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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice one triasha...👏

i felt sad while readin tiz..awesome😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update triasha!
lovedd itt...feeling sad for both of themm...i feltt veryy sad readingg ittt!! anant is gonna engage withh thatt...fattyyy cartooonn!!! noo wayyy!!!...n poor navyaa...
plzz plzz upst asappp...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Snehal,Tanya,Tamanna,Judith,Licya,Arshsajan......thank uuu all...🤗...i din thought u all will lyk it...😳...just a small effort from my side...😊...loved all ur comments...😛...will come up soon with the next part...love u all...❤️...mwahhh
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Posted: 14 years ago
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guysss...🤗...next part hope u all will lyk it...😛...do give in ur comments ...😊



Episode -3

It begins with navya getting ready for colege the next day...her mom asks her to stay bak that day...but she is adament to go..papa comes and says he will drop her at college...navi goes wid her papa..

dere ANANT is in pain..he is too much upset...his baba's words ringing in his ears and navi's words as well...he closes his eyes and sees navya's face...he opens his eyes tears cum out ...
he goes to college...there navi's papa drops her and says he will cum to pick her up from college as well...
there ritz and ranbir getz to kno all about it...anant is too much sad..he tries to talk to navya...but navya avoids cuming face to face wid him...while anant goes after her and stops her..he asks her that he is in pain and she is the only person who can help him...

anant asks for the last tym he will not ask for nethng more plzzz...navi wid lot of pain in her heart agrees...in a room in college...anant says"main kya karo navya kuch samjhme nahin aa raha...mere parivar kabhi nahin smjhenge...humare pyar ko...main kya karu jo tum bolo gi main wahin karunga...main tumse dur nahin reh sakta..."..he pauses...and thensays "baba ne kal mujhe shagun se shaadi karne ki baat ki hai"...NAVYA is shocked...tears cumout of her eyes...she sits down...anant cums and sits kneeling down in front of her...holds her hands and asks...plzzz mujhe batao main kya karun...meri zindagi tumahre bina adhuri hai...aj main aisi jaga khara hu jahan ek taraf mera parivar or ek taraf tum...dono taraf se meri haar hai...ek ko bhi main khona nahin chahta..."
navya cries looking at him...she understands his pain...she gathers courage...she remembers the sacrifives of her family for her and says" anant parivar sab se pehle hai..apne parivar k pass jao...main theek hoon...meri fikar maat karo..wo tumhare liye jo sochenge usme tumhari bhalai chupi hai..."and they both cry holding each oder..just then ranbir ,appy,ritz cums in...navya goes out...and these song plays in the background..🥺

Teri yaad mein paagal pal pal rota hai
Bin tere na jaage ye na sota hai
Aksar tanhaai mein tuhe pukaare
Na zor dil pe chale

Haare haare haare hum to dil se haare
Haare haare haare hum to dil se haare

Teri yaad mein paagal pal pal rota hai
Bin tere na jaage ye na sota hai
Aksar tanhaai mein tuhe pukaare
Na zor dil pe chale

Haare haare haare hum to dil se haare
Haare haare haare hum to dil se haare

Ab jaane hum ye pyaar kya hai
Darde jigar mushkil bada hai
Sunta nahin kehna koi bhi
Dil bekhabar zidd pe ada hai
Samjhaaon isay kaise jaane jaan

Haare haare haare hum to dil se haare
Haare haare haare hum to dil se haare

Har aaina toota lage hai
Sach bhi humein jhootha lage hai
Jaane kahan hum aa gaye hain
Saara jahan rootha lage hai
Kya dard dil ne diya kya kahein

Haare haare haare hum to dil se haare
Haare haare haare hum to dil se haare

Teri yaad mein paagal pal pal rota hai
Bin tere na jaage ye na sota hai
Aksar tanhaai mein tuhe pukaare
Na zor dil pe chale

Haare haare haare hum to dil se haare
Haare haare haare hum to dil se haare.


appy and ritz goes out to navya and asks her to just wipe out anant...navya cries...and aks them not to misunderstand him...they try to normalise navya...and they were about to accompany navya to her home...tabhi navya's car cums and stops...navi looks up..there sumone cums down wid her papa...she looks surprised...papa cums up to her and says its arjun..remeber kanpur ka dost...arjun cums up to navya and says kaisi ho...and says he has cum for holidays to mumbai..navi tried to b happy but still she was thinking about anant...navi gos home...
dere dadi was happy to see arjun,...arjun is very jovial he gelled well wid harsh...he understands sumthing is wrong wid navi..he goes to navi's room...navi ne bohot dino baad use dekha..they were recaptulating their childhood days...how they used to play pranks on each oder...ek bar usne navi ko k plastic ka lizard dikhake darya tha...wo sunke navya haas pari..arjun ws pleased to see her laughing...dadi says papa dekha ye ladka navi k liye bilkul sahi hai...

