OS : Ranika(ranbir +ritika) updated at page 3 & 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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This is my attempt to write a story on ritz and ranbir. My first attempt too. If there are any errors or mistakes please bear with me.

It was a fine morning. Mumbai station was busy as usual. The whistling and hooting of trains were heard every where. All passengers were busy unloading their luggages. The students of CK Engineering college were also busy getting down after coming from a sports meet. Ranbir was busy searching for his walkman which was with him while he was in train.

Meanwhile in the same coach a girl in white tops and blue jeans was busy filling her bag with books which she was carrying for an exam and was returning back home. Even she was in a hurry .

Ranbir got his walkman from the end side of his berth, he took it and was stuffing the things into his bag.

He too carried his bag in a hurry and started. Suddenly he dashed on some one. It was a girl who was in white tops and blue jeans. Their bags got twangled .

THE GIRL: sorry, I am really sorry'

Ranbir: Its ok. I too didn't notice.

He then tried to unfree the bags. Somehow he got it untangled . He took his bag and moved aside. The girl took hers and moved towards the door. She got down and walked towards the exit. Ranbir stood where he was and was staring at her. He didn't notice the moving crowd around him. Suddenly someone called him from outside.

The man: babua , babua ( it was his driver) apna bag dijiye.

Ranbir: Ha ramu chahca abi ata hoon. (He looked around and soon realized he was staring at the girl whom he met few minutes ago. )

When ranbir came out , he handed over the bag to his driver. Suddenly he looked at his bag. It was the same bag but he felt some difference in it. He opened it, To his surprise, It was not his bag.

He found some books in it and an ID card too. He took it out. It carried the photo of the girl with her name Ritika Sharma. II nd year Engg student. CK college.

Ramu chaha : Kya hua beta' chale'

Ranbir: : haan Ramu chacha , chaliye' ye bag mein rakhtha hoon.

He was sure by now the girl would have left. He thought : ab mein ghar jake ise aur dektha hoon aur pata karta hoon. Waise mere college mein hein aur meine abhi tak nahi dekha is ladki ko.. Wondering he got into his car.


Meanwhile the Ritika (as now name is known) was in her car. Her father had come to pick her from station and he was going to board a plane to Delhi in another two hours,. So she was in a hurry to leave the station.

Ritika: Papa apka plane kab hein:

Papa : 3 baje ka hein tumhe ghar chodke mein airport ke liye nikal jauungaa.

Ritika: ok papa.

Papa : Thumhara exam kaisa tha ..

Ritika: Bahut acha papa

By this time they reached home. Now ritika got down from car and took her bags and waved to her father. She went to her flat. In her room she was keeping her things back, she opened her black bag. To her surprise she saw some sports accessories inside it. She was surprised , she found a badminton racket , corks etc and many magazines ' in it. She understood that the bags got exchanged in the train when she dashed the guy whom she met. She got the banner of CK College from the bag.

Ritika: mein iss bag ka kya karoo. Kal college jake pata lagati hoon ,, kya pata koi help kare She thought she will take appys help and try to find out

: THANK GOD he is atleast in same college.. (But in her mind she was feeling scared about this bag issue.)

: mein ghar mey kissi ko bhi nahi bataungi.. pehele college chatle hein aur dekhte hein.ritika went to sleep. Here ranbir was wondering thinking about ritika . he was holding her ID card. He was tensed whether thinking about the bag issue.

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neetha thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wooow..dee too gud...thanks fr the ranika os...thanx a lot...its amazin..loved it...do continue it dee😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: neetha

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wooow..dee too gud...thanks fr the ranika os...thanx a lot...its amazin..loved it...do continue it dee😃

😊thank u neetha, it was yr suggestion... 😊 i dont know how good it is or how it has come up . but done my best
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi...its realy nice dear, good job keep it up, loved reading it ...do write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good one Smitha... loved RR Meet in train...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: smivas

😊thank u neetha, it was yr suggestion... 😊 i dont know how good it is or how it has come up . but done my best


its gud dee..n with further chaps..it ll get better n better😃n keep updatin wenever u r free k
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nicee..👏👏👏loved the OS for Ranika..⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: rashvin

Good one Smitha... loved RR Meet in train...

😊 thanks rashmi
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks neelima and all 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Really very good. Please continue.

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