AvNeil RS : FALL IN LOVE, TRY thread2 (NOW COMPLETE) - Page 14

Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445

Are meri behna tumne keh diya that u will try wahi bahut hai mere liye. Main itne me hi khush hoon. Thank u in advance .

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Itni jaldi update wo bhi itni hot !

AdiZa effects sri!😆

You put that mole to best use . Tbh it disturbs me .I myself gets tempted seeing that mole 🤣 mei kitni gatiya hon

Sri!? What ..aise baatein kyu kar rahi ho? You wan t me to doubt you or what?😉😛. That total kiss session was so good

Thank you😳i'll try my level best to sharpen my skills in writing such scenes..ik ki mai dabba hu iss chapter mein😆

. To me surprise was Avni allowed him to kiss her . She may not be shy but I expected her to be thoughtful before giving him access coz she knows what it will end in .

Woh sab kuch bhoolgayi ..kuch minutes keliye😛

This reaction was expected from Avni as she told him before that she doesn't wanna take risk of falling in love as she had seen her own aunt suffering . It's gonna take a hell out of Neil to convince her .Hope he doesn't misunderstand her reaction coz it was natural of her . I know he is gonna be confused when she has feelings why isn't she ready and why she assumes every love story to be like her aunt's but still if he thinks in her shoes he can understand her POV . it's not like she said he will ditch her it's more of a fear what will happen to both if either falls out of love . This is good in one way coz after agreeing with him if She suddenly gives this reaction he will be super angry and things will just go so bad

Exactly!!! This is the main point😃

. It's better they sort every problem or insecurities before they start their relationship .Hope this too passes soon and I definitely hope Noor to help her than Saba .

Chapter 40 padho jaldi... Uske baat discuss karengey..kis kiss ko lana hai😆

Kuch jyada hi bak rahi hon Na . I dunno mein aise kyu bina ruke bol rahi hon

Aww ..nahi nahi..i like this bak bak wali version of you more...🤗

Originally posted by: vaish_patel

Brilliant update!!
Finally a comment from you... I always used to think seeing the likes.. ke "arey, inka comment kab milega.." 😳 I'll take it as you really liked the update😳
Firstly nicely done with the romance. Very hot and written very well, good job on that!

Thank you 😃 i was very much worried..ke what if it'll sound vulgar...😆
And kya yaar Avni? Phirse slap? Poor Neil!
I feel bad for both of them. Wonder why will happen now.

A leap of 2 months😳

The part where Neil says "No Avni" after realising that she's gonna reject him reminded me of when in the show she was thinking of leaving him for Mishty's sake. Poor babies!!
Oh right... This is actually the same scenario for them.. let's see how it unfolds😳
Update soon 😳

Originally posted by: Tumpa12

interesting

loved it

update soon

thnx for pm

Originally posted by: Billiee

Hot hot hot!!! Brilliant! 👏❤️

Originally posted by: .Yashu

bua will habe much greater Impact than others if bua will talK to her😳

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Interesting update

Continue soon