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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
Lovely... 😊
nxt part plzz šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago
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šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘this storyline is very different neetha...
sory for late comment
i m looking forward 2 it...pls update it soon
i know ur ss will be awesomeee
i m waiting for ur updatešŸ‘
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i'm sure dis 1 z gonna b as amazng as ur lst ff...cntinue soon neetha dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
continue soon dr...ur last ff waz mind blowng nd ths wuld also b a dhamakedaar...all the bst 4r ur new ff...strt soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Continue Soon... Very Excited😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ur stories r always amaazing :) Love to see the story soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@all:thank u soo much guys fr appreciatin ma write up n givin such a gud
response..u knw it means a lot to me..well ths ss is quite different frm ma last
ff..in ths navya n anant as characters are very very differnt frm usual anant n
navya in the serial..u gt to stictly imagine navya as hot n beautiful lady..wit
loads of attitude..n anant as a very very hot lukin guy(well tats nt hard to
imagine)very stylish wit formal outfits.The chemistry between anya shud be imagined very very intense n passionately..dont frgt ever..
Edited by neetha - 13 years ago
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SUPPORTING ROLES INTRO

Ranbir bajpayee:Anant's cousin n his only best friend.A guy who is exactly
opposite of Anant..full masti chore..enjoys life to the fullest..works wit anant
n his personal advisor.He guides ananth in all matters n he is the only guy annat
trusts.

Ritika Bhat(ritz):Navya's childhood friend.Born in a middle class family she is
very much matured in her thinkin n behaviour.She loves navya genuinely n navya
too loves her immensely.She guides navya in all her major decisions.

Aparna Rao(appy):Navya's anoher bestie.Brought up in a rich family like navya she
is more of a bindaas n funfilled gal.She loves navya n ritz a lot.She is ver
kiddish but mature at times.

Aditya raichand:A damn rich handsome guy.He is navya's senior in college n she is
datin him frm past 6 months.He is a spoilt brat.He can never be serious about
relationships.He is datin navya only coz of her luks.

Edited by neetha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow di plz start sn!me seriously msn ur writings.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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CHAPTER 1

*bg music dhintana*

navya:arre yaar..jaldi karo n plss teek se karo...
beautician:ji mam..

navya was surrounded by a group of beauticians who wer doin manicure n
pedicure..paintin her nails etc..she was sittin in a lavish bedroom..whose walls
wer painted in pink n all furnitures in white..it had this beautiful curtains
hung wic wer also in white..it was total girlish room..

navya:aaj valentines day hai..aur mujhe col time par pohunchna hai..n i wana luk
PERFECT..
beautician:ji mam..aap hamesha hi perfect dikhthi ho..
navya:ya well i knw tat..ab jaldi karo..time waste mat karo..
beautician:k mam..

navya gets ready wit another half an hour..n she stood ther right in the front of
the mirror wit her hand on her waist..she was lukin absolutely super hot in a red
gown wic was knee length..her long beautiful hair was untied..her black stellitos
wer perfect..she luked like an angel down earth..

navya:(to herself)aww..i soo pity other gals..becahri.main jab ladkon ke saamne
rehthi hu toh koi aur ladkiyon ki taraf dekhega bhi nahi..m soo gorgeous isnt
it..well navya m soo jealous of u..

she gives a broad proud smile n walks out of her room..

in the dining table:

deepak is sittin on the chair in front of the dinin table n readin the
newspaper..navya cums frm behind n hugs her dad..

deepak:aa gayi meri beautiful beti..
navya:haan dad..aur plss aap breakfast ke time par na..yeh newspaper ko side main
rakhiye..
deepak:tum no kuch cheezon main bilkul apni mom par gayi ho..
navya:hmm..i knw..ab khana kha lijiye..aur i gt to go to col soon..
deepak:hmm..but y??n aap aaj kuch zyada hi khubsurath lag rahi hai..
navya:ofcourse dad..aaj valentines day hai..n u knw evevry year main hi valentine
queen banti hu..soo..
deepak:oh..i gt it..
navya:k dad..m done..m leavin..shaam ko aap se milti hu k..byee
deepak:haan beta bye..

