AvNeil SS : The Perfect Stranger , Epilogue 2 updated (10/5) pg 78 - Page 20

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: drbeth



Hey Safia
Thank you so much dear.
Bebe is cute...she is so concerned abt her grandson😆...Bebe and Pota... evn hv similar choices.
Fishy??😲...haww kyun?Aap kuch jyada mat sochna...I'll be heartbroken if I dnt live upto ur expectations.
Thank you so much for always saying such good things about my writing...makes me so immensely happy...like a kid actually.
Your appreciation and continued love...means so much to me.

Love
Tapasi



Don't worry I am sure I won't be disappointed that's why I didn't not wanna guess anything just gonna go with the flow as this has become quite a thing is NK forum 😉
Good writing is always appreciated I am glad it's make you happy

Stay Happy Stay Blessed 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
This was wonderful. Bebe is so endearing. and the jewelry shop scene- nostalgia max! I could se Avni in yellow. Is the star pendant for her as a thank ypu for helping bebe??

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaiksafia



Don't worry I am sure I won't be disappointed that's why I didn't not wanna guess anything just gonna go with the flow as this has become quite a thing is NK forum 😉
Good writing is always appreciated I am glad it's make you happy

Stay Happy Stay Blessed 😊

Go with d flow😆...bt there in flow in d show nw...its just turbulence as d show has gone down the drain.
Awww you are d sweetest🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Globetrotter_me

This was wonderful. Bebe is so endearing. and the jewelry shop scene- nostalgia max! I could se Avni in yellow. Is the star pendant for her as a thank ypu for helping bebe??

Puja😊
U r bck😊
Thnk you so much.Jewellery shop scene was an absolute fav of mine...probably dt ws hw d scene came to my mind...I didn't realise it till late.
No spoilers.You will knw soon enough.
Much love.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Tapasi! I just feel like pulling ur cheeks. My cute author sahiba is giving me all cute updates! 😆 I love you for lightening my mood, for bringing me out of my sad mood🤗
Avniz a pediatrician, wow! I adore pediatricians a lot as I love kids n I myself is a kid😆 if I'm not wrong then you're also a medical student, isn't? So r u gonna practice as a pediatrician?

Don't worry u r not the only one who didn't think about Pillu when u wrote Avniz profession, I'm also in the list😆 I know I'm a tubelight! 😆

Richa is unknowingly acting as a catalyst in their relationship, isn't?

Bebe is so adorable! Neilz love for his Bebe is❤️ The grandmother-grandson duo always steal my heart!

Avniz attracted to Neil. Wait a sec, she was thinking that if Neil is caring to every other
people ( read:strangers) or she's the only one so does that mean she feels something for him? 😉

Bebe is openly voicing her opinion for Richa being Shweta's choice n she doesn't trust her choice is so cool! Bebe is shipping Avneil, I guess! The moment Neil entered the cabin she started to praise Avni like rishta pakka karna ho😆 that was so cute!

Neil is becoming besharam apni to be fiancee ki friend ke saath time spend karne ke liye kitni khicdi paka raha hai😆log sahi kehte hai saali aadhi gharwali😉(mischievous wink)

Jewellery shop n rings reminded me of that miss ajooba wala scene. That was one of my favs! I'm glad you added that scene of course wid ur own flavours!

Pendant Avni ke liye hi tha na! I know Neil hume surprise kardega! I'm waiting for the pendant story eagerly😉

Avni likes his touches... aww my heart is too fragile Tapasi! 😆 phone!! U disturbed their moment😒

Why do I feel ki car mein kuch toh hoga! I'm growing impatient for the next!

U know what I told my roomie to read ur story n as expected she loved it n exactly cracked up at the part I did n I kicked her out sweet revenge, isn't? 😆

Continue soon😃




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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Zara_Imam

Tapasi! I just feel like pulling ur cheeks. My cute author sahiba is giving me all cute updates! 😆 I love you for lightening my mood, for bringing me out of my sad mood🤗Pulling my cheeks😆 ...go ahead...aadat hai mujhe😆.Y in a sad mood? Nw dt u r out of that, dont go bck.Stay happy😊

Avniz a pediatrician, wow! I adore pediatricians a lot as I love kids n I myself is a kid😆 if I'm not wrong then you're also a medical student, isn't? So r u gonna practice as a pediatrician?
U like pediatricians😆.U r a kid...a cute one.I'm nt a student anymore... I'm a doc.Well I do like pediatrics and kids... but dnt knw wht direction my career will take nw.
Don't worry u r not the only one who didn't think about Pillu when u wrote Avniz profession, I'm also in the list😆 I know I'm a tubelight! 😆 so that makes two of us😆

