Adiza Jaadoo Complete

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Hello! So as you know my story The Magic Of Adiza is finished and if you haven't read it yet please do check it out! https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/naamkarann/4953295/the-magic-of-adiza-p14-pg23-24th-march

This story will be a lot more longer and will include their journey from co-actors, to friends, to Adiza!
So here is chapter one and if its enjoyed then I will continue with it, updates will be Wednesdays and Saturdays! Maybe more if I am free:)

Not all scenes written will be on the show!

A young woman in her early twenties stood in line at yet another audition, her brown eyes glistened in the light, she twiddled her fingers anxiously, she had to get this role, she just had to or everything she had given up to get into acting would have been useless, her childhood dream would be shattered.

"Aditi Rathore" a woman shouted, she looked up stunned, she was so nervous, what if she didnt get it? "Stand here please, here are the lines, check them over once again and then start" the woman ordered, patting her shoulder
Aditi closed her eyes tightly, took a deep breath and then began to read her lines.

XXX

A man raised his hand, stroking his beard, he had heard a lot about Naamkaran and hoped that this would be a turning point in his career. His muscles clenched as he lifted his arms, stretching, he was ready for this audition, more than ready infact.

"Zain Imam" a woman shouted, he smirked as he stepped forward. "Stand here please, here are the lines, check them over once again and then start" she tapped his shoulder and then stood to the side. Zain took a deep breath, clicked his hands and then began to read his lines.

XXX

Aditi looked down at her phone for the twelfth time that night, she still had not received an email, text or call, she needed to relax, but it was so hard when you were in reach of your dream but couldnt actually touch it.
Then her phone buzzed, making her jump.

"Welcome onboard to Naamkaran, we are so lucky to have you here, chemistry is everything on a show, so to test how much chemistry you have we are holding a masquerade ball, dress to impress and grab a mask, let the night whisk you away and let us be the judge of who has chemistry and who does not"
Aditi and Zain read the email aloud at the same time, Zain smirked, this would be fun for sure, Aditi heaved a sigh of relief, her dream had come true!

XXX

A long red dress trailed down her body, her waistline glistened with silver gems, matching the ones around her neckline, she raised her fingers behind her curly hair and tightened the string of the mask, her eyes searched the room full of strangers she didnt know, her stomach churned, if she wanted to prove she could have chemistry with someone then she needed to prove that tonight!

Zain tightened his tie around his collar, he looked around at the covered faces and nodded over at Mahesh, one of the only people without a mask on.
He was very excited for this party, and couldnt wait to meet his co-actor, he stepped onto the dancefloor and made his way to a woman, tonight he would find her and introduce himself

Mahesh smiled "Avni and Neil or Avni and Ali, who has the most chemistry, lets see" he muttered to his friend before walking away.

So for a prolouge, how was it? Im super nervous!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I like where this is going...
SO excited to read more!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very interesting cant wait to read the next :-)
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Zain now stood at the center of the dancefloor, he looked around slowly, spinning on his heel. "Found her yet" asked Mahesh, Zain shook his head in the negative.
Mahesh smiled slyly "Good luck" and with that he had walked away.
Zain walked over to a woman "Hey"
Aditi turned around slowly and smiled, she waved lightly then put her hand down.

Esta noche bailamos
Te doy toda mi vida
Qudate conmigo


Zain lifted his hand, scratching the back of his neck "Would you like to dance" he held his hand out, Aditi looked down at his hand, she was a nervous person, but she had to prove tonight that chemistry was something she could have with a co-actor.
She placed her hand in his and allowed him to lead her to a place to dance.
All Aditi could focus on was having chemistry and tonight she would prove she had that.

Tonight we dance
I leave my life in your hands
We take the floor
Nothing is forbidden anymore
Don't let the world in outside
Don't let a moment go by
Nothing can stop us tonight

Bailamos!
Let the rhythm take you over, Bailamos
Te quiero amor mio, Bailamos
Wanna live this night forever, Bailamos
Te quiero amor mo, te quiero


Aditi wrapped an arm around Zain's neck, Zain rested his hand on her mid back a few steps up above her waist, Aditi held Zain's left hand with her right, their eyes met through their masks, she noticed the glint of humour in his eyes, their backs straight, heads high.
Zain stepped forward with his left foot, Aditi stepped back with her left foot, Zain then stepped forward with his right foot, Aditi stepped backwards with her right foot.

