*Updated* FF: Pyaar, Ishq aur Mohabbat (Page 54) - Page 26

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krystel21 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks Binu!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome chap... it's not at all boring yaar... superb!!!👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey Rich, who says this one's drab !! ?? No dear not at all ... I liked the way you have detailed out Navya and Anant's reminiscence of the intimate moments that they had spent together for the first time in their life ... Also liked the beginning of Mahendi ceremony ... Rama Bhabi's diction is purffect:))


All in all , nice chapter... Enjoying the progression of the storyline !!
Waiting for the next chapter with many sweet (n hot) Anya moments 😉 ...


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Posted: 13 years ago
@Namrata- Thanks dear! Glad to know you liked it! 😃

@Nupur- Thanks hun, for not throwing ande-tamatar on me for a drab chapter! IDK if the next chapters are gonna have got scenes, but we're gonna have nice, sweet romantic scenes for sure! Thanks for the appreciation! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ritch, Wow this is awesome...I read the whole chapters in a single breath...Its now I see the post...Oh god, I missed it because I was away from forum for two weeks...Outstanding creativity...You are an amazing writer...I hope Anantika will peep in the forum to get some ideas from you...The FF perfect than the original script...Hugs for you for the beautiful FF...
Please do send me PM whenever you update the thread...
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG...

Navya Writing initial of Anant in her mehndi...

& All D above Nice Chapter, Specially, the eye lock of Anya...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Ritchelle , who said it is boring chapter..its really nice .
very well written
good job as always .
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Posted: 13 years ago
@Reshmi- I didn't know you hadn't seen this! 🤗 Glad to know you liked it! Hahahahahaha if ANANTika takes a look at this and takes some reference, I'll be glad! But this goes all the way back to Kanpur, and only after Kanpur do we see the track actually changing! Stay tuned for more updates! Yeap, I'll PM you whenever I update, DW!

@Shanukit- Thanks dude! Glad to know you all visualised the scene, the way I did!

@Luvanya- Thanks dear! I personally feel this wasn't a very well written chapter, so I'm trying to make the next ones better! Lets hope it works!


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Posted: 13 years ago
wow ritchelle..awesome part 👏...not at all drab and boring...infact i find it enthralling...superexcited for the next chapter...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks a lot Niveda! 🤗

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