AvNeil OS- Of Love And Teasings!

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Posted: 7 years ago
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I am back with another OS! This is the one we would have got if AvNeil had got remarried, with all the rituals like Neela wanted. This scene just popped in my head.


Hope you have a good read!


AvNeil OS- Of Love and Teasings!

Avni was pacing in the balcony of her mother's house. Her both hands were beautifully, artistically decorated with henna. as much as the design was intricate and amazing, the only thing mattered was Neil's name that was engraved on her palms. She smiled briefly.


She went back in time, when she used to fight her feelings, her heart for this very man! Today she was this proud girl, who had risen above her childhood trauma and belief of being a bad omen. Today she was irrevocably in love with Neil Khanna and she was going to declare to the world!


She smiled remembering their confession. It was beautiful and intimate. There were few words exchanged but both knew the gravity of their love. The despair in her voice, the longing in her embrace and the yearning to be with him. She loved him heart, body, mind.


She had fallen in love with each of his virtues. She loved how he lived life in the moment, she loved how he lived life to the fullest, she loved how compassionate he was, she loved how hardworking he was, she loved how respected women! She freaking loved his every habit too!


He was a bit flawed, moody, sometimes even arrogant yet he was lovable and funny in his own ways. He was passionate and dedicated to his profession, serving the people justice. He had accepted her with all her flaws, her trust issues and her revenge filled agenda.


Neil replaced all the revenge and coldness in her heart and filled her life with love, happiness and colours. There was something about them, that connected these two souls in an undying bond of respect and trust.


She remembered their journey, from their first meeting upto their Mehendi ceremony. It was nothing short of epic. They both had suffered so much, sometimes because of my past or his past. The biggest hurdle and challenge was he insulted her, broke their relation and sent her to jail. His entire facade and the ability to lie to her, kept her safe.


But today everything was normal, Avni long ago understood why he did this, put her through so much trauma. As per her mother's wish, they were getting married.


She reminisced how her shared a very unique relation with her mother. He was the son my mother never had. For her, he meant the world. Neil was imbibed in her system, ingrained in her soul and embedded in her heart.

Neil caught her off guard when he came from behind and encircled his hands around her petite waist. In a quick single move, he spun her around when he saw her ethereal smile that once again made him fall in love with her all over again.


She wrapped her hands around his neck and pulled him closer, shocking the wits out of him. He was certainly puzzled and bewildered.


Neil: "Tum khush ho main yahaan aaya hoon?


Avni: "Obviously!


Neil: "Nai, maine suna tha ki normal ladkiyan unke hone waale pati ko milne nahi dete.


Avni: "Par hum normal kaha hai?


Both burst into peals of laughter.

Finally Neil took Avni in an embrace. She showed him the henna and he smiled, content and ahppy. Finally their dreams were going to be fulfilled. They were going to get married, with all the rituals, and this time just for their love, their relation! It was a ceremony to renew their already taken vows.

Neil: "Bahut bhook lagi hai na?...


Avni: "Haan, kuch zyaada hi...Ali ne kaha tha he'll help but I guess wo busy ho gaya guests ke saath... she pouted with sadness.


Neil opened the food container to show her Ali's caf's made Poha! Her excitement knew no bounds. Neil lovingly fed Avni, listening to her nonstop banter about her mehendi ceremony, about how everyone teased her and how Ali and her mom helped her through all.


Neil made her drink the water and he gently wiped her lips, gently brushing her lips making her blush intensely. Later he picked her up and bought her inside her bedroom and placed her on the bed. He bolted the door. He unbuttoned his shirt making Avni gasp.


Avni: "Yeh tum kya kar rahe ho?


Neil: "Just spending some time with wifey!


Avni was in a trance, staring at his beautiful body, his cologne making her lose sense of time and the situation. As she was about to touch his beautiful face, he held her hands softly.


Neil: "Are...yeh kya kar rahi ho tum? Tumhaari mehendi kharab hogi...phir tumhe kaise pata chalega ki main tumsese kitna pyaar karta hoon..."


Avni: "Main jaanti hoon, tum mujhse bahut pyaar karte ho..."


