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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: RomComFan

What a start...the masquerade promomis a fave and I love how u used it... plus Enrique too? What's not to Love?

Mine to! Thanks lovely! You know the song! Yayyy!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tumpa12

new one...excited

loved it
update soon

Thanks lovely! Update is on the way!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome start

Update soon

Thanks lovely, update is on the way!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 2-
Zain couldnt help but think about the beautiful chocolate brown eyed woman he had danced with, it was strange to be so attracted to a woman who's face he couldnt even see, but there was something there, but how was he meant to find out who she was?

Zain stood up, he supposed he should get to know Aditi a little better before shooting started again. "Hey Aditi"
Aditi turned around and smiled, stepping forward "Hey, Zain right"
He nodded "I was wondering if you wanted to grab a drink later on so we can get to know eachother better"
Aditi smiled "I would love that, I've got to go film my scene but ill speak later"

XXX

Zain looked down at his watch as Aditi ran over to him breathless "Sorry, hectic day, should we go"
"Yeah, come on"
Aditi and Zain walked up the road to the local bar, Aditi ordered her drink then sat down waiting for Zain to do the same
"So, what made you want this job"
"I wanted something to kick start my career, and this was just the thing, what about you"
"Uh just seemed interesting I guess, how did you find the party last night" Zain asked inquisitivley, maybe Aditi knew something about the woman he danced with

"Yeah, it was really good, what did you think about it" she sipped her drink then looked back up at him
Zain wasnt sure whether to admit to Aditi about the dance or not
"Did you see that couple dancing, what did you think of that" he asked, trying not to let his expression give him away
Aditi coughed loudly, making Zain jump up and slap her back
"Uh it was nice I guess, good chemistry"
Zain huffed "Yeah, the chemistry was amazing" he rested his chin on his hand and looked over her shoulder

"Excuse me"
Aditi looked up to see a man looking down at her "Hey" Aditi smiled
"Would you want to dance" he asked
Aditi shook her head "No thanks, im just here with my friend"
The man scowled "You women think you're privileged, you'd be lucky to dance with me"
Zain pushed his chair back and stood up "Hey man, she said no"

"And what, this is between me and the girl so back off" he squared up to Zain, resting his hand on Aditi's shoulder
"Get your hand off her, or ill rip it off" Zain threatened
The man smirked, Zain lifted his arm and punched him straight in the face
The man held his nose and walked away, shaking his head
Aditi stood up, "Thanks" she whispered nearly falling over
"Aditi, are you okay"
She shook her head "I just want to go home" and with that she walked away
Zain sighed, shy scared Aditi could never be the woman he danced with

XXX

It was the next morning when Aditi was called over to speak to the director.
"Aditi, to ensure we get TRP's we need to give the audience something to cling onto, so we have put out a special announcement to the public, its the first time we have ever done something like this"
Aditi looked on nervously, slowly nodding her head as he spoke to her

"We saw how you danced at the party, that was the chemistry we wanted and the viewers will love to see, and we have decided that to strengthen the chemistry even more all main characters of the show will go to one group activity a week that will be recorded, and you will make something for your co-actor, but behind a blind so neither of you will see who your co-actor is, until the moment we reveal it"

Aditi sighed "Whats the purpose of this"
"Chemistry isnt just physical, its emotional to, can you make a bond without seeing eachother" he asked
Aditi nodded "Will the viewers know who our co-actors are"
He nodded "But you guys will not"
Aditi stepped away as Zain walked over "Sir, you wanted to see me"
Aditi tapped her chin, this was for sure something new but she was willing to try everything to make sure people loved the show

XXX

Aditi removed her contacts, standing behind the blinds, she pulled one blind down slightly to look around when Zain stepped over, he knew those eyes
"Excuse me, aren't you the woman I danced with" he asked
Aditi jumped and let go of the blind
"Wait, please dont be afraid, you dont have to tell me who you are, I just want to talk"
Aditi peered the blind down again, his eyes met hers and she watched as his hand slid underneath it
"Hi, im Zain, nice to meet you"

Thoughts so far? I know this is a very different take on the usual, so im hoping this will still work just as well!


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hide and seek game and alll...but I can see him falling for aditi too...can't wait for rest
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: RomComFan

Hide and seek game and alll...but I can see him falling for aditi too...can't wait for rest

Thanm you⭐️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Loving it! Thanks for writing another story of adiza. I loved your previous story magic of adiza
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Posted: 7 years ago
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The idea adopted for improving the chemistry is cool . This way they can know the cast more . Aditi now learnt that Zain was her pair in tango . When will he learn ?
I thought she won't be going to bar but she did go and had drinks . For me she is bold for it's the first time she is going with her costar .
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: AgnesFan

The idea adopted for improving the chemistry is cool . This way they can know the cast more . Aditi now learnt that Zain was her pair in tango . When will he learn ?

I thought she won't be going to bar but she did go and had drinks . For me she is bold for it's the first time she is going with her costar .

Hey, thank you! Aditi still doesnt know:')
In some things shes confident, in others she is not but Zain will learn that eventually
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 3-
Aditi pushed her earphone in even more, looking down at her co-stars hand she sighed heavily, he seemed polite, she lifted her hand and placed it in his, it was sweet how he was wanting to shake her hand when they werent even allowed to speak to eachother.

