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Posted: 13 years ago
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Anant was feeling better with medicines and of course navya' s care and attention. The three kids came home regularly to take tutions from her. Anant too enjoyed their company. After classes they used to talk and play with him for little while.

One day as usual:

The two kids who come along with bittoo are sakshi and gaurav

Sakshi: navya didi, yeh muje samamj nahi aayi, and showed her lesson to her.

Navya was too busy that day teaching those kids and was completely immersed in clearing doubts.

Anant: navya, navya ,he called her twice

Navya was thinking how to solve those doubts and just told anant : ek minute anant abhi aati hoon

Anant : plz navya, muje ek glass paani do.

Navya : anant wahan kitchen platform pe hai, tum lelo. She just told not thinking that he has to walk with stick. But anant didn't mid, he walked and got some water.

The time passed by, it was getting late, that day navya spent more time with kids and their lessons.

When they finished their lessons, navya bid them good bye and then went to kitchen got anant some juice and snacks and then told: anant mei bazaar jaake aathi hoon, fruits and vegetables sub khatham ho rahe hai

Anant: navya ate ho gayi hai,phir jaana

Navya nahi anant aaj nahi liya tho kal ke liye fruits nahi hoga mein jaldi jaake aati hoon.

And she ran out taking her purse.

Anant was feeling frustrated as navya took some time to return. He was walking with his stick as he was tensed, but after few moments he was feeling much relieved as he was able to walk with more ease now. He was happy, he tried to walk without the stick and was able to. He thought he would tell this to navya when she returned, but now as she was taking more time to return, he too was getting angry.

Navya returned after few minutes: anant mein bus stop mein phas gayi.bahut rush tha vahan pe.

Anant: koi baat nahi, tumara kaam hua na. (slightly angry)

Navya: mein jaanti hoon ki tum mujse naraz ho, sorry

Anant: sorry? Kyu? Meine kuch nahi kaha. (he was getting more annoyed) and went and lay on the bed.

Navya prepared kichdi for him and took it to him.He didn't look at navya. Navya felt his anger and thinking of an idea went near pooja stand, lit the lamp which she does every evening and told: ganeshji aapko pata hai, kissi ne mujse kaha tha ki vo mujse roj ladega, yeh uska hak hai. aur phir mujse pyaar bhi karega, yeh mera hak hai.

Par mera hak ab muje nahi mil raha. Yeh sab tho mei uske liye hi kar rahi hoo. Plz aap usko samjaayiye. And she stood in front of ganeshji with hands folded but was lokking at anant.

Anant was smiling hearing navya's plea to god. He laughed and took the kichdi and had it and made her eat also.

Anant: lo ab tumara hak tume diya.

Navya was very happy, she had food along with anant and cleaned the kitchen and utensils, finished al the work and now was ready to sleep. She made her bed down and lay down. Anant was in a mood to talk with her . he told: navya aaj patha hai kya hua,

Navya \; bolo anant(she was slowly drifting into sleep) she was just humming for what he was telling.

Anant : mei aaj stick se chal raha tha par thodi baad bina stick ke hi chalne laga

By this time navya had fallen asleep. Anant looked at navya telling this and saw that she was fast asleep and was sure that she hadn't heard what he was telling. He too fel asleep thinking to give navya a surprise next day morning.

Next day navya woke up with a sound, anant was shouting navya navya…….

Navya got up ,she was scared thinking something happened and ran to the washroom as sound came from there. She saw anant there near the wall and stick was lying down. Navya: anant tume kya hua, tum gir gaye kya..and tried to lift him.

Anant suddenly lifted navya and began turning round and round.

Navya mei ab chal saktha hoo…………

Navya was very happy to hear this. Anant neeche uttaro, tum gir jaoge.

