AvNeil RS : FALL IN LOVE, TRY thread2 (NOW COMPLETE) - Page 16

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Posted: 7 years ago
I demand you should upload Avni's side of story soonish . That girl totally shut herself from the whole world . Good lord !_That too for 8 weeks . Was this enough for her . I will wish to know if her bua or Noor knows this story . They should really help her out and make her understand that same thing will not repeat with everyone . I could understand her but totally shutting off and not even caring to attend award function is really over the board . Hey didn't she win any awards . I hope at least she is informed about the award function
I am confused as to how to feel for him. He is totally into her day in and day out n realised his feelings too ! Hey that conversation about the house was his dream or memories. So he is gonna design the house according to her taste . I felt really bad for him when he was making trips just to get a chance to clear things . This too shall pass ! She literally messed up when he called her . I didn't expect her to reply that she might be attracted to some.other CO star of her . I was expecting her to cut the call . She is such a stubborn woman . Lets see what you have for these two ! At least he deserves a chance
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: ...SA...

Well, these days.. i find just thank you rude... Thank you soo much sounds much better😳


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And sometimes.. i just feel soo proud of this ff..😭
I'll keep ranting in this post..so bear with me😳

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Aaj ka ivs dheka aaplogone? I wish real vision bina editing ke Videos dede hume... Hihi.. kamse kam awaaz toh saaf saaf sunai deta..
But then.. the pic
And zain's iv..
All I see around is.. "THEY HAVE COME A LONG WAY" posts😆 truly they did! 😃

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Did you see the way thier hands touched during the segment?
and he explains her about the color? Kon explain kar raha hai dheko.. ask him what pink+white is! 😆 tell her that ..nawab sahb ke color theories bas wohi jaane😆


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I'll be back soon..😳

He he I think tumhe adizophobia ho gaya hai.
In this disease people ko sirf har jagah adiza hi nazar aate hai. Like it is affecting me right now.
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Posted: 7 years ago
This is such a heart wrenching update . I cant see my babies like this. And it is 8 week since she abducted her from world. Want to know whats with the thought process of avni. And yes neil finally realized. Bas aisa hi surprise de dena next chap mein bhi avninki taraf se and maake it a little long😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
Yippee and now I am free to comment on the chapter. ( doing the happy dance)
Don't know what will happen this evening as my whole family is coming for the holi celebration and I am scared for the trp's also.😭
What an incredible chapter Sanju. Love for it growing more day-by-day.👏
Yaar ye avni ka kya hoga. Kyun nahi wo apne inhibitions se bahar aati hai. She completely shut him off from her life and then disappeared in the thin air.😲
And finally nawab sahab is in love warna aise ghar ke chakkar kon kat ta hai.😳
U reached to the sitara awards also. U are moving with a bullet speed. Or Jo hum chahte hai wo award mil bhi gaya Neil Khanna ko. Best pati and best male popular award.🥳
Neil ne avni ke pasand ka ghar le hi liya. Bas ab avni aa jaye sath me rehne ke liye. 🥱
To phir ab main apna rant band karti hoon nahi to is ramayan ko khatm hone me Puri that bit jayegi .
Maine to pehle hi keh diya par phir se keh deti hoon loved the chappy. Ab sayad Sunday ko hi reply kar paoongi.😕

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445

Yippee and now I am free to comment on the chapter. ( doing the happy dance)

Don't know what will happen this evening as my whole family is coming for the holi celebration and I am scared for the trp's also.😭
What an incredible chapter Sanju. Love for it growing more day-by-day.👏
Yaar ye avni ka kya hoga. Kyun nahi wo apne inhibitions se bahar aati hai. She completely shut him off from her life and then disappeared in the thin air.😲
And finally nawab sahab is in love warna aise ghar ke chakkar kon kat ta hai.😳
U reached to the sitara awards also. U are moving with a bullet speed. Or Jo hum chahte hai wo award mil bhi gaya Neil Khanna ko. Best pati and best male popular award.🥳
Neil ne avni ke pasand ka ghar le hi liya. Bas ab avni aa jaye sath me rehne ke liye. 🥱
To phir ab main apna rant band karti hoon nahi to is ramayan ko khatm hone me Puri raat bit jayegi .
Maine to pehle hi keh diya par phir se keh deti hoon loved the chappy. Ab sayad Sunday ko hi reply kar paoongi.😕

Update the next chapter soonish behna.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: ...SA...


Just updated... Your comments will be awaited..
Thank you soo much🤗



Yes I really really liked the update! Sorry for being a silent reader but just couldn't stay silent any more! So I really really liked chapter 39 but I LOVED chapter 40. The tadap, the angst - like we're not getting enough of it on the show! But wow, the way you've penned Neil's feelings. And how he basically confessed - not to the girl but indirectly to the whole world! Mr Romantic! I'm in love!

Waiting to see what Avni has been up to for the last two months! I hope she's been just as bad - I'm abit of a sadist like that!

I don't mean to be cheeky but could you consider incorporating the latest article which "he" talked about his equation with "her". Would love to hear your thoughts on how he would say it, what he would be thinking while answering, etc etc. Just a suggestion.

Awaiting your next update 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
loved it
awesome
thnx for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: ...SA...

Happy Holi payal🤗
Thank you soo much😃❤️


Oops!! Kutch zyada hi padh liya maine😆...7 weeks ko 7 months😳

Hmmm...maybe once she sees the broadcasted award show or read articles & comments abt what Neil said, she'll come to know that Neil & his feelings haven't changed. Maybe then she'll have the courage to accept her feelings & Neil!
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Posted: 7 years ago
I am on a rereading mode as I am free as of now. Thank you sanju for giving us such a sweet story that we will read it again and again and still not feel bored.
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Posted: 7 years ago


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