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Anya's night stay in a cottage..❤️..lovely romantic update Dee..⭐️
Continue soon..😊
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wow...its lovely dear...keep updating n don't forget to PM me too 😊
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i wud say this SS is my favoritw here...sooo sweet n cute...i love ittt...gr8 smita...keep writingg
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi, very nice updates. Enjoyed reading. Please update soon. :)
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Lovely romantic update Smitha...continue soon
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thanks for all your likingss...
my new update is a bit lengthy. hope u dont get bored with that ...there was no choice ...so wrote down as i had to take it to next level...please bear with the trouble that i am giving you...
wil post it soon ...😊
Edited by smivas - 13 years ago
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you please post it soon, we love reading lengthy anya updates. waiting
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Navya was so happy to hear that she was in panchgani. She was looking at the building with a big smile on her face. she was that happy. Anant looked at her and turned towards the building'.

Navya's eyes were stil fixed on that building'yess it was the same place where they stayed for two nights during their picnic. ''

Navya : anant'..

Anant still looking at the building '' hmmm

Navya: tum jaante the na ki hum yahan aayenge, tumne pahle se hi yahan book kiya tha na'aur muje surprise dena chahthe the na?

Navy asked him confusingly, anant turned to her, a few strands of her hair had cum to her face , he answered her arranging them'''.

Anant: haa mei jaantha tha ki hum yahan aayenge par meeting ke baad wapas jaathe waqt, par muje patha nahi tha ki shaadi ke jagah se paas he panchgani. Jab kal ajay ke cousins se baatein kar raha tha tho patha chala ki panchgani paas hi hai, koi doosra rastha hai jo yahan aatha hai,,,,, tho meine socha ki hum kal hi yahan aayenge'.wahan rukne se tho acha hai..aur yahan se bhi meeting ka place bahut dur nahi hai' yahan se bhi rastha hai '.issliye meine ajay ki cousin ke help lekar yahan book karwa diya. Uske jaan pehchan ka koi he yahan pe. Aur jab patha chala k ye jagah uss jagah ke paas hai jahan hum tehere the , tho kuch bhi nahi socha 'jalldi se booking kar di.

Navya was even more happy to see anant's smiling face, how much excited he was while telling all these.

Navya : par tumne ye sab kab kiya ''patha hi nahi chala.

Anant: surprise koi bathake kartha hai? teasing her and came forward ..held her both hands with his and made her cum to him . holding her hands he told: ye jagah hum kaise bhool sakthe hai, haina? Jis jagah ne muje bahut kuch diya '..wo tho kabhi nahi bhool paonga mei.

Looking straight in to her eyes. His eyes told he meant what he was telling. Navya understood his feeling and smiled to him'. A cute eyelock made them feel their feelings for each other.. their feeling for this place , what had happened during their picnic stay and how it all turned out later ''

.i love you navya '''.anant's words broke the silence. Navya also reciprocated the same feelings.

She smilled and told 'I love you too and gave a soft kiss on his cheek. He looked at her and smiled for that sweet morning wish. She was looking at him after her kiss ki he turned his other cheek to her. '''

Navya: staring at him with her wide eyes anant tum bhi na,,,,,,, bas bahane chahiye tumhe''..
and tried to move away as she became more conscious now,,,it was the outside balcony and that too sun was up. Anyone can cum through that way at any time''..

Anant gave a naughty smile and let her go'..she walked into the room smilingly'..

Anant : acha ' tho ye kisliye tha? Ye jo abhi abhi diya muje'.asked walking back of her

Surprise ke liye'ya phir'yu hi'..

Navya: turning to him'.anant tum bhi na'kabhi nahi sudroge''

Anant smilingly ..iss maamle mei ..kabhi nahi and went near her. Jitna bhi do kam hai'. and even more softly bending towards her'.tumhe jitna bhi pyaar karu , kam hai.

Navya had a blushing and shy face now''told : anant '.

Looking at him: bahut pyaar karthe ho na mujse?

