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Posted: 13 years ago

navya ko kuch samaj nahi aa raha tha'.anant was driving '.he knew navya was confused or she wanted to know what was in his mind. He looked at her. Kept his hand on hers : navya kya soch rahi ho? Tume shaadi pe wapas jaana hai kya?uss aunty ke saath baatein puri nahi hui kya? He asked with a smile.

Navya was astonished'anant tum bhi na'.. baat kuch nahi hai,bas yu hi '

Anant; navyaaa (in a pacifying manner) meine sabse baatein ki, mei koi jaldi mei nahi nikala'.. tumare aane se pehle hi mei sabse mil chuka tha'aur zyadaa der wahan rahke kya karenge'hum unhe wish karne gaye the aur wish bhi kiye haina?

Anant baatein karthe hi gaadi chala raha tha''.

he continued : Aur waise bhi unhe kamre tak chodkar aana chahiye tha kya? He teased her''

Navya too smiled back like a kid. : Nahi nahi meine kuch nahi kaha'.tum teek se gaadi chalao'..

Anant knew she wanted to know where they were going but he didn't want to tell her and moreover it was only a few more minutes drive''anant road pe hi concentrated tha par navya ki nazar anant par hi thi'.she was just admiring him his looks ,way of driving ..usse patha hi nahi tha ki anant ko patha tha ki navya was looking at him'

Anant: kya baat hai aaj bahut khoi hui ho?

Navya came out frm her dreamland made her hairs back her ears and looking down : kuch nahi'smilingly'

Anant: kuch tho hai'.. ya phir abhi bhi aunty se milna hai , ya tum confused ho ,,,ya phir mujse kuch kahna hai'..

Navya knew she cant hide anything frm him' . : wo meri ek ek haal ko pehchantha hai..

she told :wo ... anant mei tumhe iss sherwani mei dekh rahi thi, baut hi ache lag rahe ho' and blushed..

Anant: (was very happy to hear this frm her but hiding his feelings) : haaan wo tho hai' aisa lagna hi tha'. Paused a bit : issiliye hall mei saari ladkiyaan muje hi dekh rahi thi'ab samja...Miss kiya na , jaldi nahi aana chahiye tha'. Tum teek sochthi ho'agli baar kissi shaadi pe jayenge tho wai rukenge'

Navya's mouth opened wide'. She screwed up her face : and in her mind: (tho teek hai,, uss ladkiyon ke saath raho ) and without uttering a word looked out of the window. She wanted to make anant feel that usse anant ki baton se koi farq nahi hua ,,,

And kaha : haha agle baar tum wahi rah jaana aur sab ke jaane ke baad hi aaana..with a half voltage smile.

Anant understood she was pretending but didn't like his words''..he laughed deep inside but keeping all seriousness in his face : ji amal karunga'.

Navya was looking outside, she didn't want that convo to continue' kaise wo mere saath aisa kah raha hai..jaise ki koi farq hi nahi hai'' dikhathi hoon'.

The wind was blowing ,its chillness increased as they climbed more'finally the car reached a pavement which was beautifully lit with lights that was not too bright and not too dull. It gave a soothing effect to the surrounding. By first look itself anyone would feel that it was a resort like place as the pointed domes of the cottages were seen from the entrance. Navya was feeling happy that anant wanted to bring her to this place. Par ye sab ussne kab arrange kiya aur kaise'.. bathaya hi nahi..but she didn't show her happiness. Anant drove the car into the parking lot which had markings made for the halting of each vehicle. He got out after parking it and navya too. An attender came up to them and greeted them; sir aaki cottage ready hai'jaisa aapne bathaya wahi arrange kiya hai'

Navya ko samaj nahi aa raha tha ki kya ho raha hai'. jaisa bathaya 'kissne bathaya..

Annat ko patha tha ki ye sab sawal hai navya ke mann mein'he took their bags out and the attender took it to their rooms.

Anant: navya achi jagah haina'' tumhe pasand aaya?

Navya: nodding an yess smiled back to him.she was still confused but.

Anant: chalo tand kuch zyaada hi hai aaj'.

And they walked to the reception to get their keys'..

Once inside the room, navya was quite relived. It was a beautifully arranged room with the relevant furnitures and other accessories. Navya liked it a lot. It had a balcony , a small one facing to the lawn on the other side of the resort. The balcony had steps to mount down into the lawn. The lawn was surrounded by huge walls and to the other side of the wall a big building was seen . The room boy came to enquire if they needed their food and anant replied that they would have from next day as they had dinner. He kept the water jug and left . anant closed the door . it was then that he noticed ki that usske kurthe pe kuch kaga hua tha, 'kuch tha baclk coloured ..shayad ..shaadi par ..kuch lag gaya ho'

He turned towards navya 'she was standing at the balcony enjoying the view 'the lawn , the kids play area '. the small pet animal area where she could see rabbits and white ducks in the cages''.she was standing cool'..

