AdiZa FF Hidden Chapter 10 last part updated

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I always wanted to write an FF on AdiZa, but never knew time would arrive so fast, Hope you like it.
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It was night 2:30 am, our shooting was already wrapped for the day, Aditi had gone to Kolkatta for an IPL match. A day without her is very boring, but yes I have to get used to it now. My insta wall was flooded with posts of SaveNaamkarann and WeloveNaamkarann, my fans were crazy for the show, specially for the character I played Neil Khanna.

I know one day each show has to end, rather than stretching it like a rubber band, it is good to end it on happy note. The love and appreciation I got from this show, I don't think I will ever receive in future. It was my dream to became police officer and this show helped me live that dream.

Just then Abhilash knocked on the door, to ask "What are you doing this late, common kal shoot pe jana hai naa so jaa"

How I wish I could reply waiting for an insta post from someone. But I just said " Surfing insta man". Honestly she was the first girl in my life who motivated me, while most of the girl commented on how I looked and she never gave a damn about it.

I admired her hardwork, she was special to me, she always motivated me to do better. Looks are something which will go away with time, but nature will stay with you. And Aditi was one such girl with a golden heart.

Only few days were left, 18 may was the last day of telecast as rupang said. We were all tight lipped not to disclose anything.

But more than that a shallowness was embracing me, the thought to lose my girl, but was she my girl or not is also not known to me with just 20 days of shoot left and then no meeting.

How will I survive without her smile. I had to find what was hidden inside her before I took any next step.



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Posted: 7 years ago
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It was cute and adorable... Continue please
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I woke up at 9 am and it was time to hit the gym,by the time I reached the sets it was already 1pm. Kabir was back from school and we shot few scenes of court where I had to ask for his custody.

The kids left early for their studies,shruti took rest of the cast for the csk ipl match, and we had to shoot few flashback scenes so just yusuf sir me and aditi stayed back.

We all three had our dinner together and then the shoot resumed at 11pm. The scene was I had to pullback angry Avni and then we had to fall on bed while I would hold her from waist. The scene was explained to us.

I had to fight with her,our ususal water fight,and then she left angrily. First scene was complete. Then in next scene I had to pull her back holding her waist tightly I don't know what was dawning on me, I have to be Neil, but something was changing, I didn't want her to leave.

After 3 takes, we completed the scene with the usual falling on bed as there was water on floor, I slipped and by mistake my lips touched hers.

I said sorry and lifted myself, and she left the venue. Nobody noticed it except two of us, though accidental, but something in me wanted more. To hell with my hidden feelings as I smiled and entered my makeup room.

It was already 3 am, I asked Aditi to drop her at her home. She nodded,but she never looked in my eyes, all I could see her cheeks had turned pink and she was blushing I don't know why. Romantic numbers were played on radio and it seemed they were playing with our hidden feelings.
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Chapter 3 Hidden

It was already past midnight and I played a FM channel where songs were being played on listners request, soon RJ played song " ajnabee mujhko itna bata" from pyar to hona hi tha. He was saying that this song is dedicated to a beautiful girl whom this listner boy loves, but the girl is still in love with someone who broke up with her.

I was just thinking this song suits me also. I have feelings for her,but all that is hidden from her as she cannot see beyond her past relationship.

To break those silent musings I asked her "I went to your profile, some 11K comments, on your pic,I said wow,but mostly bashed you for following you know who?"

Aditi replied " You know even in this age people still cannot believe that even after break up you can be freinds. I had moved on from him, I just added him that day,because he wanted to show a pic of girl he loves now on insta. I gave my good wishes and unfollowed him again on insta. But I don't wanna read those comments, for I know who I am and I don't need to prove to someone else"

I couldn't agree more, I just changed the topic seeing her teary eyed, we reached her apartment and said good bye.

Next day, I had late shoot from 4pm ,while Aditi had to shoot early morning where mowgli was supposed to be kidnapped and she had to fight with the goons with an iron rod in the scene.

Then there was a chase sequence where she had to run behind running jeep. She fell while running and hurt herself badly.

I arrived at the venue an hour late.Whole shooting was halted, and the PH decided to shoot further scenes with me. Aditi was given some first aid and told to rest for the day.

