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Hai all, we are seeing the new track of navya where BD and UB are trying to put blames on her one by another and navya struggling in between it.

I just thought of a change , as how would it be if the story would have continued from hospital where anya return to flat 420 instead of bajpai mansion.

I am continuing from hospital scene

Anant was recovering now. Navya was taking good care of him spending day and night besides him. On the other hand Anant's family members too came to see him daily. This continued.. all were eager to see anant getting recovered from bed. Meanwhile Anant was noticing Navya , he could see that whenever his family members came, they neither talk to navya nor ask about her concerns. He felt as if they were avoiding her and even navya was some what disturbed in front of them. He remembered how his mother was concerned about him but never asked navya any questions or show any concern towards her. He felt that something was happening around. All left after their visits. It was only navya and anant in the room. Anant was looking at navya.She was busy cutting apples for him.

Anant: Navya mein tumse kuch poochoo?

Navya: ha anant bolo na, she didn't lift her head as she was cutting the apple.

Anant: Mein kuch dinon se dekh raha hoon, tumara chehara utara hua sa hai.?

Navya: mera chehara , nahi tho, aur hoga kyun nahi, hospital main jo hoon.

Navya tried to avoid the questions as she very well knew what was happening around was not something happy and moreover BABA had told all those dialogues to her and sugandha too.

Anant: nahi aise hi poocha, aur tumare maa kyun nahi aayi,,

Navya: aayi thi , par tum so rahe the. (all the incidents came to her mind which happened in the hospital ,navya was at the verge of crying)

she got up and told anant: mein abhi aayi ,,and walked towards the door trying to hide her tears(she was aware that her tears will tell out all the story and this was not the time to cry but to be brave for her anant)

Just then Ritz and Appy came in . Appy: navya , kahan jaa rahi ho.

Navya : tum log baito mein abhi aayi( she just went from there . they two felt she was crying)

Ritz: looking at the disturbed anant: Hey vo koi kaam se gayi hogi, aajkal bahut busy hey apne pati ke saath.

Appy also smiled and replied understanding the situation but didn't have any idea what the issue was.

Anant: tum dono se kuch poochna tha muje. SACH bathana. Muje aisa kyun lag raha hey ki navya mujse kuch chupa rahi hain.

Ritz: kya chupa rahi hain, anant tum bed pe lete lete bahut dimaag chalane lage ho. Aisa kuch bhi nahi hoga , hogi to vo jaroor batathi.

Anant: nahi, jaroor kuch hain. Mere family se koi bhi navya se baat karte huye mene nahi dekha. Sach bathao ritz kya baath hai. Muje patha hei tumhe pata hein, aur maaji bhi muje dekhne aathi hain jab mein soya hua hoon. Muje kuch teek nahi lag raha.

Ritz: Anant hume sab kuch nahi patha par itna jaroor patha hai ki tumare parivaar se koi bhi navya se khush nahi hey. sab sochte hai ki ye accident navya ki vajah se hua hai. Tumari is halat ka jimmedaar navya hai

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Anant felt very bad when he heard this.

Ritz: please navya ko kuch math bolo ki humne ye kaha hai.

Just then Navya opened the door. She was carrying a medicine packet with her. She kept it on the tabl. Appy and Ritz smiled at her and talked with Anant as if nothing had happened. Anant too acted accordingly. Navy didn't look at them , she instead took medicines for anant and gave him. Just then Doctor arrived there. He came and checked Anant. He was happy with his progress, he asked the sister to bring a walking stick and asked anant to walk slowly with the help of this. Anant was happy to hear this and tried to walk , at first he tripled but later he managed to walk slowly and steadily in the room . All were very happy. Navya thanked God.

Next day doctor came and checke anant , and told, you are recovering fast I think there wont be any problem if I discharge you tomorrow and told the nurse to make necessary arrangements.

Navya was happy but she was tensed too. She called Ritz and told her to come to hospital. Meanwhile BABA was administering his plan of fake illness at hospital. He didn't know that anant was able to walk with the stick. When BABA was talking to BD in a room in hospital where he was admitted due to his drama, Anant came there with the help of the stick to see BABA. But before entering in ,he heard a big laugh from inside. He recognized it as BD'S voice.

He heard her saying : bhai sahib, aapne to bimaari ka natak karke un dono ko aisa chakma diya hai ki usse abhi tak samaj nahi aaya hai ki yeh aapki chaal hain.

BABA: Haa ab anant aur navya ko mein aisa sabak sikhaunga ki zindagi bhar us ladki ko ye yaad rahega ki bajpai log kaun hai.

Anant felt too disappointed, instead of going in , he walked back in dismay. He saw his doctor coming over there, are vah, tum sach mein bahut brave ho, tumari chalne ki willpower se hi tum apne room se yahan taka aye. Par yahan kyu?

Anant : vo mein dadaji ko dekhne aaya tha, par vo so rahe hein.

Doctor: tumare dadaji ko kuch nahi hua hain. He is avung high BP little bit, he will be all right with proper medication.

Later when things were packed, all were waiting for doctor to come to room, Anant told BABA that : hum ghar nahi aa rahe hein, hame vapas apne flat jaane dijiye. Mein aapko milne aaya karoonga.

But baba , papa refused. But anant didn't want to go. Doctor came in at that time:

Doctor: So anant ready to go home. Well take medicines properly and ha don't loose yr heart, u can walk very soon.

When doctor found out about the situation he told patients health is more important for me. Please don't give him any tension environments. As long as he is tension free it will help his recovery. And moreover your grandpa is fine it is only a small BP problem.

Anant too wanted to hear this. Baba couldn't tell anything in front of doctor that it was an acting done to trap anant. He had to give up.