Anant: haaan and turned her with his hand and hugged her from back'.and kept his face on her neck: bahut pyaar kartha hu tumse'.khud se zyaada'

Navya : aur mein bhi'..and kept her hand on his hairs and caressed it. Acha tho ab chalo'ready ho jao'tumhe jana hai na '.meeting mei'

Anant: tightening his hug : mmm mann nahi hai'yahi rukh jao tumhare paas

Navya: anant mazak math karo''.

Anant : tho wada karo'..

Navya : kya? Surprisingly'

Anant: aaj mei jo bhi maangunga ' ... raat ko...muje milega and smiled

Navya smiled and told haan baba jo bhi maangoge dungi.

Anant gave a sweet kiss to her on her cheek . mei ready hoke aatha hu'..

(Wo dono hai hi aise ek ke liye tho bas navya hi sab kuch hai aur dusre ke liye 'anant ka hukum sar aankhon par jiss ke liye wo apni zindagi se bhi pyaari hai'..)

Anant went to dress up'.navya ordered breakfast to the room service. And went to get freshed up . anant was ready and was checking his last minute preparations'

By the time navya came out breakfast had been set on the table by the attender and he had left. She noticed that anant had not touched it still as he was busy with sumthing. She went to him: ye kya anant ..khana bhi nahi khaya tumne'.

Anant attention was totally on his work..he looked up hearing navya's words'

wo navya mei ..kuch kaam aa gaya beech mei '.sir ne call kiya tha ..kuch aur additions ke liye tho mei iss me hi lag gaya..koi baath nahi'.

Navya: aise kaise jaoge 'and she took the food in a plate: tum kaam khatham karo..mei khilathi hu and she fed him. On one side he was doing his urgent work and other side navya gave him the food. By the time he finished thework,, navya had done with the food too. She made him have his breakfast. He took all the needed items and got ready to go'.

Navya: ek minute and gave him dahi and shakkar '.sab kuch acha hi hoga.

Anant: surprisingly at her: ye kahan se mila tumhe?

Navya : meine breakfast order karthe waqt dahi ke liye hi bola tha'.

Anant smiled at her. Kissd on her forehead and came out of the cottage: navya tum teek hogi na ..mere bagair'yahan akeli..

Navya: looked around ..there were many cottages standing within a small distance each having a balcony'.. it was having a huge big lawn at the middle were people could sit and chat ,,, a play area for kids'and all . reception was at the centre..

Navya: kal raat ko aaye the na..issliye samaj nahi payi ki kaisa hoga'.mei teek rahungi anant. Whan dekho kuch bache bhi hai'. tum phikar math karo'kuch baat hogi tho mei call karungi'

Anant: teek hai..apna dhyan rakhna'and he left to the parking area to get the vehicle. The place was not that far where anant had to go. He had already enquired about all the details so he was clear about the way and other things.

Navya had her breakfast and just stepped out to see the surroundings. She walked through the lawn looking at the scenes there'.where after a while she came near a cottage where a room boy was standing near two people. She recognized them it was mohan bhaiyya and papa. They too had a conference over there and had arrived in the morning after attending a meeting in other place. Mohan bhaiyya was telling sunthing in a serious manner to the room boy. Navya walked upto them'seeing her mohan stoped his talk: navya tum yahan?

Navya smiled back , om papa was sitting on a chair near the table that was there outside their cottage. He looked up at navya , his face changed suddenly but he didn't speak a word.. but he too had tha same question in his mind that mohan asked

Navya : ji bhaiyya wo anant ko aaj ek important meeting thi , tho kal hum yahan aaye the. Anant meeting ke liye gaya hai' tho mei bas yu hi'.

Om papa was surprised'anant ka meeting aur navya bhi saath mei'.navya went upto him and touched his feet for the blessings. Om couldn't show his anger to her as the room boy also was standing there, moreover he had a soft corner sumwhre in his heart to wards navya after seeing how she took care of anant in the hospital and how she helped om when baba acted the heart attack. He blessed her '..with half minds.

