AvNeil SS : LOVE at First 'SITE'..!!(Completed.!!) - Page 12

Originally posted by: Binh

Oh! This was sooo unexpected... Totally in love with it...

It was really surprising and can't wait to read further... .

Originally posted by: Thesweetsoul

Yeh gabby aur empryean jo bhi hai, avneil ki tarah lagte hai. Jaise ki koi tv show mai do logon ko ladte huye dikha raha hai! Sorry for my blabber and irrelevant thoughts.🤣

About prakash, u did justice to his character. It feels like he, shweta and Neela are the knots of AvNeil's relationship. Beautifully described 😉.

Neil- and Avni. Both were ridiculously funny or i say making me laugh with their antics.

Yes that is well said that actions speak louder than words!

But why shweta and Neela did not go for their wedding planner and arrangements? Maybe because they wanted AvNeil to work together. Right?

Overall, the chapter was beautifully written till gabby and the fight came.

Neil is a fan - boy! Oh sorry a fan girl as told By our Avni.

Avni does not seem to be tube light here. Beauty from heart with brains!

Thank god she is not such as in the show.

👏. Paayal , written very nicely.

I wish success for this collaboration to you both!

Love,

Sami

Originally posted by: argnk

gamers??? is that what they are??? gabby and champ being their online personas???

Originally posted by: paayaal

Hi,

Thank you so much Sami!😃 My pleasure Sweety!

Who are Empyrean & Gabby & what connection they have to the story will be answered as the story progresses. Okay!

Shweta and Neela met with an accident in the last chapter that rendered them immobile for a while. Since they had already accepted to work on DR's wedding, they couldn't back out of it. This also gave them a perfect opportunity to make Avni & Neil work with each other...hope this clears the confusion.

I feel they are avni and neil on a online game!😆

Oh , i understood,Thanks for clearing my doubts!

Prakash, Neela, & Shweta are such beautiful characters that they can never be anything but enablers for AvNeil!

Oh yes they are! I wish shweta is not like as in the show. I wish she could change like in this story she is!

Riya will be here tomorrow with the next chapter, do stay tuned for that.

It will be lovely to read from you and riya!

Love,

Payal.😃

Gee, my style😃😆

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

What's this parallel universe story running here ? Once I thought I was playing PS when Gabby and Emprean was fighting . Clash of clans ! I love guys with sword and shield 😳 You both wouldn't leave precious chance to confuse us . We are the evil twins that thrive on confusing our readers with unexplained twists!!😈

Jis cheez ko shiddat se chahte ho use paane me pure khaynat sazish karti hai. Forgive if I have made any mistake in the quote .. So same happened with Sweta and Neela . When they fried like no tomorrow these both were so blind with their cat fight . When they decide to leave it god blessed with golden opportunity for match making . Exactly! AvNeil could have long been together if not for their mothers constant meddling!😊

Hayabusa 😳 What a bike and Avni riding it . This Avni is just hot and smart with no nonsense attitude added . Just a small description piqued my interest . Girls riding sports bike is sexy 😎 IKR! As a lawyer the girl cannot be anything besides being bold & intelligent!😃

Neil 🤣 Avni enjoying annoying him to ends and he stands like a statue to stress his indifference when he clearly shows he is affected . His car I too drooled over the car before leaving it with a heavy heart to write the chapter!😆 Avni will have to work hard to loosen up the stiff-lipped banker.😉

Their banter was so obvious that even DR wanted to become their match maker 😆 IKR! The guy is just sooo cute! That honeymoon thing cracked me badly 🤣 Me too.😆So can I be ready for more mush and PDA 😉 Aagey dekho hota hai kya...😉

I'm loving their car and bike than them . 😳 What a hawt combo ! Me too! Me too!