Anant and navya left for their flat in Ranbir's car. When they reached there Anant slowly got out of the car with the help of navya and used his walking stick to climb the stairs slowly. Meanwhile navya ran to the flat to open it.

She had already asked ritz and appy to clean it for her. She had arranged the room with a new cot and bed , and a mixer to make juices for anant and necessary items that are needed to take care of anant. She took a plate , lit a diya and was ready to welcome anant back home.

Anant reached the door along with ranbir's help, he was feeling light pain in his legs due to climbing the steps but when he saw his navya with a lighted lamp he was very happy. For a moment his mind raced back to the moment where navya entered first time in his house during nimisha's engagement with the thaali.

Navya put teeka on anant's forehead and did the rituals and told anant to walk in. He had a peace of mind now, back in his home where he always liked to be with navya.

Anant sat on the cot that was arranged for him. He was surprised to see all this. The house was arranged well. He looked at navya. Navya understood.She told: they helped me in this , when we were in hospital I called ritz in morning to do all this . otherwise it was impossible. Thay all had a group hug there in the cot and few fun talks. It was getting darker in the evening. It was time for them to leave.

Ritz: tum chaho to hum yahi rahte hey aaj.

Navya: nahi koi problem nahi hai. Mein sambhal loongi. Aur waise bhi anant ab thoda chal bhi saktha hai, to hum manage kar lenge.

They told good bye to anya and left. Navya switched on the pedestral fan that was newy bought. Anant felt relieved from the hot.

Anant: Navya yeh sab kissne kareeda?

Navya: meine ? Tum ghussa mat ho. Meine apni vo necklace bech dii. Ritz ko de diya in the morning , and told her to get the money for it and buy all this.

Anant : par vo itna pyaara that tum par.

Navya: us haar se bhi keemthi tum ho mere liye. Un paisoon ranbir ne ye sab liya aur ghar ko un theeno ne arrange kar diya. Ab chodo na, mei tumhe juice dethi hoon, naya mixer bhi liya hai.

Anant : stopped her by holding her hand. Gestured her to sit near him.She sat besides him but was confused ,,

Anant: looking into her eyes: ab to ek baar ro lo navya. Muje pata hai, iss dil mein bahot dard chupaa hai, tum ise sabse chupa sakthi ho, par mujse nahi.

Navya: looking at anant , tears rolled down her eyes, she hugged him and cried. He hold her near his chest and was comforting her. And told: muje pata nahi , tumare saath kya hua, ya kya kaha mere parivaar valon ne, par itna jaroor pata hai ki tum mujse apna dard chupaa rahi ho and hugged her . They didn't speak for minutes but was feeling the concern each of them had for the other. She felt the care that anant had for her. He hugged her too lovingly. She felt that all her worries vanished into thin air in his arms. He

Caressed navya and made her feel comfortable in his arms . Anants eyes were filled with tears. They released their hug and looked at each other .

Anant: Tum mujse itna pyaar kyun karti ho?

Navya: anant ye kay pooch rahe ho? Muje tumhe pyaar karne ke liye koi wajah chahiye.

Anant: muje pata hai , ki tum muje bahot chahthi ho. Par maine tumhe hameesha aansu diye hai. Jab pyaar hua tumse tab tumhe bahot rulaya... parivaar ka usool yeh vo

Aur jab pyaar ka izhaar kiya tab bhi , aur kanpur mei me vo din kahbi nahi bhool saktha.

Socha tha tumhe apni biwi banaunga to in sab ka karz chukaunga tumhe itna khush rakhunga ki ek bhi aansu tumhare chehre pe nahi hoga.

Navya kept her finger on his lips telling him not to speak any further. But anant took her hand out. : bolne do navya please'

Aur tumhe do parivaar ko milane ki chakkar mein , aur rulaya aur ab yeh accident''

Navya \; closed his mouth with her hands. Aisa math bolo anant. Maine aisa kabhi nahi socha. Maine bhi to tumhe bahot pareshaan kiya hai na , phir aisa kyu sochte ho?

Aur mein roti hoon tho tum muje issse bhi pyaar se manate jo ho.

Agar dard hota bhi hai to tumhare bahon mein aa jate hi gayab ho jata hai. mei sirf tumhari hoke jeena chahthi hoo tumhare pyaar mein apni zindagi bitana chahthi hoon.

Anant was overwhelmed with tears. He hugged her and kissed her on her face.

Navya just cuddled in to his arms like a kid who was waiting for his love.

This is just my imagination, a deviation from what we are seeing, I just want to see them there in 420 for few more days

Really I thought a lot if it, would be ok if I did this post , frankly speaking I don't want to spoil the mood of the recent track.. these are my views which I wanted to see

So if you have any suggestions regarding this write up please feel free to tell

the other links are

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/57913835

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/57943536

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/58429398

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samrutha thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Smitha dee.. wonderfully written..👏 liked it so much😃

do continue it dee.. loved anya's convo <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful smitha... lovely Anya n deir convo
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful update please continue.awesome post
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Wow awesome imagination dear..beautifully written..loved anya convo
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesme blosom lovely update dear !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
realy loved it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
loved ur imagination, wish dis had happend in d shw !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😃 thank u alll for yr comments.. will definitely update it by this weekend.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: neelima_menon

awesme blosom lovely update dear !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

realy loved it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
loved ur imagination, wish dis had happend in d shw !!!!!!!!!!!!!

i too wanted to see them in 420 for few more days.. but the track got changed then😕 well thanks for yr comment.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ganganavya

wonderful update please continue.awesome post

thanku ganga for yr comments😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank u😊

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