Tonight I'm yours
We can make it happen I'm so sure
I won't let it go
There is something I think you should know
I won't be leaving your side
We're gonna dance through the night
I want to reach for the stars

Bailamos!
Let the rhythm take you over, Bailamos
Te quiero amor mio, Bailamos
Wanna live this night forever, Bailamos
Te quiero amor mo, te quiero



Zain pondered who this mysterious woman was, he knew how to do the Tango, but was very surprised that she did to. He stepped forward again with his left foot then moved to the right with his right foot, she moved back with her left foot and moved to the left with her right foot, she raised her eyebrow ever so slightly, the look in her eyes was challenging, a challenge he would rise up to.

Whoa-oh-ooh-oh, Tonight we dance
Whoa-oh-ooh-oh, Like no tomorrow
Whoa-oh-ooh-oh, If you will stay with me
Te quiero mi amor
Quedate conmigo
Esta noche... Bailamos


Zain put his feet together, moving his left foot to the side of his right, Aditi moved her right foot to the side of her left. Zain let go of her waist and span her out making her gasp, he lifted his right leg ever so slightly and tucked it behind her knee making her fall back onto his thigh, he lifted her back up fast, now stood behind her, he ran his nose across her outstretched arm, stopping at her neck, he wrapped his arm around her waist again then lifted her up and spun her around, her legs swung around infront of her.

Bailamos!
Let the rhythm take you over, Bailamos
Te quiero amor mio, Bailamos
Wanna live this night forever, Bailamos
Te quiero amor mo, Bailamos

Zain turned so he was stood facing Aditi, he lifted his hand, resting it on the back of her head, he dipped her low as she rested her arms around his neck, his nose was an inch away from hers, his eyes gleamed with joy as she looked back up at him with a knowing smile, if that dance hadn't proved she could have chemistry, what could?

(Como te quiero, como te quiero)
Let the rhythm take you over, Bailamos
(Como te quiero, como te quiero)
Te quiero, amor mo, Bailamos
(Como te quiero, como te quiero)
Bailamos! Wanna live this night forever, Bailamos
(Como te quiero, como te quiero)
Te quiero, amor mo, te quiero, Bailamos

Aditi pulled herself up making her chest lean against his, her fingers trailed across his neck making a shudder travel down his spine, she went to walk away when he grabbed her wrist, she turned her head over her shoulder looking back at him "Who are you" he mouthed
She shook her head, giggled and then walked away
Mahesh nodded at her, now that was chemistry
Aditi did a happy dance in her head, success!

XXX

Zain had walked across the whole room but had failed to find the woman he had danced with so sensually.
His hands still tingled from where he had touched her, the adrenaline coursed through his body, he had to find her.
Aditi looked over at the crowds of people, tomorrow they started filming and she needed an early night, she walked over to Mahesh, said her goodbyes then left the party.

XXX

Aditi looked around for her glasses, she cussed under her breath, she would have to wear contacts, and she hated them when she need to read lines. She popped in the contacts, a slightly darker brown from her usual colour and made her way to work

"Aditi, meet Zain, this will be your co-actor" said Mahesh
Zain and Aditi shook hands, he looked into her eyes and frowned, her eyes were a different colour. Aditi pulled on the black hoodie and pulled the hood over her head, she stood back and began to get into character.

I know a short first chapter but I didnt want to reveal to much!
What did you think of the dance, I have always wanted them to dance the Tango or Salsa!


Also, anything you'd like to see? Let me know!


Edited by -Rehanna- - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Ooof!! (Fanning self!) But that was one blazing hot chapter!
I love tango & salsa just because they are such an expressive form of dancing! & I could totally imagine AdiZa doing it...if they ever let down their hair & just let go...

Can't wait for next!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Ooh it's so hot for a first chapter . Aditi managed to blow him off at the very first meeting . Is she a chashmish? I love tango and waltz 😃 Expressive dance forms . Hope he learns soon that she is the one whom he danced with
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Posted: 7 years ago
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What a start...the masquerade promomis a fave and I love how u used it... plus Enrique too? What's not to Love?
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very uninteresting start..
Excited to read more...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: paayaal

Ooof!! (Fanning self!) But that was one blazing hot chapter!

I love tango & salsa just because they are such an expressive form of dancing! & I could totally imagine AdiZa doing it...if they ever let down their hair & just let go...

Can't wait for next!

Thanks lovely! I could so imagine it to, one day, maybe, I pray!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Ooh it's so hot for a first chapter . Aditi managed to blow him off at the very first meeting . Is she a chashmish? I love tango and waltz 😃 Expressive dance forms . Hope he learns soon that she is the one whom he danced with

Thanks lovely! In the story she needs them when she reads her lines:) me to! Soon, fingers crossed!

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