Mohan bhaiyya told the attendant: ap jaldi jayiye aur patha kejiye'the attendant went ..

Navya wanted to know what was the matter . mohan bhaiyya tolds her that papa's health was not alright because of the hectic travel and that they had to attend a meeting ..at noon so he was enquiring for a doctor'.in the resort. And also told ki he had to go for meeting sumone befor the meetig started..so was worried about papa'.

Itne mei om ka phone started ringing'. Om looked at his phone..his face looked even more worried now. He looked at mohan: tumhare sasur ka phone hai'.

And gave to mohan. As his father had been calling om to discuss about the matter of shagun , to please persuade baba to tell a favourable answer to the boy's family.

Mohan attended the call: ji papa..hum ghar pe nahi hai'aathe hi aapkko phone karenge..baba ko iss bare mei teek se bathane ka samay nahi mila papa ko, tho issliye'mohan sumhow managed the call.

Navya understood the situation now. She loked at om. Om didn't look at her but told to mohan : kya karu '' in dismay ab aisa kuch hoga ..humne socha bhi nahi tha. Aur ab kya ho raha hai'

Mohan also knew that navya was feeling bad about this and papas words. He just gave a consoling smile to navya''

Just then mohan got a call from the person for whom he was waiting, so he had to go, navya assured mohan that she will be besides papa till he's back. Om didn't like all these but didn't tell a word as he had no choice, ghar pe nahi tha aur yaan log bhi hai'itne mein doctor ko leke attender aa gaya

Doctor om ko dekh rahe the ki'om ka phone baja''navya had introduced herself as om's daughter in law..so she had no choice but attend the call as doctor was looking at navya and om one aftr the other as navya was not attending the call and moreover om was not in a condition becoz the doctor was examining him. So with no choice left navya attended the call, she put it in speaker so that m could hear it thnking might be it's an official one. But the speaker turned out to be shagun's future father in law.

He spoke: Namaste om prakash ji,,mei jaatha hu ki aapko taqleef de raha hu par kya karu ,,kaam hi much aisa hai..meine Shankar dayal ji ke phone ko try kiya par wo busy aaya tho socha aapko karu , tho aap meri unse baat karwa denge.

Om loked at navya ..he didn't know what to do,,suddenly navya managed the situation. She took the phone and moved further and spoke to the person.

Navya : ji mei navya bol rahi hu'yahan ki choti bahu..papa ki tabiyat kuch teek nahi hai,wo doctor unhe dekh rahe hai..tho meine phone utta liya and then she spoke the same words '.(which u all know was told in the episode..where navya spoke to shagun's father in law at bajpai mansion)

The man on the other hand was satified'he told a thanks to her, by that mohan came over tthere and navya immediately handed over the call to him. Mohan knew about the happenings from the other side and he told mohan that navya was really a very gud girl.

And convey the same to om ji and that he would call later. And then hung up the phone.

The doctor prescribed a few medicines and left' navya mean while told the room boy to make a bit of kada for papa from the kitchen as she knew that was the khaandani medicine of baajpai's ,she told the recipe asshe had seen sugandha make it while her stay in bajpai mansion. Om was getting a little bit impressed in his daughter in law, but didn't want to show as he was bound more to his baba''navya returned to her room '.

Time ran very fast.om was feeling a bit relieved.

It was time for them to leave for the conference..after lunch they preared to leave, mohan went to tell navya that they are leaving and navya came to see off them to the lobby. Just at that time anant arrived after his work. He seemed happy. Anant gettiing out of the car and mohan and om taking their bags and getting into their vehicle was almost at the same time. Anant saw bhaaiii, he was happy but then his eyes fell on om, his expression changed as he didn't knew what to tell'.. mohan and om had seen him, mohan came up to meet anant , they smiled and just had a very short convo and anant came up to the car'om jus t asked ; kaise ho anant?

Anant; teek hu '''..papa. the word came out from his mouth but it had less power.

Om was also feeling a little discomfort but sumhow mohan managed the situation and told: papa chale meeting ke liye der ho jayenge'..