Anant: nahi uttaroonga, tum aise raho.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
Perfectly well written dear loved it cute and lively one continue pls
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
nice update.plz do a lng 1 soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
Perfect!!!!👏👏👏👏👏please continue..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
Superb updates dear. Very well written
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Dee well written.. Awesome :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
Wow awesome update dear...loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
so touching...very nice..continue further dear its awesome..
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👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏vv
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Navya: anant tum kab tak aise muje pakadke rahoge,, tume dard hoga
Anant: muje? Dard? Mein apne zindagi bhar tumhe apne paas aise rakkungaa.

Navya: anant , aaj mein bahut kush hoo.

Anant: mein bhi

Navya: (trying to get down from his hold) chalo, doctor ke paas jana hai,aur mandir bhi. Mene mannat mangi thi ki jab tum teek ho jao hum saath milke mandir bhi jayenge.

Anant:(( he didn't leave her instead nodded a no an by taking her to his bed, ))

aur mene ye mannat maanga tha ki mei tume apne godi me yun bitaunga (makes her sit on his lap) aur tume yu pakkadke ( holds her head with one hand) and looks deep into her eyes. Navya was feeling shy, she was trying to avoid his looks but anants grip tightened more and he continued : mere hoton se tumare hoton pe…..(was slowly bringing his face to hers …..by this time navya understood anant's naughtiness but couldn't resist it as she was slowly absorbing into anant's kiss)

it was a beautiful moment for them , they forgot all tensions and was just enjoying their world…………….

After few minutes navya realised the time and just tickled anant, anant left hold of his hand , navya ran from there, anant just got up to go behind but his leg stopped him, he felt a small strain and sat there)

Navya realizing that he was offended came near him: anant , please ab tum jaldi ready ho jao, mei tume bahut pyaar karti hoo, par tume yaaad hei na, doctor ne kya kaha tha, agar tum better feel karo tho use dikana hai. aur shayad tumare medicines bhi kum karenge.

Tum fit ho jaoge and phir se office, kaam and………….she gave a small naughty smile(she was blushing) anant was looking at her as a kid listening to something soo concentrating… navya continued

Please aur hume manidir bhi jaana hai , ab ke baad tumhe nahi rokungi( navya smiled and knelt down and looked at him with her eager badi badi eyes)

Anant smiled at her and said: acha acha , phir kabhi bhi aisi harkat nahi karna varna …….( Looked at her ,she was going back as she felt anant was upto something, anant held her immediately and whispered in her ears)

Kabhi nahi chodunga… tumhe patha hai na, mene kaha …tho kaha.

Navya: acha baba , ab hamesha tumhara kaha maanungi ab chalo tho

They got ready and went to temple first , did their offerings and then went to doctor. Doctor was very much surprised with anants recovery and happy too. He advised him not to take much medicines now and that he would get to his full health and told him to go for a morning walk in open as walking in room wont be sufficient to make his muscles more flexible and also it was only few exercises that he suggested and he cut down all his medicines.

Both anant and navya were happy now, they came out of the hospital and navya was about to catch an auto ,

anant told: navya , wait, pehle mei office jake apne kaam ke bare mei poochna chahtha hooo, phir ghar challenge.. now I feel fine.

Navya too felt the same and went along with him.

Anant at his office reception: madam, I am anant , had recently joined in yr call center par accident ke wajah se chuttti pe tha

Receptionist after checking the status of anant through phone: waise, aap ke ghar se bahut din pehle jab aap hospitalized the, ye kaha gaya tha ki ab aap ye naukri nahi karenge and moreover as we needed to attend our new client immediately we had to take a fresh appointment , we are sorry, for further clarifications aap manager se baat kar sakthe hai, and also aapka probation time khatam nahi hua tha. So humne proceedings kiya aur letters bhi beje the aap ke ghar regarding this matter.

(Those letters were delivered to bajpai house, so anant couldn't get hold of it and baba also wanted this to happen)

Anant felt dejected and sad and wanted to speak to manger but navya too felt that might be he would not be able to sit for night that too awake fully and it may affect his health.

She told anant that : anant , please gussa mat ho, shayad papa ya baba ne tumere operation ke waqt office me kaha hoga…please ab chalo, ranbir se baat karke phir poochenge.