It was night at 12 pm , Aditi completed her shots with me with help of her body double and we did pack up.

I offered to drop her home today and she nodded. I kept her belongings in my car and asked her to move,but she was in pain. I asked her if I could help her out.

When , I touched her from her waist, she was too hot, I tried to check again, she was having fever, 104 F the thermometer confirmed. It was not a good idea to leave her alone at her home this time.

With her permission, I took her directly to my flat,as Abhi was out of town, I suggested to get a sleep in his room. I gave her my tshirt and trackpants to change and she looked cute in those.

She didn't want to eat anything. So I prepared soup for her. It was time to sleep.She was shivering even with two blankets over her, I took out a white wet muslin cloth and kept on her forhead, with a hope temprature will come down, but it didn't.

Finally, I had to lay beside her to keep her temprature down while she was sleeping and I don't know but the warmth she embraced was a experience I never had before.

The sun was up, and I went down from the bed sleeping with my one hand still on her forehead. She woke up early and said "Zain , tum raat bhar soye ki nahi"

I nodded,"Yes, I did" . I lied to make her feel comfortable. She offered to prepare a coffee for both of us.

She was blushing, I don't know why. But somewhere I felt her hidden feelings were also trying to convey me something.

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We got together in the car, I wanted to shoot an insta story for morning,but she was still weak. Hence, I dropped my plan.

We reached the sets at 11am, it was a tiring day for her, mostly under sun,as she had to shoot to uncover the child trafficiking racket.

My shots were mainly indoor with khanna family and mitali.By 5 pm she was tired and went to her room directly to take rest.

My shots with sana were scheduled post 6pm. Sana went live, where she answered few questions by insta users. Then she shot my choota bheem video and we left to shoot our scene.

I had to dub my voice for a scene with Aditi, she was weak, so I asked her to rest her head on my shoulder and we recorded our voices before the packup.

Sana was angry today, I had no idea why. But , I didn't care to ask her, as my girl was my priority.

I took her to doctor where her dressing was done, and medication was given.We reached Aditi's flat, she took her extra pair of clothes and then we reached my flat.

I cannot leave her alone at this point of time, she ate a plate of porridge and left for sleep.Even , I didn't want to disturb her she was very exhausted.

I went to my room, had shower and turned on to my phone, all FCs were up bashing sana. I didn't know she is a sweet girl, why would someone bash her. Then the recording , I saw where she specified as aditi is always in her make up room,hence she never click pics with her.

Something was being exaggerated, I called Sana, where she said to ignore those messages. I was happy, to see how maturely she handled those fans. But someone was more mature than her, quite and calm, who lets her work speaks for itself.

It was 10:30pm , I opened the door, she was asleep without make up she looked like sleeping beauty. I took out the thermometer and checked her temprature 102 F. Some cold water and muslin cloth, I said to myself "beta lag ja kaam pe".

Aditi woke up and asked " Zain, tu yeh kya kar raha hai soo ja". I replied " 103 fever hai aapko,kaise so jaun, you lie down and let me do,jo mein kar raha hoon".

Aditi went on " ek baat bolun, chota bheem aur chota police ki jodi bilkul achi nahi lagti." I asked her "kyun achi nahi lagti".

She replied "kaise achi lag sakti hai,tujhe toh dakota johnson chaiye naa romance ke liye warna 50 shades of colour book kaise banegi. Waise bhi tu 30 ka hone wala hai , shaadi kab karega"

I wanted to cut her down and I asked her to sleep, after taking her medicine dose. She asked me again to sleep in the same room.

I was also tired with lack of sleep, and full day at work, but her fever could come back anytime. Hence , I agreed.

I setup a pillow wall between us. And she said " darr mat,mujhe bharosa hai tum pe, tu kabhi koi dusri ladki ke shoulder pe haath nahi rakhta toh I know you are a nice guy"

I replied " woh sab toh theek hai, par mujhe tumse darr lagta hai naa isliye,safety first"

We smiled and slept, but something was nagging me why was she asking me to get married, asking about other girls, means she is stalking me. Jelousy. ..Nooo. May be her hidden feelings needs an answer from me.