Anant felt not to disturb her'.he just told 'navya mei change karke aatha hu'kurthe pe kuch laga hua hai..she looked at him and asked mei clean karu?

Anant: nahi 'laundry wale se hi hoga'nahi tho kurtha spoil ho jayega'.

Mai zara change kar lu'.

Navya said ok and anant went to get changed up. Navya was liking the place and its atmosphere. It was calm and the chilness also was not much. A cool breeze was blowing which made her hairs to fly from one side'. The moon was shining brightly'..navya looked at it'
Anant came out and saw that ki navya was standing still in the balcony. He was now in his regular t shirt and pants. He went to the balcony..saw navya there'she didn't notice him as her eyes were at the ful moon , felt as if she was talking with it.
Aur anant ki baath tho kahana hi nahi '..wo tho apni jahlli ko hi dekh raha tha. Her flying hairs ,,one sided pallu that was slowly dancing with the wind and her calmness made her even more beautiful in front of him. He just went up and hugged her from the back.

Navya felt a sudden jerk on her..she smiled a bit: anant kya kar rahe ho ? turning at him through her side face'.

Tum kya kar rahi ho'.? Yahan ?

She was lost in the beauty of the place that she suddenly told...wo chaand ko dekho na'kaise hastha hua khada hai'sab se baathein kar raha hai''

Aannt looked at the moon and looked at her.

Navya: mei as aise hi uss chaand ko dekh rahi thi'.bahut khubsurat haiii

Anant: haan bahut khubsurat haiii..anant ki aankhen tho navy ape thi'' wo navya ko dekhkar hi bol raha tha'..

Navay : haina? Aur uska chehra kitnaa saaf hai , kuch bhi nahi hai phir bhi bahut acha lag raha hai'.

Anant: haan bahut acha hai'. par jhumke jke saath tho aur bhi achi lagthi hai''.

He told in his sweet tone. Navya now turned to him..his eyes were fixed on her.

tum kisske bare mei baath kar rahe ho?

Anant: chaand ke bare mei'.stil hugging her

Navya : chaand ke baare mei ...(wo kuch samji nahi...)

Anant: haaan apne iss chaand ke bare mein. Pointing his face towards hers. Navy now felt a bit shy but then she thought of anants dialogue and turned back again with a roothi hui face' par tumhe tho wahan shaadi mei bahut saare chaand dikhe na? tho muje hi kyun

Navya was enjoying that he told about her but phir bhi ek choti si shikayat tho thi usse'.

Anant: tum abhi bhi uss baat pe ho? And tightened his hug'saying mera chaand tho sirf aur sirf tum ho'tumhe patha hai'phir bhi..yu hi'puchthi ho nahi? Slowly brushed his face on her side face stil tightening his hug. . she felt a chillness.

Navya ; nahi ,,nahi patha hai' she pretended as if she was a bit angry.

Anant knew it was her pretention , smilingly at her back: acha tho ab bathatha hu kit um hi meri chaand ho' and moved her hairs that covered her back. Navya eyes widened thinking what he was upto ki ussne slowly navya ke back pe kiss kiya.

Anant!!!! Said navya soflty taking out the words as she was totally absorbed in his arms. The cool wind passed them.

Kya kar rahe ho? Ye balcony hai''.

Anant opening his eyes '.still holding her; tho kya karna hai'. asked her by turning her towards him with one hand stil the other around her . madam ko samjahane ke liye'..

His face was too close to hers. Usski annkhon mei sirf pyaar hi pyaar tha. Navya usse dekhthe hi sharma gayi'aur sir jhuka diya.. wo ..she had a small smile brightening up as she thought she can tickle him to leave the hold and was about to'.. ki phone baja. Navya's ful attention was on it now. Anant phone 'and moved a step facing the room..as anant's hold on her had loosened a bit when the phone rang. It was a small balcony , that with in a step or two u can enter the room. Navya jaise hi agla pav rakha ki anant ki pakad usski pallu ki end pe hua. Navya was in the room facing to the small dressing table near the door at one side ...for she wanted to pick the phone...but anant ki pakad tho palu pe tha. She didn't move again ..but suddenly kept her hand on her saree where she had pinned it for the fear that it may tear. Anant knew she wont move..and he enterd in and put the latch of the door with his hand behind and holding the pallu still. Phone was ringing'it was his hand that reached the phone ,,dekha tho koi marketing call tha'ussne phone ko gusse se dekhthe hue switch off kar diya' navya was smiling..but anant slowly pulled her towards him folding the pallu. Navya had no choice,she came nearer to anant.as his hand reached her shoulder , he made the pallu right and looked at her. Navya tho puri ki puri sharmayi hui thi. She didn't look at him but closed her eyes instead , usse patha thaw o anant ki aankhon mei nahi dekh sakthi'''he lifted her chin with his hand and slowly blew on her eyes'''.she opened it'' tum sharmathi hui bhi bahut khoobsurat lagthi ho and kissed on her both eyes.she was feeling goosebumps now. She looked down and smiled. Aur ye jhumke''and slowly touched her droppings on the earring and hit it lightly'ye tho .. he was saying so softly and slowly ''.. he moved his face to her ear lobes'she held her breath a moment ..he kissed on her ear lobes'''''''''..she couldn't resist ,,,but hugged him tightly.he too hugged back. Patha nahi chala kitne der aise rahe'' ''''''

