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Finally the last day of the shoot arrived,our call time was 7am,but somehow the shoot got delayed and we started our shoot around 9am.It was a hot day, by 10:30, we had shot the climax scene and the media people were already there as this was our last interveiw together.

Aditi was having slight cold so she directly went to her vanity van to get some sleep. While I was busy shooting her search sequence, it was an emotional one, so I was completely drained.

Next, we reached Khanna house where my marriage track with Mitali was shot, we were shooting in reverse order. Everything was happening at such a fast pace that I didn't got time even to talk to her,leave about our hidden feelings.

At last, when all other actors had left, Sandeep sir shot our last scene which was a dream sequence of Neil as Aditi layed in my arms,how I wished Naamkaran never ended. My sole reason to meet you everyday was snachted so easily. How ,I will meet my bright face.

From,where I will collect the will to be at work again without her. Atlast I took a last AvNeil selfie,when Aditi asked me "why in this pose". And I replied "kya pata kal ho naa ho".

Whole unit collected and we cut the cake, Aditi was trying hard to hide her tears, the ever smiling face was sad today. The girl who brought happiness on others face,lacked her own motivation. I had to cheer her up.

There was one last interveiw segment, where reporter asked "what will you miss the most". I replied, "the moments, mera punch line tha,ek moment create hota hai bolne ka,ab woh kaise bolun,madam toh saath hongi nahi mere". Just then Aditi stepped in between to say " but yeh happy bhi honge, ab se inki choclates aur green tea bags gayab nahi honge".

I knew she was hurt, but why that sarcastic comment . I wanted her to explain, I never said no to her to take my choclates or tea bag,then why she said so.

As soon as reporter left the room, I locked the room from inside and asked her "why did you say so, infront of camera". Aditi recollected herself and replied "look am sorry,woh galti se bol diya. I like to tease you everyday, ab tu meri adaat ban chuka hai, mein ek din mein kaise chod dun,kaise bhul jao jo bhi humne saath kiya, jo pal humne saath jiye. I know we are actors and we have to move on. But this time it will not be easy neither for you and nor for me"

As she banged the door open and left my make room, I had a slight smile on my face and I said to myself "Even I dont want to be that easy. "

For the first time her hidden feelings were erupting out. Clearly, the fear of losing me forever made her say that and I pledged myself to make sure this distance between us decreases in future.
Edited by njain16385 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful ! Read all parts in one go... Please update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Great going.
Do update soon :)
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Just read all the parts. It's brilliant . Do update
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Chapter 9 Hidden

It was hard to accept the truth, yes but the show of which I felt proud to be a part of was gone. And with that was also gone the reason to meet Adi. Don't know why I was missing her badly tonight, and we have just seen each others 2 hrs before.I liked old AvNeil videos on insta and fell asleep.

Next morning, there was no early morning alaram. Purvi ,me and Abhilash went together to gym, but I was not in a mood for workout. Slowly, the reality was dawning me, that from now on no naamkarann exists, the weird feeling as if I have lost everything was slowly penetrating inside me.

Abhi, and I went together for lunch , where he said " Common yaar show aate jaate rehte hai. Dont be sad we are actors kal kuch aur kaam mil jayega". I just nodded my head in affirmation, but how could I make him understand that it was not work ,but the fear of loosing the woman I loved. The sole reason to meet her everyday was taken away from me.

In evening we had an interveiw with India forums, we all three were there, and the reporter asked me first about Naamkaran, and how did I feel early in the morning without it. Next questions were for Purvi and Abhilash. One question was for Aditi in the live session, which I answered.

Abhi was closely observing me since morning and once we two were alone he asked "kya baat hai be, mein tujhe subah se dekh raha hun,dhyan kahan hai tera, din bhar se bas phone dekh raha hai tu. U looked so uninterested today at gym,at lunch and at interveiw. Yeh tera pehla show toh hai nahi jo off air ho raha hai. Aisa kya hai jo tu itna miss kar raha hai,kisi se baat karni hai toh phone laga le, kuch problem hai toh mujhe bata na bhai"

In haste, I replied "Aditi ko yaar, pata nahi woh kahan hogi , kis haal mein hogi. Woh pehle hi kuch bolti nahi. Kal woh itni sad thi, pata nahi ab kaisi hogi woh. Social media se toh gayab hi hai woh. Aur mein use phone kaise lagaun,kya bolun Aditi tum thik ho,sad toh nahi,pagal samjhegi woh mujhe"

Abhi replied back "kya bolun mein,jo mujhte dikh raha hai, woh tu samjh raha hai ki nahi. Pata nahi. Bas itna yaad rakhna zada der naa ho jaye"

Next day Jahan came at our house to meet us. We all three headed for lunch at delhi highway restaurant in Andheri. Looking at my gloomy face Jahan said "yeh devdas wala mood kyun bana ke rakha hai". Before I could speak Abhi added "kyunki inse,inke jeene ki wajah cheen li gayi hai. Ab yeh kiske sahare jiyenge bas yahi soch soch ke mera dimag kharab kar raha hai 2 din se"

Jahan understood about whom we were talking , he said " Sad kyun hota hai. Dekh ladke apna pain kisi se share nahi karte hai. Aur ladkiyan koi close wale se share karti hai. Ek kaam kar tu gullu ko hone laga and ask her to help you. Jab tak tu delhi mein apna photoshoot kar ke aayega. Am sure woh kuch na kuch pata laga hi lengi, and tujhe tera jawab mil jayega"

I thought Jahan was right, while I had a late night flight to Delhi today,at least Gulzie could act as a catalyst in the given time to give me an answer or a hint what was hidden inside Adu's heart or her feelings about me.
Edited by njain16385 - 7 years ago
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amazing.! looking forward for more
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Amazing update will look forward for the next.
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Chapter 10 Final Part Hidden

I was at the airport and as per scheduler there was a 6hr delay, rather than waiting at lobby, I called Gulzie to help me out. She was like a second mother to me as well as Adi. She was the only one whom I considered to be the most helpful person.

