AvNeil FF: 'A MILLIONAIRE'S First Love Thread #3 (Upto Chap 68) - Page 9

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Posted: 7 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Shaiksafia

Hey Riya Hey safia.!

Such a fun filled chapter loved there cute morning talks these 2 are getting cuter with each passing chapter Aww, thank u so much. They are going to get even more cute. I keep falling in love with this Neil Khanna he wants to keep a tab on everything in his lady loves life 😊 Exactly.! He didnt want to miss on anything and everything. Whatever she do, whatever she faces, he wants to be there with her.
The article part was brilliant 👏 Thank u so much
Jealous Avni was a treat 😳 , Mitali ne yahan bhi peecha nahi Choda par koi nai yeh Neil Khanna ko usse koi lena dena nahi hai and I am so happy for that 😃 Hahaha 😆 Koi na koi tph chahie tha na Avni ko jealous karane ke lie toh Mithali ko lana pade. Yes, untill Neil is Patnivrata we shouldnt be worked up with it. But the case is different in show.😔

You have increased my expectations for the next chapter now I really can't wait for It please update soon 😉 Haha 😆 Will try my best with it.!

Much love
Safia


Hey Safia,

Thank u so much for such cute comment.!

I am glad you are enjoying the recent changes.

Will try to be more creative with this story.!

Much Love.!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: vaish_patel


SOON did you say???? YOURE A BABE ❤️



😆😆

Totally loving the compliments.! 😉

Yes i will be back soon, with a super hot update, remember.! 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: rilsaf

Ri🤗

Congrats🥳
Awesome chapter. Totally loved it. Thank u so much saf.!
Cute update. Their morning talk was so cute.
They are so cute. Iam falling in love with their cute talk. They are communicationally too becoming comfortable.
I loved how he called her my munchkin. Hayee yeh teekh nahi karre AAP mere weak heart ke saath. Totally unintentional gal. Mujhe toh koi munchkin nahi bulata 😔
That article part was beautiful. Loved it. Encyclopaedia Ko saath rakne ki uses. Thank u so much.! Avni's life is so sorted having Neil and such friends.!
Aww, she got jealous. Wow, this is a huge turn. Bcoz avni got possessive. Look at him. He can't be real. Kitne ache se Samjaya usse. He is love. He is everything a girl wants.! Hence he is fictional 😆😉
I love her possessiveness. I love the phase in their love. Shayad yahi hai pyaar moment. Exactly.! Abhi toh shayad pyaar shayad dosti hi chal raha hai.
Iam so excited ri. Pls pls update soon. Wats gonna happen?
Oh god, I seriously can't wait.
Wat do u mean by 'SUPER HOT'.
I can't wait. Ahhaaa, My marketing skills are working 😆 Have patience saf.! Next update bhi aajaega jald hi or kya jone wala hai yeh bhi pata chal jaaega jald hi.! 😉
Cute update ke baath hot update😎
Issliye bolti hoon u r the best.😳 we have all the liberty to play with our character's shade.! 😉 Thank u for the compliment btw.!
Continue soon pls jaldi.
Congratulations for third thread. Iam really happy for u.🥳🤗



Hey saf,
Thank u so much for ur amazing words and heartlfelt wishes.!
They mean the world to me.!

Much love.!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Awesome chapter esp the last part😆Avni has made it a point not to leave him any soon . Arey yeh humari lady don hai aesei thodi Neil ko jaane degi.! Though he gave a genuine answer she was still on accusing mode which was broken by DD . I loved him catching her red handed😉Avni you are jealous😆😆 Imagine how much Neil would have been itchung to say that. But poor guy was scared.! Thankfully DD was here to his aid.! DD is such a AvNeil shipper. this possessive doctor sahiba is a treat to watch just like Neil who should be in seventh heaven by now . Any man will love this possessive side of his lady . Guess whole length teasing session is on the way😆 Exactly. Her possesiveness is going to mean the world to Neil, esp when she is not so vocal about her "apparent" feelings. This is like a spill off for Neil. With double the effect of her cuteness. Ohh definately, DD is not going to leave this chance of teasing.!

Article was wonderful . You have to try writing columns😆 Hahaha. Do you think i stand a chance.? Although i do write a blog of my own but thats Medical Related not fictional or story wise.

Early morning phone conversation was so adorable for words😳Avni becomes serious so easily .😆Kya karein aadatein ! Neil's munchkin😳I loved that ! Thank u so much.! I personally enjoyed writing their convo, though i am not the one who enjoy convo writting but it was written in a flow And his bribing bebe to send her with Prakash😆Lol ! Accused for ploying😆😆I'm such a fan of Bebe and Neil jodi . They redefine cuteness.! Just like Avni and NeelaMaa jodi. Impatient for his diamond Neela Ma😆He knows to catch her off guard even while talking on phone . Ofcourse, he has become a pro in this.!