And he nodded and they left. Anant saw navya and was all confused about the situation. Navya explained the situation as they walked back to their room. Anant was surprised at all the happenings and how navya managed the situation.

Navya: tum gussa tho nahi ho na? meine tumse pooche bina hi''.nay stopped looking at him. They were in the room by now.

Anant: nahi..balki ye soch raha tha ki mei hotha tho itna ache se handle nahi kar patha..tum bahut achi ho. Atleast wo tho teek ho gaya. And sat there on the small sofa .

Navya: acha ye tho bathao tumhara presentation meeting ye sab kaise tha.? She was very eager to know about the things'

Anant: bahut acha tha navya, balki unko meri baat mei samja paya'. Ab unke decisions par baaki ka kaam hoga''wo tho kal office jake hi patha kar paonga. Aaj mei kush hu bas and just gave a sweet smile.

Navya was also happy. She felt relived ad content to see that anant was very happy. she could see a more matured anant there who cared for her who was more settled now. who wasable to take every steps of life confidently...usse lagne laga ki anant apni pehchaan bana raha hai...aur wo mrs anant bankar usske saath chalne ki khushi mahsoos kar rahi thi.

They had their lunch at the buffet hall and then went to dres up for the outing that anant had planned . he had promised to take her to the places in panchgani. They left for the same . anant wore a white shirt amd jeans matching to it and navya was in the pink suit that anant had bought for her with his first salary. They went to al the site seeing spots there which they had missed especially during their picnic times' had all the foods they wanted ,, roamed around like two free birds.

And then anant started back to the cottage , sun was at the verge of setting the sky was so beautifully decorated by nature itself a mix of all the colours of life''.. day was slowly giving its way for night to set in which was more evident by the cool breeze that flew like a messenger telling its time to wish a gud evening or gud bye..to dawn.

They now reached the same place where they came for picnic,,,,the gates were closed but anant had sumhow managed to out a little muska to the watchman and entered into it. He and navya stepped out. Yess it was the same building that stood there where they had spent their two nights of picnic with all friends'. They recollected the moments..navya went to the same place where she tried to make the call to her father when they had reached panchgani. Anant too followed her , the ywere silent but were enjoying the beauty of the place ,navya was totally absorbed in her thoughts that she didn't notice anant moving off. After a few minutes wheh she turned back no body was in sight, anant had disaapeared'. She shouted anant anant ,,,,as it was getting darker and now she was aware that there was no one around. She felt a miserable silence over there..just then her phone beeped for a message. She read it'.navya mein yahan hu'.playgournd ke peeche , tumhe yaad hai na wo jagah , wahan aa jao'''''''''.

Navya remembered that place , but was scared a bit inside..but still took courage and went to the place remembering the same route'. As it was clear in her mind just as it happened ystrday.

She reached there'..only she could see was a bonfire set up there just as that day''.

Anant was not to be seen ''she walked further'' just then she heard a rustling sound ( of the dry leaves ) but got scared and turned and hit anant who was standing behind her she looked at him and hugged him'kahan gaye the 'kyun dara diya muje'..her heart was pounding even faster''..

Anant could feel it''navyaaa mei tho yahi tha ..bas kuch aur lakkadiyan lene gaya tha. Itni dar gayi'.

Navya still was not out of the fear '.hugging him '..tumhe ek pal ke liye nahi dekha tho''..please aisa mazak kabhi math karna '''.

Anant took her face in his palms'kabhi nahi karunga'..sorry

Navya : moving '.waise anant hum yahan kyun hai..? raat ho rahi hai'aura as paas koi nahi hai' chalo chalthe hai'. muje wapas le chalo'' and moved further ahead..ki anant held her hand from back''.

Navya stopped '.she dint know anants move'..anant slowly pulled her back..

She was scared as it was all abandoned now but felt relived that anant was with her'.

Anant and navya were closer now with navyas back to him'.