I arrived at Delhi ,next morning,exhausted. Still meeting my freinds and family, it was a tiring day. Next day I had a early morning shoot with Praveen Bhat for an apparel brand. How few days passed I do not know,my family was here, but I was not happy. Like your mind is here and heart somewhere else. Anyway the fake smile had to be carried, and as actors we are good at it.

I called Gulzie after 2 days she met Adu,and she said "She is a tough nut to crack,better you move on". I was taken aback by her words,why did she said so. What was that , I saw in Aditi's eyes,her feelings,emotions were they all fake?.My soul was not ready to believe Gulzie words.

She was more like a family to me now and my mother kept talking to her time to time getting my updates.Just then my Ammi knocked on the door and said "beta ab tumhara b'day ho gaya, kaam bhi acha kar rahe ho allah ki dua se. Ab bolo toh ladki dekhna start kare. Yaa aur rukna hai". I just nodded my head because there was no turning back now. As she laid few photos in front of me,to select. I just started keeping my clothes inside my bag, and then she asked me, "where are you going, abhi toh aaye ho". And I replied her "Mom,mujhe Mumbai mein bahut zaroori kaam hai use pura karna hai"

As I kept the photos aside, and booked a ticket to Mumbai. My brother was coming late,so I booked a cab to drop me to the airport. As the radio played yeh dooriyan song, the lyrics "kaha bhi naa maine, nahi jina maine,tu jo na mila. Yeh bhi hua kabhi,tujhko sabhi mein paa liya". A tear drop rolled from eyes, I could feel her presence everywhere. How can I live without her.

I straight away called Gulzie to call Aditi at her home, today evening. I will join them tonight.

As I reached her home, a cake was waiting for me. To my surprise everyone was there yusuf sir,jahan, abhilash, nalini,barkha and Aditi.

They all sang happy birthday for me, and it was a real surprise for me. Just then Gulzie announced "I have heard our bday boy is soon to get engaged. His parents have choosen a lucky lady for him"

As everyone smiled and clapped for me, I was looking at Aditi,trying to decipher her expressions asking myself what wrong did I do to reach at this stage.

I could see ,she turned around wiping off a lone tear drop that rolled down from her eyes. As everyone congratulated me, the music was played and everyone hit the dance floor.She was missing, as I got to know she had to terrace to take a call.

I went upstairs,just to find her alone looking at the night sky. I asked her "apne good freind ko wish nahi karegi, itna toh expect kar sakta hoon na tujhse"

She replied " ab good freind ki best wishes to humesha hai naa tere saath. Aur kya bolun"

As I said " wahi jo bolna zaruri hai, aur ab tak nahi bola"

More then me,she was breaking inside and I wanted her to reply how did she survive without me. And she said "kya bolun, congratulations. Sorry but I cannot fake. It is not easy, tere bina , har roz kaise rahi hoon mein. Only I know. While you were enjoying in Delhi. Here, I was dying everyday without you, figuring out ki ab kaise milungi usse. Har roz sochti thi ki adat dal jayegi, par nahi hota itna asan kisi ko bhula dena jo apki adat ban chuka ho. And when you come back you get another surprise that aap shaadi kar rahe ko. I mean how could you do that"

As she was already sobbing ,I cupped her face and said "sab kuch bol diya par woh nahi bola jo bolna chaiye tha"

With her 'kya' expression , I continued "Yahi ki tum bhi mujhse utna pyar karti ho ,jitna mein tumse karta hoon" hugging her tightly.

As she embraced me tightly, I could see a smile on her face that I missed the most. I want to make it official with a insta story, but she stopped me and said "Not now, in front of world we will remain good freinds for the next 2-3 years. As I affirmed with her " waise bhi saare good freinds ki shaadi ho jati hai ek din. Let us keep this hidden from rest of the world.

As we went down joining others for the dance, Gullu took me aside to ask "mil gaya bday gift?". I couldn't control and hugged her tightly to say "Mom aur aap hai naa bahut acha plan banate ho,kissi ki hidden feelings kaise bahar lana koi aap se sikhe. Anyway ,thank you for the best bday gift you gave me today,but yeah we have decided to keep it hidden from others for few years"

Edited by njain16385 - 7 years ago
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Aww my shipper Dil ! How I wish this happens ! Beautiful... Thanks for writing this :)
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Hey thnx everyone for reading this FF and ur words of appreciation. Since 18May was the last day for NK as well as Nawab sahab bday, i wanted to end the series here giving it a happy ending. Hope u all enjoyed. Thanks reading.

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