Super hot update .😲I thought he is gonna introduce her in front of media .😆 Woh toh super hot update ke baad bhi hosakta hai na. 😉


Hey Sri,

Thank u so much for ur amazing analytical review.!

I thoroughly enjoyed reading and replying to it.!

Love ya.!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445


Khudko sambhal rahi hoon abhi tak kyonki I don't want my first love to be left incomplete but if you continue doing this I can't guarantee in future I will be able to cop up with it.


Aapke self control ko humara salaam.!

Isko likhte likhte mujhe bhi is character se pyaar hogaya hai.!

Ahhaaa, kuch kuch toh hora hai, dekhte hai kab tak sambhal ti hai aap apne aapko.! 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
#86
Awesome. Lovely fully conversation based part and I just loved it. And the most lovely dialogue is "Ah.! So My Munchkin is Up, and didnt even bother to let me know." It was said with such a authoritive tone. Lovely. Thank you so much for this amazing one. Waiting and dreaming for hot update. Pls update soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#87
Riya kaha hai tu.
Kal se yeh show ke sunn ke hum pagal ho rahe he aur onscreen bhi Neil khanna humme sukoon nahi de raha ha I.

Please riya jaldi update kar na.
I know tumne kal hi kara hai or me bohoth hi stars demanding ho rahi hi.
Par me kya karu me majboor hu😭😭
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Posted: 7 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: firsttimehere

Such a lovely chapter Riya ..had a smile throughout😊 Aww, so happy to spread smiles, which has become a rare entity now a days.

The phase of courtship is the best and most important in any marriage and especially for arranged marriage .. you are portraying this phase of avneils life in a fantastic way👏 Thank u so much for believing and saying so.! Feels like an accomplishment.!

When o think back to the time Neil was scolding himself for writing his number on avni's palm and nervously waiting for her call to the previous update where he has this free casual banter and flirting with her and her being his munchkin An evidently Visible Progress.! Isnt it.?

When avni was irritated about the thought of going on a date with millionaire to being worried sick when he didn't call due to bad health and then to yesterday's disconnecting Angie's call yo pick his call to today's happy banter blushing and jealousy .. Wow.! You have like summarised their growth in this relationship so much in a beautiful way. You have put it up very aesthetically.!

What a fabulous journey👏 Thank u so much for your sweet gestures.!

They have discussed the seriously stuffs , gotten closer to each other's families , started to know each other's likes and dislikes , Neil started to flirt recently and now avni is getting jealous and next a super hot update ..😳bahut sahi ..they aren't leavingany of the aspects of courahip period untouched 😃 Thats how a long lasting, lifetime kind of relationship is based and nurtured, it grows slowly but reaches deeply even before we know it. I am a firm beleiver of such relationship, i have seen many in my life and i just wanted to portray that. Thank u for making me realise that i am on a correct path.!
And needless to say I am totally looking forward to the next update😉😳
Just like I do for all your updates ..😆.tumhe Kya laga ..I said I am waiting because it's gonna be a super hot one ? 😳.mein bahut innocent Hoon jee 🤣 Hahaha 😆 I am just happy that ypu are looking forward, the reasons can be decided by you urself.! 😉


Hey buddy,

I really dont have words to put up my present feeling on this page.

I am so overwhelmed that it made me speechless.!

Cant thank u enough.!

Much love
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Posted: 7 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: radhikrishna89

Awesome. Lovely fully conversation based part and I just loved it. Thank u so much And the most lovely dialogue is"Ah.! So My Munchkin is Up, and didnt even bother to let me know." It was said with such a authoritive tone. Lovely. Thank u for mentioning that.! I am glad that u enjoyed those parts.! Though i am not good in writing concersations. Thank you so much for this amazing one. Waiting and dreaming for hot update. I will try to put it up soon.! Pls update soon.


Thank u so much buddy.!
This really means a lot to me.!

Keep reading and appreciating.!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: deekshitaamidal

Riya kaha hai tu. Present Ma'am.!

Kal se yeh show ke sunn ke hum pagal ho rahe he aur onscreen bhi Neil khanna humme sukoon nahi de raha ha I. Neil khanna toh apne sukkon ki talash me hamare show ko "un-sukoon" kar raha hai.! No hopes from him

Please riya jaldi update kar na.
I know tumne kal hi kara hai or me bohoth hi stars demanding ho rahi hi.
Par me kya karu me majboor hu😭😭 Its still half written.! Chal koi na, i will complete it soon and will update.!


Just want to let you know, i can understand rhe present condition of fans.!
And that i will try my best to make them feel good through my stories.!
😊

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