*precap:anant calls navi...navi asks him tum theek to ho na...😳...

hope u all will lyk it...😳
Edited by triasha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: triasha

guysss am glad u all lyked it...me back wid the next episode...hope u all will lyk it...love u all thanks a lot...oh haan ek aur character bhi hai sumitra aunty...navya ki muh boli bua...



EPISODE-2

Navya cries in the auto while returning home...while Anant shocked..her words "meri bhool thi main ise pyar samajh baithi"echoed in his ears,he recollects all the moments...and in the background the song goes on...
Raaston mein kho gaya hai mitra
Ajnabi kyon ho gaya hai mitra,mitra

Kuchh to kami hai saawan
Saawan sa kyon na laage mitra,mitra
Shaamo sehar kyon mann ka
Aangan yeh soona laage mitra,mitra

Dhoop leke jo gaya hai mitra
Ajnabi kyon ho gaya hai mitra

Yaara haaye yaara
Kaise jane yaara bichhda
Yaara haaye yaara
Sang chain saara bichhda

Dil ke taaron mein, kyon hazaaron mein
Dard jaage hain
Humne baandhe jo,reshmi saare
Toote dhaage hain

Birha ko yeh harjaana hai
Humko adaa kar jaana hai
Sirf yaadon ka taana baana hai
Kya chhupaana hai

Haale dil jo ho gaya hai mitra,mitra
Ajnabi kyon ho gaya hai mitra,mitra
Kuchh to kami hai saawan
Saawan sa kyon na laage mitra,mitra
Shaamo sehar kyon mann ka
Aangan yeh soona laage mitra,mitra

Dhoop leke jo gaya hai mitra
Ajnabi kyon ho gaya hai mitra

Yaara haaye yaara
Kaise jane yaara bichhda
Yaara haaye yaara
Sang chain saara bichda,...
tears roll down from anant's eyes...just then ranbir comes and ask him to join them at the canteen but anant leaves widout saying a word..ranbir surprised...

there Navya's dadi tells her father about Arjun's return from US..papa asks kaun dadi says wo singh sab ka beta tu bhool gaya...kanpur ka.bada aacha ladka hai..papa busy in his work remembers and says yes..par rahega kahan yahan..dadi says..yahan sumitra k ghar rahega...papa says itna bada kab hogaya wo..dadi says kal aaraha hai..chutti mein...navya's papa says he will go to pick him from the airport..

Anant returns home their baba hav called all to gather at the hall...sab aagaye he called Anant and Shagun to cum forward..and announces that anant will b engaged to shagun ,after three days ka muhurat hai shubh...anant is shocked...he cant bliv this..he cud just say baba..and he leaves...baba looks disturbed...while shagun and rama rejoices..

Nimisha cums to anant's room and says"bhai ye kya ho raha hai,apne baba ko kyun nahi bola,aur aur...Navya...i mean bhai aap to use pasand karte ho na..aur shagun k saath apka koi mael nahi"..anant looks on he says"Nimisha mujhe khud nahi pata ye mere saath kya ho raha hai,mujhe kuch der akela rehna hai"...nimisha leaves..saying "thik hai bhai"...

there navya tries to control her tears but her heart is crying out.dadi cums and says kal tere liye ek wo kya kehte hai shurprise hai...koi aa raha hai ..navya din listen to it...yet she approves of it..navya's mom cums and says navya bahut khush hogi...kyun navi..navi nods her head...
just then Appy comes to meet her..dadi and maa leaves...appy asks kya hua hai tujhe aur tu itni murchai kyun dikh rahi hai...kya hua hai navya tu mujhse kuch chupa rahi hai...navya tries to hide her tears but she breaks down...she tells appy everything...appy looks shocked...she says"mujhe laga tha par phir laga ke main galat hun...and she hugs navi"appy tells navya to foget anant jisne uska dil itni behrehmi se tod diya...to get over it...as he doesnt deserve navya..

*precap:in the college sumone comes infront of navya ..whil navya looks surprised...😳

hope u all will lyk it...😊do comment...





m loving this! 😊
engagement after 3 days! poor AnYa 😕
heading for episode 3..thnx for the awesome os!

