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Posted: 7 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Avneil_forever

Awesome update!!!! cant wait til saturday 😭 love how there scenes and real life are crossing

Thanks lovely! Sorry:( thanks!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445

Why is it necessary for mahesh bhatt to hide the actual partner of these two.

By the way as usual awesome update.

He wants to build chemistry between them before hand, thanks lovely!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: blablabla_mo7

Seriously this is way more thrilling than your past story on them.. keep it going gal.. loving the concept and the pace. I wish the updates can be more frequent, maybe 3X a week if not too much.thank you so much

Aw thanks lovely! I know, im so sorry, I just dont have the time, but maybe when my exams are over!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: blablabla_mo7

Saturday Saturday... update coming???

Update will be here, its currently midnight where I am!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#45
Wonderful update... Sorry double post...
Edited by srain10 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#46
Part 6-
"So what you're saying is, you danced with a man at the party and now this man is messaging you" asked Nalini, leaning closer, interested in the story.
Aditi nodded "It can only be Gautam or Zain so"
Nalini shook her head "What about Jahaan"
Aditi face palmed "I didnt think about him"
Nalini got out her phone "I have Gautam's number, we can atleast see if its him or not"

Aditi compared the numbers and sighed heavily "Its not him, but im still on square one"
Nalini tapped her chin "Well I could ask them for their numbers"
Aditi shook her head "No, because then they might work out its me" she groaned, resting her head on the table
Zain walked into the cafe, his eyes fell on Nalini and Aditi
"Oh hey"
Aditi and Nalini jumped up "Oh uh hey Zain"

Zain raised his brow "Why are you both acting so suspicious"
Nalini laughed "Us, we heard you having a go at someone earlier, we were just afraid you'd be angry at us to"
Zain tapped his hand on the table, making Aditi scowl at him "Do you mind, that's really irritating"
Zain smiled and started to slam his hand down making Aditi stand up "You know what, im just gonna eat on set"
Zain rolled his eyes as Aditi walked away

"Why didnt you just stop when she asked" questioned Nalini
Zain shrugged "I enjoy irritating her, she's so stuck up sometimes and"
Nalini's eyes widened and she shook her head trying to make Zain stop
Zain turned around to see Aditi, he gulped "Look I didnt mean"
Aditi shook her head and walked away

XXX

Zain had looked everywhere for Aditi but couldnt find her
"Gautam, have you seen Aditi"
Gautam turned around "She went home early, said she felt really unwell"
Zain scrunched up his face "Did she look upsett"
Gautam shrugged "I have no idea, why is she okay"
Zain nodded "Yeah, it will be" he turned on his heel and stormed off outside to get some air

Aditi stood with her arms crossed, her hair lifted slightly in the wind
Zain stepped closer "Aditi"
She froze, wiping away her tears quickly, she turned around to face him
His heart clenched painfully at her crying, he had never made a woman cry before, he assumed she was just very sensitive
"Im really"
Aditi nodded "Sorry, I know you are"
Zain flinched at her cold tone "I dont always think before I speak"

Aditi smiled softly "Youre allowed whatever opinion on me that you want, I dont have to like it or agree with it"
Zain nodded "Well I dont know you, at all, so I shouldnt have made the judgement"
Aditi laughed "Some things are better left a mystery" she turned around and walked away
Zain couldnt help but wish that there were less mysteries in his life, first his dance partner and now Aditi.

XXX

"Sara, I really don't want to go out tonight" Aditi groaned as she was dragged out of her house
Sara shook her head "We haven't been out in ages, we're going, I wont take no for an answer"
Aditi rolled her eyes "Where are we going anyway"
Sara smiled knowingly "Its this new club called Spark, you get a certain coloured wristband, and you have to try and find the other person who wears it, the place is dark but the wristbands glow in the dark"

Aditi grimaced "Oh no, I have had enough of dancing with people who's face I can't see"
Sara turned to Aditi in the car "You never know, you might enjoy yourself, if you just let loose"
Aditi turned her head away, the last time she had done that she had ended up catching her co-workers attention, who thinking about, she hadn't heard from all day.
She pulled her phone out and sent a quick Given up on trying to get to know me?

