p bt after that superb situation for Navya's confession with Anant's naughtiness...and the end was so sweet with their cute fight...weldone :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow gowri update romba romba nala iruku...super update finallly navya confessed her love dt ws rly gud totally the whole update ws superb big big big big hug luv u...cont soon. Luv waiting fr ua next romantic update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nd congo fr bcumin a goldie.
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barunshaheer thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

thank u so much jaman😛

barunshaheer thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: riaasr

In 1st part u just scared me :p bt after that superb situation for Navya's confession with Anant's naughtiness...and the end was so sweet with their cute fight...weldone :)

actually i thought 2 stop 2day with the 1st part,but my mood changed,thank u so much ria,glad u liked my update😛

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Posted: 12 years ago
y u ended FF yaar 😭 i ddnt expect u will end it 😭 plz cont anya story na plzzz
Edited by chandni4433 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ac23_shamya

Wow gowri update romba romba nala iruku...super update finallly navya confessed her love dt ws rly gud totally the whole update ws superb big big big big hug luv u...cont soon. Luv waiting fr ua next romantic update...

Nd congo fr bcumin a goldie.

ur comment means a lot 2 me dear,A big wala hug 2 u too dear,luv u🤗thank u so much dear😛

barunshaheer thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chandni4433

y u ended FF yaar 😭 i ddnt expect u will end it 😭

oh no jabina,plz dnt worry,i thought 2 end tis ff,but if u guys want me 2 cont then sure i'll cont it,k,tell me how was the update?😛

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: JUTHEE

Nice post dear...:)

thanx a lot juthee dear😛

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