Edited by shenzz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: triasha

guysss...🤗...next part hope u all will lyk it...😛...do give in ur comments ...😊




Episode -3

It begins with navya getting ready for colege the next day...her mom asks her to stay bak that day...but she is adament to go..papa comes and says he will drop her at college...navi goes wid her papa..

dere ANANT is in pain..he is too much upset...his baba's words ringing in his ears and navi's words as well...he closes his eyes and sees navya's face...he opens his eyes tears cum out ...
he goes to college...there navi's papa drops her and says he will cum to pick her up from college as well...
there ritz and ranbir getz to kno all about it...anant is too much sad..he tries to talk to navya...but navya avoids cuming face to face wid him...while anant goes after her and stops her..he asks her that he is in pain and she is the only person who can help him...

anant asks for the last tym he will not ask for nethng more plzzz...navi wid lot of pain in her heart agrees...in a room in college...anant says"main kya karo navya kuch samjhme nahin aa raha...mere parivar kabhi nahin smjhenge...humare pyar ko...main kya karu jo tum bolo gi main wahin karunga...main tumse dur nahin reh sakta..."..he pauses...and thensays "baba ne kal mujhe shagun se shaadi karne ki baat ki hai"...NAVYA is shocked...tears cumout of her eyes...she sits down...anant cums and sits kneeling down in front of her...holds her hands and asks...plzzz mujhe batao main kya karun...meri zindagi tumahre bina adhuri hai...aj main aisi jaga khara hu jahan ek taraf mera parivar or ek taraf tum...dono taraf se meri haar hai...ek ko bhi main khona nahin chahta..."
navya cries looking at him...she understands his pain...she gathers courage...she remembers the sacrifives of her family for her and says" anant parivar sab se pehle hai..apne parivar k pass jao...main theek hoon...meri fikar maat karo..wo tumhare liye jo sochenge usme tumhari bhalai chupi hai..."and they both cry holding each oder..just then ranbir ,appy,ritz cums in...navya goes out...and these song plays in the background..🥺

Teri yaad mein paagal pal pal rota hai
Bin tere na jaage ye na sota hai
Aksar tanhaai mein tuhe pukaare
Na zor dil pe chale

Haare haare haare hum to dil se haare
Haare haare haare hum to dil se haare

Teri yaad mein paagal pal pal rota hai
Bin tere na jaage ye na sota hai
Aksar tanhaai mein tuhe pukaare
Na zor dil pe chale

Haare haare haare hum to dil se haare
Haare haare haare hum to dil se haare

Ab jaane hum ye pyaar kya hai
Darde jigar mushkil bada hai
Sunta nahin kehna koi bhi
Dil bekhabar zidd pe ada hai
Samjhaaon isay kaise jaane jaan

Haare haare haare hum to dil se haare
Haare haare haare hum to dil se haare

Har aaina toota lage hai
Sach bhi humein jhootha lage hai
Jaane kahan hum aa gaye hain
Saara jahan rootha lage hai
Kya dard dil ne diya kya kahein

Haare haare haare hum to dil se haare
Haare haare haare hum to dil se haare

Teri yaad mein paagal pal pal rota hai
Bin tere na jaage ye na sota hai
Aksar tanhaai mein tuhe pukaare
Na zor dil pe chale

Haare haare haare hum to dil se haare
Haare haare haare hum to dil se haare.


appy and ritz goes out to navya and asks her to just wipe out anant...navya cries...and aks them not to misunderstand him...they try to normalise navya...and they were about to accompany navya to her home...tabhi navya's car cums and stops...navi looks up..there sumone cums down wid her papa...she looks surprised...papa cums up to her and says its arjun..remeber kanpur ka dost...arjun cums up to navya and says kaisi ho...and says he has cum for holidays to mumbai..navi tried to b happy but still she was thinking about anant...navi gos home...
dere dadi was happy to see arjun,...arjun is very jovial he gelled well wid harsh...he understands sumthing is wrong wid navi..he goes to navi's room...navi ne bohot dino baad use dekha..they were recaptulating their childhood days...how they used to play pranks on each oder...ek bar usne navi ko k plastic ka lizard dikhake darya tha...wo sunke navya haas pari..arjun ws pleased to see her laughing...dadi says papa dekha ye ladka navi k liye bilkul sahi hai...

*precap:anant calls navi...navi asks him tum theek to ho na...😳...

hope u all will lyk it...😳






nice bg song! waiting for the next episode 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
Nice update re hope arjun understands what navya's condition is
thnks for d pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
amazing part...

loved it...

thanks for pm...

count soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
its really nice trisha...
continue soon :)
awesome... keep itup d gud work
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Posted: 14 years ago
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👏no words for praise... all i can do is 👏

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