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Posted: 13 years ago
Dee i was gng on readin , when the update came to an end i was like arghhh why di dee stop it.. :( It was so realistic dee.. continue karo nah soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi samrutha how are you? i am uploading the continuation.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: smivas

hi samrutha how are you? i am uploading the continuation.



fine dee.. :) upload nah waitin to read it.. U've written sooo well
It was like readin a novel..
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Posted: 13 years ago

They both reached their flat and the trio were waiting for them. They opened the door and went in

Appy: kya baath ai, anant ki job pakka hone ki wajah se, akele akele treat pe gaye the kya.? Waise navya ne hume subah phone pe saari baatein bathayi thi.

Anant: nahi appy yu hi chaat khane ko man kiya and thoda walk bhi ho jayega.

Ranbir, tapping anant, patha hai patha hai, ab job hai to…..

Ritz: haan haaan, bivi ke saath outing raat ko hi possible hai.

They all laughed, sat together ,and spent some time discussing their days work , anant shared his office experiences, appy ritz ranbir about their business that was slowly picking up and navya too had a lot to tell about the kids who come for tution. Navya made some tea for all as it had started drizzling outside, cool wind started blowing in, time just flew away happily for them.

Ritz: arey lagtha hai baarish hone wali hai, hume chalna chahiye nahi tho beech sadak pe baarish mei traffic, aur late ho jayega, chalo ranbir , kal kuch orders ko bhi settle karna hai.

Ranbir: haa yaar ab chalna chahiye, appy tumhe hum chod denge.

Appy too agreed. Navya and anant bid them a gud night and came in.

Navya: mei kitchen saaf karke aathi hoon

Anant nodded and he went to change his dress and get fresh. He was feeling much better now ,after the small gup shup with his friends. navya was cleaning the kitchen when she heard the sound of bathroom door open, by doing the work itself she told:

Anant bahut der ho gayi hai tum so jao, meine tumhara cot ready kar diya hai. mei zara ye clean karke aati hoon, nahi to subah bahut kaam ho jayega. Bas kuch bartan saaaf karne hai .

Anant heard her and went,

navya thought that anant might have slept by now as she didn't hear any voice and she felt anant was too tired.

By this time rain had started pouring down , cool air was coming in as the windows were still open, it was all chill around by now, navya finished her work and came from kitchen

She didn't find anant on the cot, but to her surprise found anant lying on the mattress that was layed by her down for her to sleep. He was lying with his side turned towards the other side, navya felt sad that he lay down, but thought that might be he didn't want to sleep up so he lay there. She heard the sound of thunder and she looked at the window, rain was pouring still, she immediately went near it , as clothes were hanging on the string near the window, she pulled the window panes to close, stopped and was gazing to the rain drops falling on the ground through the window.

She gave a deep sigh, as after so many days of hotnesss a sudden rain- its always a relief to mind and the coolness it gave, ji kartha hai us baarish mei jaake khelu.

She closed the windows and made the clothes proper on the string. She switched off the lights , the street light was clearly seen through the window glasses. She came to sleep, but didn't want to sleep up on the cot , as anant was lying down, she felt bad ,

kaash mei dekhi hothi to mei anant ko neeche nahi sone dati, baarish bhi ho rahi hai, sardi lag jayegi tho, utta loo kya, nahi sone do, bahut thakk gaya hai.

She thought and took the blanket that she had for him and covered him and she went and lay down near him facing the other side .

she lay there looking at the shadow that was cast on the wall by the street light, that she felt someone has hold her hand .Surprised and a little scared she turned back , it was anant turning to her side and looking at her.

Tum soye nahi the, to upar kyun nahi soye, maine socha ki tum so gaye , issliye nahi uttayi

Anant was holding her hand , passed his fingers through hers and then lifted it

Anant: shhh, chup, and kissed on her fingers.

She was looking at him still ,wondering , he came nearer to her, he rested his head on the other hand and was lying sideways to her. He was looking at her face now. she was looking questioningly and was teling him in her mind : tum , kya,

her eyebrows curved , and told tumhe sardi lag jayegi , thoda tanda hai na baarish ki wajah se issliye aur tum……

Anant: phir se shuru ?(in lower tone) navyyyaaa, bringing his face nearer to her: kya tumhe doctor ne ye kaha hai , ki anant ko upar hi sula do aur tum neeche so jao?

Navya smiled at him and gestured with her head , by nodding it for a no.

Anant: again in low tone tho..., muje,…. patha hai kya karna hai, and slowly came closer and kissed her forehead.

he was stil holding her hand.Nayva tried to turn but anant didn't allow her to move. She was lying straight facing anant. Don't know even she didn't want to move from him. She was feeling his presence. Usse patha tha ki anant ke mann mei kya hai. He too was feeling her presence , he took his hand from hers and moved the hairs that had come front to cover her face. her face was clear now . her beautiful eyes spoke her luv to him. she too wanted his closeness just as he did. Each could feel their breath.