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I wanna tell her, what I was feeling about her from last few days. I don't know how she will react to it.

Aditi was different from others girls, she was happy in her cocoon life. She didn't care who you are, where you are from. This girl gave no damn about it.

It was Yusuf birthday and Gullu anniversary tonight, after packup I got ready and straight away went to Gulzie house to pick her up. We reached Sheesha sky lounge to make some early preprations and check everything was in order.

Everybody had arrived, jahan,barkha,zaan, tara sitara, but I was looking for somebody else. After a formal meeting, I excused myself, to check if dinner and cake was ready. Just then Jahan came from back and said "kya hua tu bahar kyun nahi aa raha hai, sab tujhe dhund rahe hai aur tu yahan hai"

I replied "Sab matlab, Aditi bhi aagayi kya?". I don't know what made me say that, but I was sure in the party he will pull my leg.

It was 9:30 and Shruti arrived , I had my eyes set on the entrance door. And after fifteen minutes Adu arrived in a black top and jeans, without any make up, still a bright face. I asked DJ to play the music,zaan pulled her on the dance floor.

I didn't like when anyone touches her, I asked Jahan to dance with her as he was the only one I could trust. The cake was cut and we had our dinner. Aditi was busy talking with tara sitara,and when I saw her , Jahan came from back singing "aakhon hi aakhon mein ishara ho gaya, bethe bethe jine ka sahara ho gaya."

I reverted back and said " aisa kuch nahi hai". But I knew there was lot between two of us , what we had expericed from last few days.


Sunheri, Aditi started their dance, and I was awestruck to see her moves. I never expected Aditi could dance that well. While , I was watching her from far,sharing hookah with Zaan, I said " this girl is a bundle of hidden talent,if she gets a right life partner cum mentor in her life, she will reach heights". He looked carefully at me,studying my face expressions to reply " koi aur kyun, mein karlunga usse shaadi".

I was burning inside with jelousy,but there was no point to react .While I shook a leg with her on tamma tamma. I noticed Zaan was trying to get closer to her.

I asked Jahan "Yaar DD, you love your bhabhi right, so take care of her ,protect her, there are many wolves here". As , I was trying to leave ,he holded me to say" if wolves are there when is tiger coming to protect the tigress."

I smiled and left him unaswered. The party was over,it was 2 am, Zaan asked Aditi,if he could drop her. Before he,or she could answer, I said "DD haina, yeh usko drop kar dega, don't worry".

Since, I had nalini,gullu and her hubby in my car, I dropped them and then headed to my flat. Again on insta, it was clear who stole the show,the star of night. I felt proud of her.

Next day at shoot we had a scene,where the lawyer had to charge her as characterless and she had to run out of court. We completed the shoot by 2pm and after lunch, I had to shoot for her search sequence. That was done by 6pm.

Another day was coming to end, each one of us was having a feeling of shallowness on the inevitable seperation,with each passing day, and the fear of loosing her forever was dawning on me. I wanted to know if she had any feelings for me, but how was a big question

We resumed the shoot at 7pm. I had a fight sequence,where I had to save her from KK mom goons. Since, I like to do my own stunts, I fought with them,but soon fell on sharp stones due to imbalance.

My knees and wrist were bruised, first aid kit was called. The spot boys cleaned the wounds. She came and asked the boys to drop me to my vanity van.

I removed my shirt and back in shorts, she asked the boys to leave. She took cotton plug and cleaned my wounds while angrily saying " mein tum par bilkul gussa nahi karna chahti par tum harkate aisi karte ho, kya zaroorat hai hero banane ki, ab lag gayi naa"

I could see her teary eyes, probably she wanted to speak something else, but her anger was not letting her hidden feelings come out.



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I was mumbling "bol de Adi,bol de",just then she interrupted me "kuch kaha tumne". As I signaled No, she drifted her eyes on my wounds, as if feeling my pain, carefully dressing them. I could see her moist eyes had a different story to tell,yes it affected her if something happened to me.

Many times before also we had done action scenes, injuring ourselves, but the way she cares about me, I had never seen for anyone else.It was evening and time for pack up.