She broke the hug when ananat ran his hand at her back and loked at him to tell sumthing ki anant spoke up by keeping his finger on her lips'.yaad hai meine kya kaha tha'.hamare beech kuch bhi nahi ..baatein bhi nahi''..and kissed on her cheek close to her lips. Navya just wished to be in his arms now.

He then lifted his blushing navya in his arms and slowly made her lie on the bed.she had a cute smile on her face that was even more beautiful with her shyness.. He too bend down to her ,, squeezed her hand with his and the other hand went to the night lamp that was glowing near to the bed'. The room went dark. Bahar sirf chaaand khada tha ek muskurahat liye' par aaj Shayad chaand bhi sharma gaya ki wo badalon ke peeche chup gaya. Aur ek tandi hawa apni aanchal se saari jagah ko tanda kar diya'''''''''..

Jab neend khuli tho anant ne dekha ki navya usski baahon mei yu chippakke so rahi thi,cuddling close to him. Her hairs covered a part of her face'..he had a smile on his face on seeing her,moved her hairs to the other side and made her face clear.looked at her for a while''just admiring her''''''..and slowly utt gaya. Navya ko ehsaas bhi nahi hua ki anant utt gaya hai. she was fast asleep. He just freshened up and opened the balcony door. A cool breeze wished him a morning and went in to wish his beauty. He stepped out and loked around ,he stopped at one point and thinking sumthing'.loked in and went in. he went straight to navya and sat beside her. Kept his hand on her shoulder and shook it lightly as she was sleeping sideways. Navya utto 'subah ho gayi'

Navya was slighty waking up frm her sleep ki anant ne usski aankhen band kar li. Navya aankhen math kholo..plzzz tumhe kuch dikhana hai''

Navya felt a bit uneasy as it was immediately after she woke fr her sleep . she tried to get up ..but as anant covered her eyes,she held anant by her hand and got up.

Kya hua anant 'tum ye subah subah kya kar rahe ho? Confused'..

Anant: plzz navya , kuch der ke liye''chalo mere saath and made her stand by holding her by other hand.

Navya: anant 'ruko'kahan le ja rahe ho'..atleast nighty tho badalne do'..

Anant: nahi navya 'dur nahi'sirf balcony tak'..mei hu na tumhaare saath.

Navya moved with him holding his hand and anant took her to the balcony. She was wondering ki what was there ki kal jo meine nahi dekha''.

Anant slowly moved his hand from her eyes'..and made her look towards the direction where he pointed outside the big wall. There stood a building which was much similar to them. Navya was just staring at it,,,,and suddenly looked anant''anant ye panghani hai'.?

Anant had a smile on his face that just made him lok even more handsome as he knew usski jhali bahut khush hui hai. anants smile gave the answer. Navya was surprised : ye wahi jagah hai na jahan humne stay kiya tha?...she asked with happiness and surprise...

Edited by smivas - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update smitha👏
Edited by rashi_anya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
What an mind blowing update dee..


I loved ur hindi descriptions than english... 🤗 wah wah dee👏👏

Do u write poems btw?? it was as if readin some beautiful romantic poem about the Moon part <3 just lovely.. ☺️

I am speechless dee...🤗🤗
Edited by samrutha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: samrutha

What an mind blowing update dee..


I loved ur hindi descriptions than english... 🤗 wah wah dee👏👏

Do u write poems btw?? it was as if readin some beautiful romantic poem about the Moon part <3 just lovely.. ☺️

I am speechless dee...🤗🤗

thanks samrutha... thank u so much😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rashi_anya

lovely update smitha👏

thanks rashi 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Edited by anamika_0 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowiii very well written smitha... fascinating to read ur updates... lovely
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update, completely lost in Anya world.
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank u so much @anamika @son_s @rashmi @crazzymoon my like button is not working so cant hit like for yr comments... sorry.
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Posted: 13 years ago
smitaaa ilovd it. i dont know how many time i read it. lovd the hindi lines superb😉

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