RS THE FAREWELL GIFT: In 5 parts index page 1 - Page 21

Created

Last reply

Replies

248

Views

12.4k

Users

42

Likes

391

Frequent Posters

titleepari thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
First of all thank you friends for liking the RS so much and secondly I am sorry to keep yo all waiting actually i was a bit busy and hence couldn't find time to update the RS.. But I am finally back with the final update of the RS.. Hope you guys like it.. here you go guys😃

THE FAREWELL GIFT-PART 5




"Anant Navya kahan ho??"cried Ranbir as he looked around the backyard. Ritz and Appy was also with Ranbir.

"Party is also over but God knows where Navya and Anant have disappeared?" said Appy

"Ranbir call Anant once again na." said Ritz..

"Kitni baar call karun yaar.. woh to tabse bol raha hai 'aa raha hun' pata nahi kahan hai.. ek kaam karo Navya ko call karo.."

"Ranbir par Navya ka phone switched off hai.. kabse try kar rahi hun usse.. Ek aur baar Anant ko call karo na plz.." replied Ritz

"Yaar pata nahi yeh dono kahan gaye!! pura college chhan mara kahin bhi nahi hai.. ruko karta hun Anant ko phirse call.. " Ranbir took out his cell phone but just when he was about to call him he received a text message.

"kiska message hai??" asked Appy and Ritz together.

"Anant ka.. bol raha hai ki woh ghar chala gaya hai aur Navya ko aunty ka call aaya tha is liye usse Anant ne ghar drop kar diya.. batake nahi ja sakta tha.. kal uski khair nahi... ab chalo hum bhi chalte hai.." said Ranbir

"pakka Navya uske saath gayi hai??" asked Appy wid a doubtful expression..

"Haan Appy Anant ne to yehi kaha.. kyun??" said Ranbir

Appy's expression changed to a naughty one. she looked at Ritz and said, "dekha maine bola tha na.. They do like each other.."

"Kya Appy kuch bhi bolti hai.. chal ab der ho rahi hai.."

"Arre par maine aisa kya bol diya tum log bhina..." as Appy spoke all three of them started walking towards the college gate..

As Appy's voice faded away and silence took over, Anant and Navya breathed a sigh of relief. They were hiding behind the huge Banyan tree that stood in the backyard of their college.

Anant peeped out his head from their hiding place to make sure that their friends were gone. When he was sure that they were gone he turned back to look at Navya who was very nervous still. He saw that she clutched onto his shirt very tightly and realized that he himself was holding her by her waist. She was so close to him. He looked at her admiring her beauty. He didn't want to look away... din't want to let her go.. he wanted to keep looking at her.. keep holding her close to him like this forever..

"Anant??" spoke Navya who was still looking down & was tense..

There was no reply.. Now she looked up at Anant and saw that Anant was looking at her so intensely that he seemed lost. Navya blushed. She too realized now that they were too close and that she held him by his shirt and he held her by her waist. She immediately left his shirt and said "Anant woh chale gaye na.." she dint say anymore but Navya leaving his shirt was enough for Anant to understand what she wanted to convey. He let her go too.

They were quiet again.

"Navya waise tumne mujhe thank you nahi kaha??"

"Thank you?? " said Navya a bit confused..

"yes..thank you.. kyun ki ma'am agar maine Ranbir ko message nahi kiya hota to woh mujhe phone kardeta aur agar woh mujhe phone karta to mera phone bajne lagta aur agar mera phone bajne lagta to tum pakdi jati.. to maine aapke liye itna kuch kiya to ek thank you to banta hai.." said Anant wid a cute smile on his face.

"main pakdi jati?? agar tumhara phone bajta to kya sirf main pakdi jati.. tum bhi to pakde jate to yeh sab tumne sirf mere liye thodina kiya apne liye kiya.." said Navya

"Bilkul nahi kisiko bhi pata chale mujhe koi phark nahi padta.. main to chikh chikh ke sabse kehne wala hun ke I Love You Navya!!" Anant shouted out.. as he did so he had a broad smile on his face.

Navya was smiling with all her heart. She felt so lucky... so blessed today.

Anant was happy to see her happy.. Both smiled looking at each others smiling faces.

"waise we should also thank the banyan tree.. agar aj yeh nahi hote to phir to hum pakka phasne wale the.. chhupte kahan??"

