*Updated* FF: Pyaar, Ishq aur Mohabbat (Page 54)

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

laddoo598

@laddoo598

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#331

First of all I am sowyiii for the late reply..
Now that was such a cute chapter...OMG Anant is the best BF ever..He is so caring, feeding her and all..And the proposal was AnYalicious! I always wondered how things would have gone if the show wala proposal wasn't done in a full canteen..And my oh my Ritch, your version of the proposal was so romantic..❤️The dialogues (I like how you used some of the dialogues from the show), the reactions, everything was perfect! Can't wait to see what happens at the wedding when Meeta sees Anant, that's really where things started to go downhill on the show, but I am sure you have something very different planned..👍🏼
One small question: How did Anant manage to get those khandani bangles? The jewelries are usually under the ladies' dekh rekh..

Anyway awesome update once again..Can't wait for the next one..

Quote

Parami

@Parmasone

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#332

Great work n great twist to e story!!!

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

@krystel21

Alumni

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#333

@Tanu- Hello babes! And thank you so much for loving the chapter, I just HAD to put in dollops of romance, cause of the absurd proposal we got! Oh, and the answer to your question is in the next chapter actually, but since you asked, I'll tell you here. See, he wanted to do something special for Navya, especially that his family wanted to get him married. Since in my fic, their family is based in Kanpur, so all the pushtaini jewelry is there too. When he went to talk to Mohan, as described in an earlier chapter, he told him the plan, and Mohan went to the locker and took out the bangles. He'll tell this to Navya in the next chapter, as she too asks him the same question before he puts on the bangles! The Meeta-Anant confrontation is gonna be a bit different, so I'm hoping you all will like it! Its not for another 2 chapters though!

@parmazone- Thanks!

Quote

Preet

@Preet078

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#334

Hey Ritchelle

First thanks for contiune the FF ..

woow what nice Anyalious Update .Loved it ..

I loved the proposal scene in serial it was too cute n different from others plus demand of sitution .But But this was too romantic ..Anant is soo caring n navya in romantic avataar is demand of any love story .

Khandhani Bangles awww its happens only in India .Even i had the same question as tanu have from where did anant gets he stole them or told shagudha about their relationship .but i get answer too ..

from spoiler

So finally meeta & anant meeting .I m sure in your FF its quite different from serial.

Thanks Soumya & Ritchelle for such lovely FF

Waiting for next update

Quote

Mridula

@imnowhere

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#335

Aww, Ritchelle, sorry once again for arriving late.😛
Now that was again really cute. We get some really romantic stuff in solace which the show
and its CVs fail to give. The sleeping phangurl in me rises up☺️ and believe me or not I was trying to visualize or rather say visualizing the scenes.
And I have exactly the same small question as Tanu, how Anant managed to lay hands on the pair of bangles?❓
One suggestion...add background scores too and we'll imagine those tracks being played then.
Ur FF will definitely outdo the show.
Great work Ritch.👏 I eagerly await the next...

Edited by mridula.shome - 13 years ago

Quote

Rachits

@Rachits

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#336

RITCHELLA PLEASE UPDATE... EAGERLY WAITING FOR UR UPDATES...

Quote

manjha

@manjha

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#337

OMG ritch! Dayuuum girl you are so amaaazing! Gosh I read your whole FF today and its just faabulous! Please keep writing more. Haha I wish you were the writer for Navya 😃 Awsome babes! Can't wait for the next update!

Quote

Jaggy

@--Fairy--

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#338

Its wow update once again ..loved it

waiting for next update

Quote

divya

@-Divya.S-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#339

Ritchelle i realy dn hav words 2 thnk u n discribe ua talent. i culd say juz awwwsm ff. ise padne ke baad mujhe koi shikhayat nahi ki serial me yeh sab nahi tha bcz u hv writn t so wel tht i culd visualiz evrythng as f ts gng on infrnt of me. u hav a gr8 talent of expresng through wrds. dil se thnq so much 4 d lvly ff. plz nevr end ths. plz keep on cntnuing t... restlesly waitn 4 nxt chaptr. plz update soon...

Edited by DivaAnYa - 13 years ago