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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: docritu99


Hey Sri,

Thank u so much fro ur kind words and reviews.!


I am so glad you are enjoying the story so far, i hope you will love the end too, which is going to come very soon.!

Last chap, i cant believe we have reached towards an end.!

Stay tuned for it.!


Much love.

Neil ki class 😉
I know why is it VR 😆
As to the question who will win Gabby 😆 Emprean has already given himself to Gabby . Baki tum dono ki marzi .
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: rilsaf

done

Y u guys r ending this one?
Its Too early😭


Saf, it meant to be a short story.!

And 8-9 parts are anyway too much for us to write 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Neil ki class😉

I know why is it VR😆
As to the question who will win Gabby😆Emprean has already given himself to Gabby . Baki tum dono ki marzi .


Ahaaa, So you want Neil ki class.! 😉
Lets see what we have in store for you.!

Hmm.! So you think gabby will win.!
Exactly, expect the unexpected when we are writing it.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: rilsaf

Res

Tomorrow pakka unres kardoonghi
Sry for the late response
Unres
First of all, very sorry for being so late. Umm, let me think whether u are forgiven or not
Last two update was awesome. Totally loved it. Thank u so much
I was in depression bcoz of this Malayalam show. I didnt know ur operator airs Nk in Malyalam.! 😆
Issliye itne late hogai. So, pls forgive me. Ohkay you are forgiven.!
Coming to update. It's awesome.
Shaadi hogai. Good. Wat he is doing? Kiski shadi hogai? Mujhe q pata nahi chala.?
Itna chipakne ki zaroorath kya thi?😆
Jealous feel Karane keliye kya. Sherni kuch nahi ki? Woh bhi toh chahta hai sherni kuch kare, islie toh healthy flirting kar raha tha
Na I don't trust u guys. Kuch toh karegi.😉 Lets see.!
Yeh models😡kese peeche padgai uski.
Lol,aunties also lattu on him.🤣 Remember his Charm.!
Thank god, avni rescued him. He realised his feeling. Iam glad.
Confession kab hoga? Hojaeega.! Last chap tak toh ho hi jaaega.! We do believe in happy endings 😉
Yeh kya sunnarahi hoon. Next update was last update. Guys, this is na insaafi. This is a short story and destined to reach its end, sooner or later.!
They and their games. Abhi bhi game ki PADI hai dono Ko. Ikr.! But they are die hard gamers.!
Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon guys


Hey Saf,

Thank u for ur kind words.!

I am happy u are enjoying our twisted tale but i do feel u are still confused about some things.! Of it is, do ask me.!

Stay tuned for last chap, which i will be posting very soon.!

Much love.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: docritu99


Ahaaa, So you want Neil ki class.! 😉
Lets see what we have in store for you.!

Hmm.! So you think gabby will win.!
Exactly, expect the unexpected when we are writing it.

How many more updates left
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

How many more updates left


Just the last ch left!😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
I loved this update; it was freaking gorgeous like a mango ( I make no sense, I know 😆) sweet and tangy. Yay, finally Neil realized that he is head over heels in love with his greatest nemesis, a lawyer by profession, certain Avni Pareikh. Why is Neil Khanna so irresistible man, women swoon over him like anything. I loved this Avni who is bitten by a green-eyed monster, can we have Neil facing similar situation due to the male following his lawyer sahiba receives every now and then.
Even after doing multi-tasking at the function, Avni and Neil still have the energy to look into their phones for a game. Must say, lots of dedication and patience they have. The battle has begun, I'm curious to know who will win? Update soon.
Love,
Nivi


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Posted: 7 years ago
When are we getting the next chapter? Riya, jaldi update karo naa.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Aphrodite_NV

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I loved this update; it was freaking gorgeous like a mango ( I make no sense, I know😆) sweet and tangy. Ofcourse you made.! Even i love mango.! Bas baat khatam.! 😆 Yay, finally Neil realized that he is head over heels in love with his greatest nemesis, a lawyer by profession, certain Avni Pareikh. He is smart enough to arrive at a realisation, our lawyer sahiba is still wandering in jealousy lanes. Why is Neil Khanna so irresistible man, women swoon over him like anything. I loved this Avni who is bitten by a green-eyed monster, can we have Neil facing similar situation due to the male following his lawyer sahiba receives every now and then.</font> Neil has always been the centre of attraction, everywhere.! So Avni is bound to get jealous, considering how passionately she loves him.! Ahhaaa, Neil getting jealous, may be in some other story 😉 Here toh Avni is needed to be pushed towards a conclusion na.!

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Even after doing multi-tasking at the function, Avni and Neil still have the energy to look into their phones for a game. Must say, lots of dedication and patience they have. Hahahaa 😆 You are underestimating the avid gamers inside them 😉 The battle has begun, I'm curious to know who will win? Update soon.</font>
Hmm, lets see.! Vaise what do you think who will win.?
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Love,</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Nivi</font>



Hey Nivi,

Thank u for ur amazing words.!


I am happy you are enjoying the story as much as we enjoyed writing it.!

And sorry it me a long time to revert back to you, balme the real life man.!

Much love
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Aphrodite_NV

When are we getting the next chapter? Riya, jaldi update karo naa.


Yush yush.!

Very very soon.!

"NOW" is ohkay with you.? 😉

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