As Anant said this Navya burst out into laughter and Anant laughed along with her.

As Navya kept laughing.. Anant stopped laughing and looked at Navya laughing with all her heart instead.. *how can a girl be so beautiful,so simple, so innocent??* thought Anant. He felt lucky...really lucky that she loved him...

Navya stopped laughing when she realized that Anant was looking at her and felt shy..

"Anant bohot raat ho gayi hai.. hum ghar chale.." said Navya softly..

Anant had forgotten all about the rest of the world and Navya mentioning "ghar" made him realize that it indeed was quite late and they should get going though he didnt want to..

"Hmmm..."

"To chale Anant.." said Navya

Anant nodded. Navya started walking. But then suddenly realised that Anant wasnt following her. she turned back and said "Anant chalo.."

"Jane ka man nahi kar raha.. kya hum yahin nahi ruk sakte??"

Navya looked up at him and smiled.. "chalo Anant.."

Anant smiled back came up to her and held her hand.. Navya was surprised but loved the gesture at the same time.. together they walked hand in hand towards the parking ground.
******

They had reached Navya's apartment and Navya was about to leave the car when Anant said "Navya"

Navya looked at Anant..

"I have Got Something for you.." saying this he took out a small box and handed it to Navya and asked her to open it.

Navya opened it and saw that there was a very small silver heart inside it.. she looked up at Anant.. She loved it.. she was overhelmed with emotions..

"pata hai yeh kya hai??"

navya shook her head..

"Mera Dil hai.. sambhal ke rakhna.."

Navya just smiled in reply.. Anant smiled along.. But suddenly Navya became serious..

"Kya hua??" Anant asked

"Anant maine to tumhe kuch bhi nahi diya.. mere paas to tumhare liye koi gift nahi hai.." she looked sad..

Anant smiled and said "tumne to mujhe mera gift de diya"

Navya was confused and looked at Anant with a questioning expression.

"Tumse badh kar koi gift ho sakta hai mere liye??" you are the best gift I have Navya.. Thank you.. the farewell night will be the most memorable night of my life and you the best farewell gift I got."

As Anant finished speaking Navya was in tears again. she could not express in words how she felt at the moment. Anant understood her feelings bend forward towards her from his seat and wiped her tears..

The lovers embraced and professed their love for each other again and this time it was the lady who professed love first..



...


PS Thank you so much for reading the RS... You guys have been really great and supportive.. hope I have been able keep it up to your expectations..

Likes, Dislikes, Tamatar ,ande all are welcome😃
lifelessons66 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
awesum...superb...luvd it 2 da core!!!!!!!🤗
navya19 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
Wow beautuful update...perfect end. Loved anant message to ranbir and anya hiding..
want to read more amazing rs from u titlee...
Edited by navya19 - 13 years ago
titleepari thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: malini6941

sorry for the late reply, read both 3rd and the 4th update, both are equally brilliant and nostalgic.


Thank you so much😊
titleepari thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: NEHASHAMYA1

wooowww its a lovely story...gr8 job done by u...


Thank you Nehu :))
-Divya.S- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
wah kaya gift tha, so cute and perfect. brilliently written yar.. excellent job titlee.. thanq so much d rs.. and a big 🤗 4 d beautiful update of d rs.. shall wait 4 d next 'coming soon' rs..
Edited by -diva-shamya- - 13 years ago
malini6941 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
what a beautiful RS, loved every bit of it- how both of them professed their feelings , their awkwardness, the silence that existed between their convos , their gestures and the overwhelming presence of love- it has been remarkable.
titleepari thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Aishwarjya

Wonderful RS..👏..eagerly waiting for the next part..😊


thank you Aishwarjya😊
shahz thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
That was beautifull yaar...Is that the end of ur RS?Plz continue its just too good and you have a gr8 scope for Interesting tracks..And ur such an amazing writer. 😛
titleepari thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: malini6941

what a beautiful RS, loved every bit of it- how both of them professed their feelings , their awkwardness, the silence that existed between their convos , their gestures and the overwhelming presence of love- it has been remarkable.


thank you so much Malini.. I thank you all the more for noticing the minute details of my RS.. it truly feels very nice to know that you liked the RS.. 😊

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".