OS:Tu jaane na..#.updated pg 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
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MY FIRST OS...guys hope u all will lyk it...😃...
the story is same from day one on the show...it starts after they come back from the picnic..😳...
characters:Navya,Anant,their parents,baba,bua dadi,rama,shagun,dadi,ritz,appy,ranbir,harry,harsh,gautam,renuka,with a new character called ARJUN in it...😉..


Episode:1
After Anant and Navya return to their respective homes,there navya was happy to see gautam eho came to take renuka bak.in nant's house baba comes to talk to anant,he reminds anant of their principles and his faith in him..he tells anant that there's an announcement he will make tomorrow he asks anant to b present there tomorrow's evening and leaves...

after that anant thinks of navya he realises he has hurt her by avoiding her,so he cals her up, but navya cant take the call as the whole family was there...she cuts it off...anant tinks about her the whole nite...

after gautam leaves navya in her room,ritz calls her up...they talk abt the picnic then ritz shares a secret that ranbir has written a chit for her but she din get it...navya realises she asks whats written in it...ritz says he wrote he canyt forget that day...navya is shattered tears rolled down her cheeks..till then she was happy thinking anant was not avoiding her and he wrote the chit for her...she keeps the phone...ritz cudnt gauge whats wrong...

the next day they go to colege anant tries to talk to navya...navya avoids him...all r chatting in the college canteen while navya sits at a corner talking to no one...appy asks whats wrong navya says she is not feeling well want to go home...
she was walking thru the corridoor someone pulls her and takes her by the corridoor room...it is anant...she turns her back and tries to escape...

..anant says listen to me...navya says okay tell...
anant says"main behek gaya tha,bhool gaya tha humare family values ko,i am sorry wo sab ek galati tha,mujhe tumse door jana hoga...isiliye am avoiding u"...navya was crying her heart was crying out...she turns wiping her tears and her dreams shattered..she says"sahi kahan tumne aur thik hi to kiya...main bhool gayi thi ke tumhare liye wo ek galati hai,bhoolse ise pyar samajh bethi...thank u tumne yaad dila diya..meri taraf se tumhe koi pareshani nahi hogi..."she runs away crying ...anant looks thru the empty door way her words echo in his ears...he is shattered...


*precap:baba announces anant's engagement wid shagun...and dere dadi talks to navya's father about arjun...


hope u all will lyk it...😛..do comment...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Fter reading this d 1st questn who's Arjun
nice yaar waiting for d nxt part hope ther wil b more convo between ANYA in d upcoming parts
thnks for d pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice one triasha...luved it😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pratamesh

Fter reading this d 1st questn who's Arjun
nice yaar waiting for d nxt part hope ther wil b more convo between ANYA in d upcoming parts
thnks for d pm

thanks yaar...will update soon...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: starangel

nice one triasha...luved it😳

thanks judi...😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow..!!!! awesome.. really *liked it*
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesomee osss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! really awesomee..plzzz continuee soon..n pm mee...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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WOW...awesome..love it..update soon...!!😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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heyyy🤗


nice start yaar👏


thnk u so much for d pm😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey, Wow, Loved the start...
It doesn't look like yr first O.s Really superb!!!
can't wait for the next episode😍
continue soon...
Thx for the Pm...
~Tamanna

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