AvNeil SS : The Perfect Stranger , Epilogue 2 updated (10/5) pg 78 - Page 4

Tapasi what was that on pm, itna acha nahi hai and all that. This was so good, fabulous to be very honest. Neil is already feeling something for the acquainted stranger he has met few hours ago, already becoming protective of her and all that 😆. Let him know the real girl behind this facade of Ananya, she's behaving like Neilanjana of the show.

Originally posted by: Aphrodite_NV

Tapasi what was that on pm, itna acha nahi hai and all that. This was so good, fabulous to be very honest. Neil is already feeling something for the acquainted stranger he has met few hours ago, already becoming protective of her and all that 😆. Let him know the real girl behind this facade of Ananya, she's behaving like Neilanjana of the show.

In the anticipation of next chapter,

Love,

Nivi

Originally posted by: drbeth

Hey Nivi😊

Thank God someone liked it.Actually I didn't like the chapter as much...maybe because I thought readers will find it boring.So I said all dt in the PM.Also I lost the entire chapter and had to rewrite it entirely from my poor memory.Thats y I posted it today instead of weekend...so dt I don't lose it again😆

Yep Neil is starting to develop some unknown feelings for this girl.Let's see when he finds out about the real girl beneath the facade😉

Thnk u so much for such lovely comments.

Love

Tapasi

Originally posted by: Aphrodite_NV

That happens with every writer, you see. No writer ever likes their stories, they find it absurd and downright boring. Leave the feedback part to your readers, don't be a critic to your works 😊.

Cheers.

Love the banter between the two...but the girlz smart...thinking about her safety at all times! Neil is a good guy but she doesn't know that yet!

Originally posted by: paayaal

Love the banter between the two...but the girlz smart...thinking about her safety at all times! Neil is a good guy but she doesn't know that yet! She is just getting to know him.And besides she doesn't trust any1 easily.

Apparently it is her night...first the drunk in the club & now on the road...

But at least Neilz with her & has already taken a protective action...baaki to ab un drunkards ki kharab kismat hi hai Neil & Ananya sey ulajhney chaley hain! Lets see...I haven't decided on a fight sequence yet.

Next next!!

Originally posted by: drbeth

Thank you Payal😊

You always put in good comments .And a few ideas as well.

Originally posted by: paayaal

The words come automatically after reading the chapter...!!

Oooh...I like how my simple idea gets such an exciting treatment by you...I can't wait to read the next part!

Originally posted by: Tumpa12

interesting