Anant: tumne muje promise kiya tha subah ki mei jo maangunga wo dogi'.told her by moving his face forwards to her shoulder from back.

Navya ; haan tho'she was stil facing her back to him.

Anant : tho jo uss din tumne mujse churaya tha ,,,,wo muje wapas de do''looking at her.

Navya turned to him looking at his eyes'..she felt all love in his eyes..he really craved for that kiss of hers'..

His eyes were teary at one corner'' tumhe patha hai navya ..uss din picnic pe jane ke liye meine dadaji se kaha tha ki mei jaanna chatha hu ki aisa kya hai jo mei sambhal nahi paaonga''..ye sochke ki mei bahut sulja hua tha'.par baad mei patha chala ki tumhara pyaar hi wo cheez hai jissne muje hi badal diya'..aur tumhe aur tumhare pyaar ko sambhalne laga.

Aur baad mei wo meri wish jab puri nahi hui tho mann mei kai sawal they kyun , kya galath kiya'' bhagwaan ne tok kyun diya'par ab patha chala..ki wo mulakat adhoori kyun rah gayi aur wo doori kyun thi shayad iss din ke liye'.ki mein pahle tumhe apna banao'..apni zindagi mei laao aur phir itnaaa pyarr du ki khud zindagi se bhi pyaar ho jaye. ' Muje jo apnapan tumse miltha hai'kabhi kabhi sochtha hu ki ..kya mei tumhe utna de paa raha hu ki nahi. Kabhi muje chodka math jaana navya'mera dil dhadakna bhool jayega tumhare bina'...

.tears rolled down his eyes''' he was totally in love with her''''

Ab mera churaya hua cheez muje mil saktha hai 'haina navya? He asked her softly

Navya was speechless''.she was feeling each and every words of his'.she too had tears in her eyes'.just gave her answer by closing her eyes and nearing her lips to his'

Wo hoont mile'aur phir shayad kitne der'ek dusre se baatein kiye '''..

aur bhagwan ne bhi apna ashirwaad de diya ,,,,,, baarish baras gayi'aur wo dono apne pyaar mei bheeg gaye. Itna bheeg gaye ki they were totally drenched in rain'''.they left their lip lock and navya was all blushing now, upar se paani aise baras rahe the ki anant navya se aankehn nahi hata sakha'.par they dint have any choice they couldn't stay longer there ,, thunder and lighting had announced their arrival too'..

achanak anant ko khayal aaya ki ek chotta raaastha uss wall se unke cottage ki taraf jaatha hai..security ne bathaya tha'..unhone gaadi ko wahi choda aur uss raasthe se jaldi cottage tak gaye'.

When they entered in their room 'it was totally dark as there was no light due to the rain. Anant flashed his wet phone and kept it aside for drying ,navya too.

She went to get the candle that was provided in the cupboard ki anant held her waist.

And hugged her''.kyun jala rahi ho'.. padna hai?

Navya: anant sir tho poonch lu?

Anant ; nahi 'mei poonch donga'yahan bed sheet se'

navya : anant pagal ho gaye ho kya
anant: haan aaj mei tumhare pyaar mei pagal hona chahtha hu
she could feel the warmth of his body even if her clothes were drenched...
anant tightened his hold ...and all that could be heard was a small and soft voice'..anant'..

Baarish puri raat thi shayad ki subah bhi bijli nahi aayi. But that early morning view was beautiful after the nature was drenched in rain... yu laga ki sab nazare taaze ho gaye hai..baarish se''.

Navya woke up anant : he was still fast asleep.

(itna padne ke baad mujpe ande math maarna , do din se likh rahi thi..ki mujme itni patinece nahi thi ki do do pieces karu..issliye sabkuch ek hi post mei de diya... ok now smile please...no no nooo dande...😃 😕 )

Edited by smivas - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
a rocking update, liked it but Anant ; nahi 'mei poonch donga'yahan bed sheet se' is an amazing line, a simple line conveying a lot.😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
its mindblowing smitha ☺️
Edited by rashi_anya - 13 years ago

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