XXX

Aditi felt the blue glowstick click around her wrist, Sara held her other hand tightly
"Go find Mr Blue, im going to find Mr Green" she laughed wiggling her green wristband on her wrist
Aditi looked at the many different glowing bands and made her way to what looked like the bar
"Just a shot please"
The bartender slid her one over, she downed it quickly, shaking her head at the taste when she felt an arm on her wrist

"Wanna dance"

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Posted: 7 years ago
#47
Another mysterious update... hehehehe. Next on Wednesday to know who's that asking her for a dance. Sth tells me Zain will be mr blue lookingohr for Ms blue too. Hehehehe

Nice one!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: blablabla_mo7

Another mysterious update... hehehehe. Next on Wednesday to know who's that asking her for a dance. Sth tells me Zain will be mr blue lookingohr for Ms blue too. Hehehehe

Nice one!

The next one is actually on the way now!
You are correct:)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#49
Part 7-
Zain looked around the busy club for someone with a blue wristband, his eyes fell on the woman sat at the bar alone and made his way forward.
He clasped his fingers around her wrist "Wanna dance"

Aditi looked down at the man's blue wristband, she put her hand in his and allowed him to lead her toward the dancefloor.
Aditi shifted her weight to her left foot while Zain shifted his weight to his right.
Zain stepped forward quickly with his left foot, rocking on his right while Aditi did the same, but stepping forward with her right foot instead and rocking on her left.

Zain span Aditi out letting go of her left hand so she was now stood beside him, her left arm outstretched, he stepped closer to her slightly then span her back in, she rested her hand above his as he rested his on her waist, her other arm wound round his shoulders, her hand rested on the back of his head- their noses touching.

Zain knew he had danced with this woman before, the way her body fit against his so well, the way she accentuated his movements with her own. He had to see if she was who he thought she was.
Zain rested his other hand on her left hip and pulled her around, so her chest was against his, his hand went down to her thigh and lifted her right leg around his waist, he dipped her and leaned closer to her ear

"Hello Desi Cinderella" he smirked as her once relaxed body, stiffened against his
Before she had a chance to reply, he pulled her up and span her around, her breath being knocked out of her as her back hit his chest
She put her left foot forward slightly as Zain rested his hands on her hips, he stepped back slightly with his right foot and they both rolled their hips back

Zain pulled her back against him, his fingers skimmed down her right arm, he pulled her arm up and she wrapped it around his neck, he span her around again quickly, holding her right wrist. Then his other hand grasped her left wrist and he tugged her closer, she crossed her legs and slid in the middle of his open ones, stood back up, now behind him and then turned him around quickly to face her
"You just charmed me" she spoke over the music then turned and walked away

Zain watched her walk away towards the bar, he shook his head, he couldnt let her get away that quickly
He walked behind her, then pulled her into a booth, her hand slammed down on the light switch in the booth before he could see her face, then she sat down
She felt her phone buzz in her pocket and she pulled it out, careful to not allow the phone to light up her face
Why are you so afraid of me knowing who you are?

Aditi turned to face him "Why do you need to know"
Zain tapped his chin "I dont need to, I want to is all, is that so bad" he shouted back
Aditi sighed "I told you, it was just a dance"
"Really, you didn't feel any of that" he guffawed
Aditi had felt it all, the way his heart raced when they danced, the way his hands burnt her skin when they touched her.
But she had a horrible feeling that when he found out she was just plain old Aditi, that this infatuation would likely dissapear

"Look, the woman you've danced with, that isnt me in real life, please just leave it"
She felt his hand grab hers, stopping her from leaving, he stood up and pulled her up to "I want to know you, there is something about you, I just cant get you out of my head and this has never ever happened before"
Aditi released a deep breath "I have to go"
"If you walk away right now and I dont hear anything for the rest of the night, I will never forgive you when I find out who you are"
Aditi tugged her arm away and walked out, sending a message to Sara quickly, informing her she had left

XXX

Aditi tossed and turned in bed, unable to sleep. She reached for her phone, bkinking fast at the bright light and typed out a message, a message she hoped would save this weird friendship she had
I told you I was in a relationship, I lied, i'm single, but im scared youll think something bad about me if you ever saw who I was

Aditi waited nearly an hour for a reply when her phone buzzed
Im glad it was a lie, are you willing to get to know me, even if its just over text?
Aditi gulped I am
The reply that came a few seconds later made her heart race I dont need to know what you look like to know you're beautiful, I can tell that already, sweet dreams of me, your Desi Prince Charming

Woooh double update! Go meee!


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Posted: 7 years ago
#50
Wowww.. That was amazing 👏 loved it thoroughly!!!!!! Im in love with your writing style now ❤️
Waiting for the next update anxiously 😛 you are too good!

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