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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome update

Love it


Thank u so much.!

Do stay tuned for the last chapter.! 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
Apan ko maaf karna for being late .
Neil and his effortless ways to make Avni jealous . Itni jaldi realisation bhi ho gaya and he understood that she too feels the same . Wah bhai ! I thought Avni would take a class for being so chipko with all the hot chics in the party . Why to blame the models when Neil is just too hot and handsome to handle !😆 Uske peeche hi honge na that too when he is over sweet with his gestures in an attempt to make certain someone jealous . Even aunties wouldn't leave him alone 😆 I was literally laughing . And his arrow hit the bull's eye correctly . Avni came to rescue him 😉

In between all this they have time to think about the game ! I appreciate it as I would definitely forget 😆 So Avni and Neil are again gonna face off when he was impatient to have her fighting by his side . Am I right? Avni must have been so busy grudging certain someone for putting her through this mess . Then how can she get time to participate in the treaty 😆 Virtual Reality ! Wow

Be it game or real Neil wants only Avni 😆 Swetha and Neela will be so proud of themselves for breaking their bones 😆
Edited by AgnesFan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hello Riya ji .
What an awesome update.
Love is on the way. Waiting waiting for them to confess.
Waise hum readers ka bhi na kuch nahi hone ka hai. Ek wish puri hoti nahi ki dusri ke liye demand list pehle se hi ready rehti hai. Kya karu but ye dil mange more. Abhi tak we were demanding for hints to decode empyrean and Gabby now that it is decoded we especially me want them to confess as soon as possible.
Our blue munda is such a tease. He is trying everything possible to make her jealous. Finally momma's mission accomplished from one side.
Loved loved loved it from the core.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Res
Tomorrow pakka unres kardoonghi
Sry for the late response
Unres
First of all, very sorry for being so late.
Last two update was awesome. Totally loved it.
I was in depression bcoz of this Malayalam show.
Issliye itne late hogai. So, pls forgive me.
Coming to update. It's awesome.
Shaadi hogai. Good. Wat he is doing?
Itna chipakne ki zaroorath kya thi?😆
Jealous feel Karane keliye kya. Sherni kuch nahi ki?
Na I don't trust u guys. Kuch toh karegi.😉
Yeh models😡 kese peeche padgai uski.
Lol,aunties also lattu on him.🤣
Thank god, avni rescued him. He realised his feeling. Iam glad.
Confession kab hoga?
Yeh kya sunnarahi hoon. Next update was last update. Guys, this is na insaafi.
They and their games. Abhi bhi game ki PADI hai dono Ko.
Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon guys
Edited by rilsaf - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Apan ko maaf karna for being late . Jao Maaf kia.! You see i am too generous. Vaise bhi your comment did compensated for everything 😉

Neil and his effortless ways to make Avni jealous . Itni jaldi realisation bhi ho gaya and he understood that she too feels the same . Wah bhai ! Sri, You are forgetting this is a short story with a happy ending, yaha toh sab kuch jaldi karna hi padega na, thodi na Nk naam ka koi show hai. I thought Avni would take a class for being so chipko with all the hot chics in the party . Models ki ya Neil ki.? Vaise you never know with us.! Kuch bhi ho sakta hai 😉 Why to blame the models when Neil is just too hot and handsome to handle !😆Uske peeche hi honge na that too when he is over sweet with his gestures in an attempt to make certain someone jealous . There you go.! Dil ki baat cheen li tune.! Even Avni is total lattoo over him 😉 Bande ka chram hi kuch aesa hai. Even aunties wouldn't leave him alone😆I was literally laughing . And his arrow hit the bull's eye correctly . Avni came to rescue him😉 Sirf Aunty nahi, Octopus Aunty. 😆 ofcourse Avni ki private property pe koi hath dalega toh usko toh aana hi padega na 😉

In between all this they have time to think about the game ! I appreciate it as I would definitely forget😆 They are die hard gamers, remember.? So Avni and Neil are again gonna face off when he was impatient to have her fighting by his side . Am I right? Oh yeah.! The final battle.! Vaise who do you think will win.? Avni must have been so busy grudging certain someone for putting her through this mess . Then how can she get time to participate in the treaty😆Virtual Reality ! Wow Aahhh, u can asumme any reason for that. We left it on readers. Yours is good too.! Payal lets stick to this reason 😆

Be it game or real Neil wants only Avni😆Swetha and Neela will be so proud of themselves for breaking their bones😆 Ofcourse Neil ka Avni ke bina, or Empyrean ka Gabby ke bina, nahi chalta.! Broken bones gave more benefits than the healthy ones 😉


Hey Sri,

Thank u so much fro ur kind words and reviews.!


I am so glad you are enjoying the story so far, i hope you will love the end too, which is going to come very soon.!

Last chap, i cant believe we have reached towards an end.!

Stay tuned for it.!


Much love.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445

Hello Riya ji . Hey Nidhi.!

What an awesome update. Thank u so much
Love is on the way. Waiting waiting for them to confess. Yes ofcourse.! Stay tuned for it.!
Waise hum readers ka bhi na kuch nahi hone ka hai. Ek wish puri hoti nahi ki dusri ke liye demand list pehle se hi ready rehti hai. Kya karu but ye dil mange more. And we remain ready with our updates to fulfill all your wishes.! You see we are thorough in our research and handy in giving what readers demand.! 😉Abhi tak we were demanding for hints to decode empyrean and Gabby now that it is decoded we especially me want them to confess as soon as possible. Ab last chapter me yeh na hoga toh kya hoga.! Vaise you know with us.! So expect the unexpected 😉
Our blue munda is such a tease. He is trying everything possible to make her jealous. Finally momma's mission accomplished from one side. Aag toh dono taraf barabar lagi hai.! Momma's made this their mission, vahi se toh sara siyaappa shuru hua hai.! AvNeil ko aesei chod deti toh, kab ki MIL's ban chuki hoti. But yeh Mom's hai na kuch samajhti hi nahi hai.! Anyway der aae durust aae.! 😉
Loved loved loved it from the core. So glad to know that


Hey Nidhi,

Thank u so much for ur amazing words.!

We have noted ur demands and we will try to do full justice to it.!

So dont forget to peep in here for final update tomorrow.!

Much love
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: rilsaf

Res

Tomorrow pakka unres kardoonghi
Sry for the late response


Hey Saf,

No problem, take your own time.!

But dont make it too late. Agle update ke pehle aajana 😆😉

We'l be waiting. 😊
Edited by docritu99 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
What kal last chapter hoga . Hein abhi to shuru hi hua tha or abhi hi khatm bhi ho gaya.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445

What kal last chapter hoga . Hein abhi to shuru hi hua tha or abhi hi khatm bhi ho gaya.


Yes, Next is going to be a last chapter.!

This is short story Nidhi.!

Payal ka bas chalta toh chap 5 me hi The End hojata.!
I have pushed it till atleast chap 7.!

Also dont worry, we will try to bring something new and fresh, if ever this forum remains open and show goesn on. 😆

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: docritu99


Hey Saf,

No problem, take your own time.!

But dont make it too late. Agle update ke pehle aajana 😆😉

We'l be waiting. 😊

done
Y u guys r ending this one?
Its Too early😭

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