Zain looked down at her hand in his and smiled, he really wanted her to speak to him, but it was okay if she was nervous, because he was to. Aditi tried to tug her hand back, the tingles rushing through her veins entirely to much to handle all at once, but Zain held onto it tighter. Aditi closed her eyes, then pulled her hand back, but the tingles didnt go away

Zain looked down at the clay on the pottery wheel, he was so far from being artistic, but he wanted to make his co-worker something that would remind her of their dance, but what? She was beautiful of course but also a force to be reckoned with, he needed to make something that would explain all of that but the best he could make was a bowl.

XXX

Zain handed over what he had made to the man who nodded and put it to the side, he looked back hoping his co-worker would come out when he got a phone call.
Aditi walked out, placing the small vase down she smiled and walked past Zain, her head down.

Zain nodded "So, my storyline in this is Neil marrying Riya, so she's my co-worker"
"Now I didnt say that" replied Mahesh, "Just that thats what your storyline is"
Zain sighed, there was only two women it could be and he had already worked out it wasn't Aditi, so it had to be Nalini, but for some reason he just couldnt imagine Nalini being the woman he danced with that night

Zain stepped outside to get in his car when he saw Aditi, "Need a lift back to set" he asked
Aditi didnt hear him, Zain stepped forward, tapping her shoulder, she screamed and turned around making Zain chuckle
"I said, do you need a lift"
Aditi pulled her sunglasses down ever so slightly and then smiled
"If its not to much trouble"

Aditi sat in Zain's car, pulling her seatbelt across her body she put her head back
"So, I found out who my co-worker is" Zain stated making Aditi look over at him
"Who"
"Nalini"
Aditi raised a brow, so that meant her co-worker was Gautam
"How do you know that, we werent meant to know"
Zain sighed "Theres nothing wrong with breaking the rules sometimes"
Aditi huffed "Rules arent made to be broken"

Zain rolled his eyes, Aditi definitely wasnt the woman he danced with, he got out his phone, typing a message at the stoplight
"Thats dangerous"
Zain looked up "We've stopped"
Aditi shook her head "Its still dangerous"
"If you feel that unsafe, get out and walk"
Aditi wasnt one to be tested, pulled her seatbelt off and opened the car door
"Hey what are you doing" Zain asked, shocked
"Getting out and walking"
"Has anyone ever told you how infuriating you can be"

Aditi smiled sweetly "Yes" then jumped out and slammed the door, here her co-worker Gautam was so sweet, shaking her hand when they werent meant to introduce eachother, and on the other hand was Zain. She shook her head angrily as she crossed the road, she sympathised with Nalini for having to work so close to him, she walked across the road when Zain pulled up infront of her

"Get in, stop being stubborn" he said, rolling down the window
"Im only doing as you asked" she replied, walking forward
Zain slammed his hand against the steering wheel "Get in the car before I pick you up and put you in it"
Aditi pulled open the door and sat inside "Yet you say im the stubborn one"
Zain shook his head and began the drive to the set

XXX

Mahesh looked over at Aditi and Zain who walked in together, they both strode in, dark expressions on their face
Mahesh smiled, there was chemistry in the most passionate emotions.
Aditi stood infront of Mahesh "Sir, you wanted to talk to me"
Mahesh looked over at Zain who stood behind her, looking down at his phone
"Yes, and Zain, come into my room please"

Aditi and Zain followed him inside, Aditi sat down and pulled off her sunglasses, Zain tucked his phone into his back pocket
"So, today Zain, we are filming the scene where you save Aditi from drowning, as you know we've spoken about chemistry, but today more than ever it needs to be shown"
Zain raised his brow "But why would I need chemistry with Aditi, when she isnt who I will be with on the show"
Mahesh smiled "You must have chemistry with everyone, since you are the cop investigating Ananya Verma"

Zain nodded and Aditi went to stand up
"That anger in your eyes for eachother, keep it that way"
Zain and Aditi tried to argue against it but Mahesh just raised his hand "I know what I see, arguing will make no difference"
Zain and Aditi stood up at the same time, turning they both looked up, their eyes meeting simultaneously.

Zain stepped back, his breath taken away "Hey, do you wear contacts"
Aditi furrowed her brows "Yes at the moment, I cant find my glasses"
Zain suddenly felt very nervous, his voice was scratchy and he struggled to maintain eye contact
"Is that your proper eye colour or is that contacts"
Aditi blinked fast "Why are you so interested in my eye colour"
Neither realised Mahesh had already walked out of the room, a sly smirk on his face

Aditi looked down at her watch "I need to get back to set"
Zain grabbed her wrist "Wait" he looked back into her eyes, yep, definitely the woman he danced with
Adit looked down at her wrist in his hand "Yes"
"Sorry about earlier"
Aditi nodded slowly "Im sorry to"
He let go of her wrist and she turned to walk away

Zain fell back into the chair, laughing, how could he not know it was her? He felt stupid for even questioning it
He jumped back up to return to set when Nalini stood infront of him, light brown eyes looked back into his.
Zain looked over to Aditi shooting then back at Nalini, now he really was back at step one

P.S- Zain and Nalini dont know eachother in real lives! Thoughts?

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