Anant: (agajn in his low tone)kya doctor ne ye bi kaha hai ki anant neeche soyega tho sardi lag jayega?

Navya (was blushing now) nodded her head again with a sweet small smile for a no

Anant brought his face stil more closer and kissed her both eyes.

Navya closed her eyes, she was not able to meet his eyes now, her heart was beating faster, he could feel that.

Anant; (continuing in his low tone) ab ye doctor kahtha hai ki , aaj ke baad tum roj mere saath hi sogi, upar ya neeche, samji… ya phir(coming closer)………. samjaa((still closer)…….do………..

Navya could feel his breath, he kissed on her nose tip, she opened her eyes and looked at him.

Anant: (looking at her) : luv you navya……..

Navya smiled at him. Her big big eyes was gazing at him with all her luv.aaj wo hamesha ke liye anany ki ban jaana chahthi thi. She wanted to tell something but

Anant: (looing into her eyes )aur anant tabhi teek hoga jab muje roj ek ……..and slowly neared his lips and touched her lips with his. It was a cute lip kiss , and then slowly moving her dupatta with his hand from her neck , he placed a kiss on her neck. She was totally taken into a new world of luv. Her heart was beating even faster . Navya turned her head side ways , closing her eyes,she was having a smile on her face.

Anant couldn't resist his feelings now. He slowly moved to her ears and kissed on her earlobes. She was feeling his luv and suddenly hugged him…………………..

Anant now lay on the mattress and navya rested her head on his chest.

navya : mei tumhe bahut pyaar kathi hoon.

Anant smiled and kissed on her head and : muje patha hai, tum mere bina nahi ji sakthi aur mei bhi………..aur aaaj ke baad kabhi nahi……..And slowly pulled the blanket and covered them in it.

Un dono ke massom sa pyaar , unhe aaj kareeb le aayi , itna ki wo dono ek dusre ke ho gaye. Navya anant ki aur anant navya ka.

Subah kab hua patha hi nahi chala. Navya ki jab annkhen khuli tho sooraj ki dhoop khidki se andar dastak de rahe the. Navya tried to get up. She was lying in his arms ,and anant was fast asleep. She tried to get up without waking him, moved his hand and got up, but suddenly felt a pull on her hair, she thought anant was up and turned back, but saw that her hair had caught in his shirt button , she gave a smile and was trying to remove it looking at her anant sleeping like a small kid. Her thoughts ran back to that day when her hairs had caught in his button on the day of their night out in anant's car,

Uss din se aaj tak, ki saari yaadein navya ke saamne aa gayi

patha hi nahi tha, ki kabhi anant ki banugi, usska pyaar bankar usse saath , (looking at him ) aur aaj ke baad hamesha tumhare saath rahungi, kabhi tumhe akela nahi hone dungi.

She managed to untwine it from the button, and placed a kiss on his cheek, and looked at him.

(Patha nahi , anant ko kaise patha chal jatha hai, shayad yahi pyaar hai, )

anant was having a small cute smile on his face (even when he was asleep) after getting the kiss from navya.

Navya smiled and got up for her days work.

She finished her bath , collected water in buckest and was all set in the kitchen for preparing breakfast. Her mind was wandering in anant's thoughts that she didn't notice the milk boiling. Suddenly a hand came from behind hugged her and put off the stove . he was hugging her from back, navya coming out of her dream , saw it was anant,

kya navya meri yaad tumhe itna sathathi hai, ki stove ko hi bhool jao. And kissed on her neckbone.

Navya : blushing , smiling feeling shy-: wo main , wo………

Anant turning her towards him and kissed on her cheeks. I love you

Muje mera medicine nahi mila.

Navya : kya? Kya medicine

Anant : itni jaldi bhul gayi? And showed his lips.

Navya pushing him: anant tum bhi na and walked towards out of the kitchen

Anant pulled her and held her with his hands round her, ab muje dethi ho ya mei loon,

Navya fely very shy but knew anant maan ne wala nahi tho

Navya ne anant ko ek pyaara sa lip kiss de diya.

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Posted: 13 years ago
dee u made me speechles.. awww ths is so 😳 ☺️ i went to dreamland completely. so perfect wth appropriate words.. ful of anyalecious epi.. i juz ❤️ every bit of it.. kitni baar bi padlu kam hi lagega dee.. wil never feel bored of reading it.am stil ☺️ dee. going bekaaboo.. love u di 4 ths update..
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow!!!sooo romantic!!! Loved it!!! Thank you sooo much !!! waiting for more
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Posted: 13 years ago
this is incredibly beautiful, could actually imagine anya because of your vividity in writing. Really have no words, this is pure, this is sublime.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very very cute and lovely update..👏m reliving all the sweet memories of flat #420 with this wonderful update..😊thnx a lot Smitha di.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update Smitha 😳😉👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful! Awesome.Keep it up dear.

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