AvNeil SS : The Perfect Stranger , Epilogue 2 updated (10/5) pg 78 - Page 12

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Posted: 7 years ago
Adorable chapter, I will tell about chapter 4. It was like chashni pe chini. Can totally relate to Avni in the first para, totally irritated and grumpy when someone wakes you up. As if loud alarm is not enough, there has to be a ring on the door too.
Neil flirts so openly, as if Avni uski gf hai. Banda is almost ready to cross the first stage of love, open flirting with a girl not at all related to him.
Knew from the start, Avni does not have a boy friend. Just an excuse to avoid Neil, the stranger. Wondering whom will she bring as her bf. I highly doubt whether she will attend the double date that Neil is planning.
In the anticipation of forthcoming chapter.
Love,
Nivi
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Brightglow

Too cute :)) loved how Avni spoke in a drowsy mood with Neil and ofcourse I fell for Neil's charm here... ;) Thank you😆.Ab main kya kahun? Neil Khanna ka jaado hi kuch aisa hai.

Yes again a short one... So to compensate an early and longer update next time pls ? Yes I promise😊


Thanx a lot Avni.
And I'll keep my promise this time😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Avni is unpredictable as always 😆 She took him to ladies bathroom and explained in an unexpected way . She is single piece without a substitute . She made him believe she has a boyfriend 😆 Lol . Ya she is one museum piece😆.So u are sure she doesn't hv a bf...I cn only say u will find out soon enough😆

Love story shuru hone.se pehle hi road block . Richa is Neil's fiance . Waise engagement toh nahi hua phir bhi . Very smart😉

Subah hi aa gaya toh she will assume him to be milkman right . He is too casual to demand her to make breakfast. Wah kitne aage hai . This guy is hell bent in finding about her boyfriend 😆 Double date announce kar diya . He just feels that way around her.Ya like you he has his doubts in place...he is not gonna stop until he finds out.

Lol he was expecting her to remember black coffee but she is smart to answer him that they had no milk leftover . She should have remembered it I guess 😆 Ya she did remember but she didn't want him to know dt.


Thank you so much Sri.
Love all the points, observations and the appreciation.

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Posted: 7 years ago
Thank you so much😊
Will update soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thank you so much😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: darsh333

Never expected this scene to come up!ne arriving at their home and both of them having breakfast all alone!it was a soo good to read the conversations😊 I love it when I'm able to surprise you😆. Great to know the conversations are still good.


I loved the conversation where she mistook neil for the milkman😆 Avni the sleepy head😆

Neil staring and his not so pretty cook dialogues were lovely😆 Thank you.Neil is just mesmerized by her.

So they are going for a double date??and avni is having a bf for real??😕 For that you have to read d next chpter😉

Neil's pull towards her is going up the graph..how will richa react to it! Keep guessing😆

As usual this was an interesting update!

This was soo shorti expected a longer one and update it asap!



Thank you Darshana😊
Happy to know I hvnt bored you yet.Might do in the future😆
Glad dt you are enjoying it.
Update will be sooner than you expect😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
Superb👏 . Never expected him to show up early in the morning at their house😳 . But still it is fiance's house so quite digestible.
Ye Neil to avni ke boyfriend ke piche haath dho kar pad gaya. Now boyfriend ki kahani to made up karli ab boyfriend kaha se paida karegi wo bhi ek hi din me as agle din is double date na.
Waise what could be Neil's motive in knowing about her boyfriend . Kahi wo avni par hit to karne ki koshish to nahi kar raha hai na..
That was a short one though good. Pls update soon and ya this time it should be a big one. I guess kal update mil jaye to baat ban jaye. Kyonki weekends are so very much painful these days.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Globetrotter_me

So, had been trying to catch up with updates, now that the weekend is here. Tell me abt it...its so difficult to catch up😆

Read both the parts. And I love how the story is shaping up. The bathroom scene is quite cute and I am so so looking forward to the double date. It kind of reminds me of an interview by Ryan Reynolds where he confessed that he realized Blake lively was the one when they had gone on a double date with two different people.Glad to know you are liking how the story is building up.I'm an amateur so here's hoping I dnt disappoint you.


Super excited for the next. Update soon.


Thank you so much Puja.
You taking out time to read it means a lot to me.

About Ryan Reynolds and Blake lively...I had no idea.I can't believe they actually met on a double date.No less than a story. They are one adorable couple though.

Thnx again
Will update soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Aphrodite_NV

Adorable chapter, I will tell about chapter 4. It was like chashni pe chini. Can totally relate to Avni in the first para, totally irritated and grumpy when someone wakes you up. As if loud alarm is not enough, there has to be a ring on the door too. THANK YOU.Chashni or cheeni lol😆.Am I making it too sweet? Ya alarms are already irritating. some knocking on the door just adds to the irritation...especially for sleepy heads😆

Neil flirts so openly, as if Avni uski gf hai. Banda is almost ready to cross the first stage of love, open flirting with a girl not at all related to him. She just opens him up like no1 ever has.
Knew from the start, Avni does not have a boy friend. Just an excuse to avoid Neil, the stranger. Wondering whom will she bring as her bf. I highly doubt whether she will attend the double date that Neil is planning. Acha so u r so sure.Can't say anything.Read d next one to find out.
In the anticipation of forthcoming chapter.
Love,
Nivi


Thank you so much Nivi😊
I hope your workload has decreased a lil atleast.
Appreciate the kind words and love you always shower.

Love
Tapasi
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445

Superb👏 . Never expected him to show up early in the morning at their house😳 . But still it is fiance's house so quite digestible.Thank you 😊.Good to know I didn't make it too unreal😆

Ye Neil to avni ke boyfriend ke piche haath dho kar pad gaya. Now boyfriend ki kahani to made up karli ab boyfriend kaha se paida karegi wo bhi ek hi din me as agle din is double date na.
Waise what could be Neil's motive in knowing about her boyfriend . Kahi wo avni par hit to karne ki koshish to nahi kar raha hai na.. Yes the double date is d very next day.Lets see what Avni does.I can tell you this...Neil just finds her interesting and loves unraveling her.Hit toh nai kr rha, but he certainly is interested in her.
That was a short one though good. Pls update soon and ya this time it should be a big one. I guess kal update mil jaye to baat ban jaye. Kyonki weekends are so very much painful these days.

Hey Nidhi
Thank you so much for the lovely comments.
I know it was short.
Yes I'll try to update tomorrow.

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