I just reached my flat,changed to my night wear,had dinner and sat in my room chatting with abhilash. Just then a msg came "raat ko haldi wala doodh pe lena",he read it loudly. I snached my phone, but damage was done. He said "beta ladki ko chinta hai teri, dekh she sees you online and msg kar diya taki you sleep on time". I just smiled and ignored but yes I knew she cared for me.

Next morning, we had some court room scenes, where judge was supposed to give final verdict, it was emotional one and lot of glycerine was used. My eyes were paining after so much of crying , I wondered how ladies do that job everytime.

For the next scene, I had a romantic date with Sana,while Aditi had scenes in Sukoon house. Zaan was also on set ,and we three sana,me zaan were enjoying our tea. Sana left to attend a call. Aditi came out of her make up room, my eyes were fixed on her, how could I say that I missed her.

Zaan was quietly witnessing all this and left for the day. Later in evening we had a card party, Zaan came with Nupur, Sanjay-Poonam,Barkha and Gullu with their hubby. I was the only single enjoying with them after heavy dinner. If it was Gullu's home I would have requested her to invite Aditi too, but here I had no option.

I missed her badly, and Zaan could read my mind it seemed so, while others were playing cards, he came near me to say " Yaad aa rahi uski, agar kuch hai toh bol kyun nahi deta"

I just turned to reply " agar usne reject kar diya toh".He stopped me in between and said " toh phir dekhenge saath mein, I will help you".

Yes that was true, I had a fear of being rejected, because her life was already a emotional mess after breakup. My hidden feelings were stuck inside with a fear of rejection because I will not be able to take a No from her, but seeing him I knew there was someone to help me now.

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Next day, morning started with gym, I knew I had to be fit but too much of cakes and choclates from fans had turned me into near obese man. The paunch had started to appear, and I loved flat abs. I called my gym trainer to help me pull the weights while I laid on bench.It was already 2 hrs in the gym, and seeing my hardwork my gym trainer never left a chance of banter. He said " tera toh kam hojayega, tell your girl also to tone down, then your pair will look awesome"

I was wondering who was my girl. Just then Abhi interrupted "Aditi yaar, sabko lagta hai tu or woh date kar rahe hai, after that dating rumour , ab usko kya pata tune insta story mein clarification diya tha".

I don't know first I used to get annoyed if I was linked to anybody.But this time I wanted to accept it and didnt want to deny it either.

I asked Zaan if he could help me today to find out . While I went inside make up room to get ready for my shots.

Zaan asked Aditi "aur kya chal raha hai life mein, ab is serial se toh aap kafi famous ho gayi ho. Everyone wants to know ki after this serial, whats your future plans"

She said " abhi toh yaar kuch nahi 18 may ke bad sochenge, ghar jaana hai, its long time you see". Just then Zaan interrupted her " ok ok aur shaadi ke kya plans. Insta pe jao toh tumhare saare fans Zain aur teri shaadi ki baat karte rehte hai". Aditi answered him" Shaadi abhi kahan, am just 25 pehle carrier then 2-3yrs baad shaadi. Rahi baat Zain ki toh tujhe lagta hai woh mere jaisi ladki pasand karega. Use chaiye koi hot shot types,jo uske saath late night party attend kare,thodi hot and happening ho. I am toh introvert toh kaise possible hai"

Zaan asked her again "aur agar possible hota toh, karti tu usse shaadi". Then Aditi said " toh phir sochte, par mujhe ache se pata hai we can be freinds,but life partners never".

Zaan came later to my room in evening and updated me whatever he talked with Aditi.He said " She likes you,but somewhere unsure would you like to settle with a girl like her seeing your lifestyle".

I could understand whatever he said, And then I replied "why she underestimate herself."

Zaan added "because your social media profile projects you in certain way and her own past experiences. She needs someone right now who can give her that time and space to evolve. Who understand her,and guide her to the right path".

I replied, " if she needs time and space, I will give her that. Waise bhi we are good freinds, toh mein usse support karunga, untill her hidden feelings find an answer, I will wait"
Edited by njain16385 - 7 years ago
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Very well written chapter.
Loved it.
Update the next soon.
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luking frwrd fr ur nxt updt..😊

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