Richa is unknowingly acting as a catalyst in their relationship, isn't? Yes kind of😊

Bebe is so adorable! Neilz love for his Bebe is❤️ The grandmother-grandson duo always steal my heart! Cutest pair❤️

Avniz attracted to Neil. Wait a sec, she was thinking that if Neil is caring to every other
people ( read:strangers) or she's the only one so does that mean she feels something for him? 😉 its safe to say that she is starting to feel things too.

Bebe is openly voicing her opinion for Richa being Shweta's choice n she doesn't trust her choice is so cool! Bebe is shipping Avneil, I guess! The moment Neil entered the cabin she started to praise Avni like rishta pakka karna ho😆 that was so cute! Bebe has unknowingly liked someone whom her grandson is falling head over heels for.

Neil is becoming besharam apni to be fiancee ki friend ke saath time spend karne ke liye kitni khicdi paka raha hai😆log sahi kehte hai saali aadhi gharwali😉(mischievous wink) lol😆.Bechara...Ring toh gharwali ke liye hi le rha tha...sachi.

Jewellery shop n rings reminded me of that miss ajooba wala scene. That was one of my favs! I'm glad you added that scene of course wid ur own flavours! Miss Ajooba and the scene following dt was one of my favs too😊.Still watch dem.Of course I added d scene subconsciously.

Pendant Avni ke liye hi tha na! I know Neil hume surprise kardega! I'm waiting for the pendant story eagerly😉 Jyada mat socho.😛

Avni likes his touches... aww my heart is too fragile Tapasi! 😆 phone!! U disturbed their moment😒 Jewellery shop mein pda nai kar skte na.😳

Why do I feel ki car mein kuch toh hoga! I'm growing impatient for the next! Mujhe na lagta hai mujhe jute padenge sabse.So much impatience might become bad fr my health😆

U know what I told my roomie to read ur story n as expected she loved it n exactly cracked up at the part I did n I kicked her out sweet revenge, isn't? 😆 what?? Tum totally pagal ho😆.Usko bhi story padhne bola.And you did d same she did to you.yesterday😆.Revenge is indeed swt😆

Continue soon😃





Zara🤗
First of all...u r crazy...I'm smiling like a fool reading ur and ur roomie's story😆.
Such a long, cute and awesome analysis...loved it.
Tum kya mujhse PDA expect kar rhi ho? Hmm?
All ur curiosities will be answered tomorrow... atleast a few of dem😉
Much love.
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Posted: 7 years ago


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Posted: 7 years ago
Baby I love you so much for this chapter. The tale is getting cuter with each chapter, sweet, simple and engaging everything a readers want.
Knew that pendant was for Avni, and yet understood her rejection in accepting it, a sort of self respect takes over the rest of her emotions. Finally Avni accepted she had no boy friend, Neil now you can shameless try to woo her, no haddas in the story.
The overwhelming part for me was that how joyfully Avni was telling about the boy who recovered after being in their hospital for five days. Took me back to the point when I was admitted and the doctor was so patient and caring towards everybody while doing their check ups. He was one of the best doctors I have ever met in real life.
And you have beautifully described Neil's eyes, there's always something enigmatic about men's eyes, they're hard to decipher.
Seems like you are planning another love story in parallel, want to read it as well.
Update soon.
Love,
Nivi
Edited by Aphrodite_NV - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Read all 7 parts in a go... this is light hearted feel good romcom kind that I absolutely love!!! It's been an amazing journey so far on how you got the story to unfold... it's intriguing to know what's gonna happen next.. the car part reminded me of a similar scene from a Sony serial I saw on YouTube called kuch rang pyar me aise bhi, which I didn't watch through entirely but that scene was cute..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Bang on update tapasi.
I can't believe I fell in love with this ss so early and so much that I will wait for the updates eagerly and when the update will come I will first read and comment on it leaving all my work.
I have exams in April but still what I am doing stalking forum for updates.
This is the third story in this forum which I loved the most.
And now about the update what will I say I think my first sentence in the start is enough to say what I feel about it. Truely loved it. So Ali started his mission richa ko pata. And Neil he is still figuring why he feel what he feel.

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