He smiled genuinely, she responded back. He pecked her forehead and helped her lie down. He lied beside her. He later traced her face with his fingers, sending shivers down her spine. Later he kept rubbing his thumb near her lips, making her moan all the more. He was amazed, that his one touch was creating the effect, it was the same effect this woman had on him. Her one touch and he would surrender to her.


He loved teasing her and today was the perfect opportunity.


Avni: "Neil...



Neil: "Hmmm...


Avni: "Please don't tease me...


Neil: "Are are Avni...aaj kaise chod doon tumhe...tumhare to haath bhi bande hai...


She smiled, her downcast she actually blushed and shied away.


Neil: "Tumhe sharmana bhi aata hai...mujhe laga wo bhi mujhe karna padega...


Avni glared at him!

He slowly bent down and kissed her neck. His fingers again creating magic on her face, his thumb deliberately teasing her lips. She wanted to grasp him, kiss him badly but her henna was irritating her. He was creating havoc inside her and for the first time he was having the last laugh.


Neil: "Waise tumhe change nai karna... he asked what her answer would be and how he would not miss this opportunity.


Avni: "Haan, mom help karegi...


Neil: "Agar Neela mom ko aana hota na tab wo kabki aati... he said smirking showing her the closed bedroom door.


Avni: "Kuch zyaada hi besaharam nahi ho...


Neil: "The very reason you love me...

He without breaking eye contact, traced her face one more time, tucking a strand of hair behind her ear. She pleaded him again not to do this...


Avni: "Yeh kya kar rahe ho tum?"


Neil: "Main yeh check kar raha tha ki mere choone se kya hota..."


Avni was not the girl who would mince her words, or her feelings anymore. She had gone way ahead in this relation, and there was no denying that his touch would create emotions even she was unaware of. He had ignited her passion to a level, even she couldn't decipher sometimes.


Avni: "Tumhaare choone se mera rom rom jag uthta hai...tumhe choone ka man karta hai...tumhe chumne ka man karna...tumhare bahon main rehne ka man karta hai...tumhe har waqt mehsoos karne ka man karta hai...tumhe apne aankhon ke saamne rakhne ka man karta hai..." was all she could manage when latched his lips on hers kissing more passionately.


He helped her change, made themselves a cup of tea and they both sat in the balcony, gazing at the stars, thanking their destiny for the life she bestowed them with!



The End!


Positive criticism is welcome!

Love,

Mayu

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Wingsoflove_2 thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
#2
Awesome one👏
I loved how she said, " par hum normal kaha hai"😆
Nice and sweet os.
Do write more. Loved it.
RomComFan thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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What a beautiful story...love the sense of love ..and neelama..hope you write more
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Posted: 7 years ago
#4
So beautiful ! You made me crave to watch this on screen . Neil in tease mode is always a treat 😆Toda lady don ko blush karna zaroori hai na .😉 I love your writing style
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: rilsaf

Awesome one👏

I loved how she said, " par hum normal kaha hai"😆
Nice and sweet os.
Do write more. Loved it.


Thanks so much 😳

Thats the endearing part of AvNeil, they arent normal😆

Have to write more seeing how the story is making me crazy!

Love,
Mayu
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks!😳

Love,
Mayu
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: RomComFan

What a beautiful story...love the sense of love ..and neelama..hope you write more


Thanks!

Yes, Neelama would have been breath of fresh air allowing the couple to romance before their rituals😆

Surely writing more :)

Love,
Mayu
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: rinku95

superb

thanks for pm


Thanks!

I love to send PM's. People know I am back with new OS~!

Love,
Mayu
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: AgnesFan

So beautiful ! You made me crave to watch this on screen . Neil in tease mode is always a treat 😆Toda lady don ko blush karna zaroori hai na .😉 I love your writing style



Thanks so much😳

I just imagined this onscreen and penned it down exactly.

I would have loved to give a morning scene or a midnight scene with Neela teasing and making Avni blush😆 I have come to love Neela and she changed the stereotypes of step mothers😳


I am glad that you like my writing style.

Love,
Mayu
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks!

I think I know you from GHSP days😳

Love,
Mayu

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