Anant didn't listen to navya and went to talk with manager but as he was in a meeting , he couldn't and felt very much disappointed and walked out.

Navya too walked back along with him , he sat on a bench that was seen outside, navya consoled him and told him to go home first and then have a talk with ranbir. She called for an auto and waited for anant to get in. he with half mind got in as he knew there was no other choice, and came home.

Navya called ranbir and told the situation, ranbir told her to give the phone to anant but he refused. He went and sat near the window and just gazed outside. Navya too felt that he had to be left alone at that moment. Anant recalled all that happened with him, but was so confused that he didn't know what next. After sometime, thechildren came for their classes ,navya sat to do her chores with them, but anant was still ,sitting still. Navya didn't have the mind to take class with anant besides unhappy. She winded up the classes soon.

Sun was bidding bye , and darkness was slowly creeping in,, navya lit the lamp and prepared food for anant, he was still in his confused and disturbing state. Jus then the door bell rang. Navya opened and it was their gang. Navya was happy to see them . they brought flowers cake and burgers along, as doctor had removed his no to food for anant.

Anant felt a bit relaxed but his mind was still wandering somewhere. Navya felt this and was looking at anant every now and then while conversing with friends.

Now they were ready to leave and ranbir: anant tum tension math lo. Sab teek ho jayega, hum phir try karenge, koi openings jarrooor hoga. Shaya kuch acha hone ke liye ye job gaya hoga.

Anant also smiled back and they bid goodbye to eachother. But navya was sure anant was still thinking about his job. Navya didn't know what to say. Tears came to her eyes as anant was still absorbed in his thoughts. She came near anant.

Navya: anant tum please aise himmat mat haro. She was at the verge of crying

Anant: (suddenly realizing navya,s tone) sorry navya (turning towards her) mei thode samay ke liye bas apnea are mei hi soch raha tha.

Please ro mat, mei kuch nahi sochonga. Jo bhi hoga ab sab kuch sahne ke liye thayar hoo

Navya : anant sab teek ho jeyega, tume job bhi milenge. Ab so jao. Kal se tume har mornings pe walk pe bhi jana hai. mei hi chalo tumare saath, kuch din, phir disturb nahi karungi… (she was worried about him)

Anant: haa hum saath jayenge, muje neend aa raha hai (and he went to sleep)

Navya was worried in her innerself as what impact would this bring on anant.

But next day morning was more refreshing. The sun's rays had just started cutting through the clouds that they both set for their walk. Anant was much better after a good sleep. He was feeling fine as he walked down the roads with navya besides him.There were people walking along, all had started their mornings with a walk, ladies and gents, grandpas, grandmammas all, as there was a big park which had a long pathway in it for morning walkers two streets away from their flat. Many people came there, ordinary to people who had their breakfast here and lunch abroad.

Anant and navya felt refreshed as they so many people around, as they continued their walk, anant felt a little tired and wanted to sit .He sat on a bench that he found nearby. Navya too came behind him , calling anant anant….

This name was much familiar for a person who was also having his walk in that park.

He turned around and found anant and navya there on the bench. He came up to them.

It was Mr Rakesh, the father of the very same sons who had hit anant.

Rakesh: hello gud morning, tum dono yahan, daily aathe ho kya?

Anant and navya turned back and was happy to see rakesh there.

Anant and navya: gud morning uncle.

Anant: nahi hum yahan nahi aate the, par jab se mei bina stick ke chalne laga tho doctor ne morning walk lene ke liye advice kiya tha.

Navya: aap yahan roj aate hai uncle?

Rakesh: haa mei roj aatha hoon, whenever I am in town. Tho batao, kaise ho tum log.. so you can join office soon haina anant.

Anant : felt little sad again no uncle, I cannot, meri naukri nahi rahi ab.

He told him the situation.

((( waiting for all yr ande, tamattar and chappals... this was just my imagination, please bear with me..)

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