AvNeil SS : The Perfect Stranger , Epilogue 2 updated (10/5) pg 78 - Page 21

Created

Last reply

Replies

620

Views

39.7k

Users

35

Likes

1.1k

Frequent Posters

Shaiksafia thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
Tapasi another beautiful update especially this one it was quite dreamy I loved how you describe there emotions and that eye lock was just serene and romantic , loved there conversation about Ali Neil so smart to trick her poor girl had to admit it 😆 felt bad for neil Avni rejected his gifts thank you for the update much needed break the kind of mental stress the show is putting us through

As usual can't wait for next update , you're just getting better and better with every chapter writing of this chapter was on another level really touched my heart

Much love
Safia
HighOnSarcasm thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
Wow! Sonic speed update! I likes!😃
Continue the trend...😉.

Ok..first off...u partially recreated a childhood memory of mine with AvNeilz unplanned dinner date.

I absolutely loved the date...it was beautiful in its unexpectedness, simple, sweet, yet filled with delicious undercurrents...

The unintentional moments of physical closeness were electrifying...& they made one thing clear...this attraction is NOT one-sided!!!

So the pendent was for Avni...I was right...I also knew she won't accept it...even though she could clearly see the depth of Neilz disappointment...

So Richa & Ali too have an unexpected meeting...their love story has my blessings...they can begin immediately!!😆😉

Next...next...😃

Edited by paayaal - 7 years ago
RomComFan thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
O wow...she admited it... Abd his happy tht st her rejection...can't wait to see them fall for her, terrific job
WhtsinAname thumbnail
7th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: blablabla_mo7

Read all 7 parts in a go... this is light hearted feel good romcom kind that I absolutely love!!! It's been an amazing journey so far on how you got the story to unfold... it's intriguing to know what's gonna happen next.. the car part reminded me of a similar scene from a Sony serial I saw on YouTube called kuch rang pyar me aise bhi, which I didn't watch through entirely but that scene was cute..

Heya😊
Woah you read all 7 parts in one go!!!!!! Seriously took me to cloud 9😃
I'm not gud at writing loaded emotional scenes...so made it d way I like...light hearted😆...glad to know you liked it so much.
I'm keeping you intrigued😆...good to knw.Totally unexpected though.
I used to watch kuch rang pyaar ke aise bhi...but I never saw dis car scene you are talking abt...missed it somehow.

Thank you so much for the kind words of appreciation.

Love
Tapasi.
WhtsinAname thumbnail
7th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445

Bang on update tapasi.

I can't believe I fell in love with this ss so early and so much that I will wait for the updates eagerly and when the update will come I will first read and comment on it leaving all my work.
I have exams in April but still what I am doing stalking forum for updates. Aww dts so swt of you to say dt.But do.concentrate on ur exams.Read it just in ur free time.
This is the third story in this forum which I loved the most.lucky me😳.
And now about the update what will I say I think my first sentence in the start is enough to say what I feel about it. Truely loved it. So Ali started his mission richa ko pata. And Neil he is still figuring why he feel what he feel.I'll say Ali and Richa's lines hv started crossing too.Neil has started to assess his feelings nw.


Hey Nidhi
Thank you so much for taking time out to read this story.
Feeling overwhelmed wid so much love.

WhtsinAname thumbnail
7th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaiksafia

Tapasi another beautiful update especially this one it was quite dreamy I loved how you describe there emotions and that eye lock was just serene and romantic , loved there conversation about Ali Neil so smart to trick her poor girl had to admit it 😆 felt bad for neil Avni rejected his gifts thank you for the update much needed break the kind of mental stress the show is putting us through Thank you.It was dreamy? Yayee .Another milestone added to my writing😆.Ignore my crazy self.Serene...just d word I was looking for😳.Neil is Mr smarty pants😆.You cant expect Avni to accept it...just against her nature.

As usual can't wait for next update , you're just getting better and better with every chapter writing of this chapter was on another level really touched my heart.Aww this really means a lot that my story is touching ur heart.



Much love
Safia


Hey Safia.
Thnx for putting in such heartfelt words.Didn't expect this kind of response.Really overwhelming.
Love
Tapasi.
WhtsinAname thumbnail
7th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: paayaal

Wow! Sonic speed update! I likes!😃

Continue the trend...😉.He he.I'll try to.Told you I'm trying to finish dis before people get bored😆

Ok..first off...u partially recreated a childhood memory of mine with AvNeilz unplanned dinner date.Childhood memory😳.Really? I'm intrigued. Do tell me sometimesl😳

I absolutely loved the date...it was beautiful in its unexpectedness, simple, sweet, yet filled with delicious undercurrents...Wow.Dts wht I was waiting for.Heartfelt lines from my fav author😊.I'll treasure these.

The unintentional moments of physical closeness were electrifying...& they made one thing clear...this attraction is NOT one-sided!!! Electrifying😃...didn't expect dis.Thnx.And you hv concluded it correctly.Its not one sided.

So the pendent was for Avni...I was right...I also knew she won't accept it...even though she could clearly see the depth of Neilz disappointment...Yes yes were right😆.And you hv decoded Avni so accurately.

So Richa & Ali too have an unexpected meeting...their love story has my blessings...they can begin immediately!!😆😉 My blessings too😆

Next...next...😃


Paayal😊
This was totally awesome.Loved all the words you used to describe the chapter and the scenes.
Thnx a ton.

Love
Tapasi
WhtsinAname thumbnail
7th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: RomComFan

O wow...she admited it... Abd his happy tht st her rejection...can't wait to see them fall for her, terrific job

Heya
Yes Avni is finally strting to get a hold on her feelings too.
Fall for her...hasn't he started already??😳
Thnx a lot for d appreciation.
Much love.
WhtsinAname thumbnail
7th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Beautiful update

Love it
Continue soon

Thnk u so much for d love😊
Will update asap.
docritu99 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 7 years ago
Aww, this was so sweet buddy.!

The AvNeil-Bebe part happens to me like a great Family time which i was missing from show since long.

I knew i knew the pendant was for Avni and voila it was but she didnt accepted it. No problem after officially falling for him and accepting that, the pendant wont be left aloof, it will get right where it belong.! 😉


Their unexpected dinner date was the highlight. No matter what, a doctor cant say no to food 😆, they are like the sweetest blessings on earth, talking from personal experience 😉


The little thing u mentioned about Pediatrician, it made me remember a PG preparatory class of mine where the faculty, who btw was also a prdiatrician, voiced the same thoughts, like how he felt himself satisfied when he could bring smile on the face of a little child after relieveing him from his miseries and pains. Loved that.! Avni is so adorable.!

Loved every bit of it.!

Continue soon.!

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".