she kisses her dad on cheek n rushes towards her car..she starts drivin the
car..it was rainin really heavy n all the roads wer blocked due to fillin of
rainin water..so she decided to take a shortcut route..

navya:iss barish ko bhi aaj hi itne zor se barasna tha..goshh yaar..i gus ab
mujhe woh shortcut road hi lena padega..hmm..hope wahan koi nai museebat na ho.

she takes a turn n drives super fast in reaches the shortcut road ka start
point..the road luked clear n fine..so she decides to drive in there..the road
was calm wit no traffic..she was happily drivin ke suddenly..she had to stop the
car..!!!

navya:yeh kaun pagal hai..beech raaste main car rok di hai isne..

she starts hornin continuously..

navya:oye gadi hata..are u crazy..

no reaction frm the other side..she gets pisd off wit ths behaviour..she gets
down frm her car..n walks towards the car..she knocks the car windows..there is
no reaction again..so she harly hits the car windows again..the windows start
slidini down..

ther he was the epitome of perfection..a very handsome n charmin man..he had those
silky hai..his lips wer perfectly pink..his complexion was again perfect.but his
eyes..ahh!!not yet..those bloody glazer had covered them..he had his earhones
connected n luked like he had some serious conversation in the phone..the man
luked super rich in his entirely black office suite n he undoubtedly defined
"PERFECTION"..

navya:tum kya pagal ho gaye ho..ya behere ho..sunayi nahi deta..kab se horn baja
rahi hu..car hatao yahan se..
anant:(in call)excuse me..main apko baad main cal kartha hu..

luks at navya n gives a tuf luk..removes his glare..he gets down frm the
car..luks at her top to bottom..

anant:haan..bolo kya keh rahi thi tum??
navya:yahi..ki tumhara dimaag teek hai ki nahi??
anant:tum jis tarah se baat kar rahi ho..isse toh yeh lagtha hai ki..tumhari akal
ghaas chaarne gayi hai..
navya:(super angry)wat??hello mister..tum nahi jante tum kisse baat kar rahe
ho...
anant:oh..i really dont wanna knw..
navya:luk m nt interested to get into arguments so apni car hatao..n mujhe jaane
do..
anant:nahi hata saktha..
navya:(she gets total pisd..she walks closer to him)i said car hatao ryt nw..
anant:(he steps more closer to her..n nw her back is stickin the car n anant
leanin on her..n starightly lukin into her eyes..)firstly..apni yeh do badi badi
ankhon ko na teek se kholo..aur dekho..(he is bitin his lips in anger..u knw
attitude kinda talk)
navya:(she had never seen such amazin pair of eyes ever in her life)huh??
anant:coz of landslide raasta kharab ho gaya hai..n u cant drive further..(still
attitude)
navya:(luks at the road..pushes him away)soo..toh..tum keh sakthe the na..main
khamaka itni rude nahi hoti..
anant:tumne mujhe baat karne ka mauka hi kaha diya..miss..watever..
navya:(poutin)navya..mera naam navya mishra hai..gt it??
anant:well m nt interested..navya mishra ho ya jhansi ki rani..(n turns his face)
navya:(whining)well..ahh m losin ma temper..dekho well..i dont wanna fight k..tum
pls apni gadi hatao..
anant:tum kya apna brain ghar par chodkar ati ho??
navya:wat do u mean??
anant:rastha age kharab hai..so hume gadi peeche lena hai..toh tumhari gadi mere
raaste main hai..so u ll hav to back out first..
navya:(patch)oh..huh..ya..k..k..
anant:(again steps closer to her)apna dimag na istemal kiya karo..
navya:(lukin into his deep eyes)yaa..

n she walks away steps into her car..n reversed her car n drove off..he drove the
car at her speed..they reached the start point of the road..navya luked at him
frm her window..wit a ngry face..n a viceversa frm his window too..she as abt to
drive ki he cut her way n drove away faster..she suddenly applied the break n hit
her hand hard..

navya:ouch!!!gosh i soo hate this man..sadoo..

~~~CHAPTER 1 END~~~

K GUYS...m really sorry fr being soo late..m n keepin well frm past two weeks..so i cudnt write..so hope u like ths new ss..n giv me the same response as u guys
did fr ma ther write up's..do hit the like button n do comment..
Edited by neetha - 13 years ago

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