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Wingsoflove_2

@Wingsoflove_2

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Awesome one

Loved it.

I hope cvs show this kind of scene in show also.😃

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AvNeil123

@AvNeil123

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

This was beautiful, keep up the good work.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Very soothing read! Good job with the writing! Shayari aap ki khud ki hai Kya?

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: rilsaf
Awesome one
Loved it.
I hope cvs show this kind of scene in show also.😃

Thank you so much, I am pleased to know you loved this little creation of mine. Cvs should show some light hearted scenes in the show with least screen space given to few people.

Love,

Nivi

P.S. You are Safana, right?

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: -AvniNeil-
This was beautiful, keep up the good work.

Thank you so much for the precious compliments.

Love,

Nivi

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: neeraja91
Very soothing read! Good job with the writing! Shayari aap ki khud ki hai Kya?

Thank you so much, Neeraja. I'm glad to know this was soothing. Shayari google se lekar thodi modifications ki hai maine.

Love,

Nivi

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Tumpa12
lovely

Thank you so much.

Love,

Nivi

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Amayrasharma18

@Amayrasharma18

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Hey..Nivi !! This is Amayra..!! This was a lovely OS..!! Loved it from the start..!! Glad that u gave a glimpse of DD-Sunehri's relation too..!! All the games part..the dance, the shayari...it was all fun..!! Enjoyed this extremely..!! Especially the Ending was a bliss...u really ended this on a beautiful note..!! The last para was just icing on the cake..!! Please do write more OS like this on Avneil...would love to read out..!!
P.S. a big hug to u for not including that one lovely girl of ours.. 😉

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Lovely OS . Hope something similar happens in show too . I too want him to be angry with her though I fear that Avni will take it as a sign and try to run .

Heavy nostalgia when they were in similar position like in their first meeting

Even DD and sunheri 😳

Shayri was your work . It was so good ESP Avni's👏

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Amayrasharma18
Hey..Nivi !! This is Amayra..!! This was a lovely OS..!! Loved it from the start..!! Glad that u gave a glimpse of DD-Sunehri's relation too..!! All the games part..the dance, the shayari...it was all fun..!! Enjoyed this extremely..!! Especially the Ending was a bliss...u really ended this on a beautiful note..!! The last para was just icing on the cake..!! Please do write more OS like this on Avneil...would love to read out..!!
P.S. a big hug to u for not including that one lovely girl of ours.. 😉

Thank you so much, Amayra. I'm delighted to know that you loved this little OS of mine. Apart from AvNeil, I like the pairing of DD and Sunheri too, both look cute together. Also their scenes bring some relief when compared to few others scenes. I'll try my best to come back with OS like this, can't promise though.

@bold - do I earn some brownie points for this 😉😆

Love,

Nivi

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