News SS-Past-Present Part 3 Page 4

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Avni was shattered,lonely just standing there in shock trying to realize what just happened at her wedding anniversary.Her husband made his ex-girlfriend,his past a priority over his wife of present.Now Avni knew exactly how her mother must have felt.She looked at her in-laws and Neela Ma all looking shocked but her mother looked angry.Avni didnot realize when tears started making way on her face.Her legs were getting watery and she could not stand anymore.She wanted to lock herself somewhere and cry a lot...

Avni (blankly)-Ma ! I am going to our house.

Sweta (Cupping Avni's face)-Beta ghar nahi chalogi...Mei Neil ko datugi donot worry bahut datugi.Please ghar chalo.

Bebe-Ha Beta tum ghar nahi chalogi to ghar khali lagega.

Avni-Please Mom,Bebe please let me go.I want my mother right now.And please tell Neil not to come there right now.Ma come at your time.

Avni took driver to Neela's place and shut the door and started crying loudly.She felt like somebody had stabbed her heart thousand times.She heard somebody knocking yet she sat in the same position.She heard noises outside.First it was Papa than Mom and Bebe yet Avni didnot want to move,she wanted to be alone.She had never imagined Neil would do this to her.She heard multiple voices guessing that everybody was here outside the door for her.

Avni (in tears)-STOP KNOCKING PLEASE !! LEAVE ME ALONE EVERYONE...(And Avni broke down once again)


Neela heard her daugheter's tears and breakdown and worried for her.Her daughter had seen all this in the past and she knew what she must be feeling right now.She wanted to break the door right now and hug her so tight that nobody would be able to harm her.But she knew that Avni needed to be alone.It was not her heart that had broke it was her dreams that had broke this time.

Neela (angrily)- Neil kaha hai Sweta ji ??

Bebe-Neela agar tum gussa karogi...

Neela (angrily)-Bebe Neil jaanta hai ki Ayeshaji ke saath ye sab pehli bhi ho chuka ha.Avni ne dekha tha woh sab phir bhi usne bina soche samjhe ye kya kiya usne.Kya haal kiya hai usne meri bachi ka dikha na aapko.Kaise santh rahu mai uske baad.

Sweta (angrily on the phone)-NEIL TUM YAHA AA RAHE HO KI MAI HOSPITAL AAO.

Everybody was waiting for the man who was the reason for the teras of Avni right now.Avni had refused to eat anything and seeing her cry like that the rest of them had not eaten as well.Prakash had tried to talk to her but she refused to eat anything.Sweta was cursing and Neela and Bebe felt her right this time.Neela had already decided that Avni would not be going in that house till Juhi's problem did not get solved.And suddenly she saw Neil and Marched to open the door.

Neela (angrily)-Kya tha ye sab Neil ?

Neil (trying to explain)-Ma

Neela (angrily)-Maine sirf tumse poocha kya tha wo sab Neil ??

Prakash-Neil DD tha na waha pe Juhi ke saath.Avni ka haal dekha ha tumne.

Neil-Dad Juhi tried to commit suicide.

Sweta-Tum jab waha pouhche tab woh mar chuki thi Tillu ? Nahi na DDa ne sab sambhal liya tha na toh Avni ka dil todne ki kya zaroorat thi tujhe.

Neela (angrily)-Neil she asked you didn't she about your past and present.Poocha tha na Avni se if you wanted to get back with Juhi.And you had said that you were over Juhi toh phir aaj kya tha ??

Neil-Ma woh meri responsibility hai.Police case hai ye

Bebe (angrily)-JUHI TUMHARI ZIMEDAARI NAHI HAI NEIL.AVNI TUMHARI ZIMEDAARI HAI.

You failed her today.

Neil (worrying)-I want to see her.

Neela-No Neil,not today you dont get to dictate the terms today.She must be asleep.


While they were getting angry.Bebe saw Avni open the door and come out with changed cloths and a bag.She had been crying really bad that could be seen but what panicked Bebe was the bag.

Bebe-Avni !!

Neil (worrying)-Avni I am really sorry.

Bebe-Avni tum kahi ja rahi ho beta ?

Almost everybody saw the bag at that moment.Neil's heart tanked seeing that bag but he had decided not to let his wifey go anywhere except home with him.

Neela-Baccha kaha ja rahi ho tum ?

Avni-Jaha mai saas le saku aur jaha mujhe shanti mile.

Neil-Toh tumhe mere saath sukun aur shanti nahi milti hai ? Wifey please ghar chalo mere saath.

Avni (firmly)-No.You took your decision and now I am taking mine and please donot try to follow me.Leave me alone for few days.

Sweta-Beta kitne din mei wapas aaogi.

Avni-2 week me aa jaogi Mom.Aake call karogi aapko.Aur pahucke bhi karogi.Donot worry.

Neil-Ghar kab aaogi ?

Avni-Pata nahi.Neil you have hurt me the worst way possible and now I will recover my way.Ma aap meri chinta mat karna.I will be back soon.I am going to New York BTW for my college reunion.

Neela (carrasing her head)-Ok Enjoy.The house must be mess.

Avni-I will get it cleaned up.Bye

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Neil-Why didnt you people stop her ?

Sweta-Kyuki galti tumhari thi aur Juhi ko toh ab mei ghar jaake dekhu gi.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow amazing!!!update next one soon...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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amazing...loved it...will be waiting...plz do update soon
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Great update! Please write more soon
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My eyes got teary reading this part.
I wanted to read something like this since long.
Pls update the next part soon
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please please please update this soon! I was watching the scene today actually, when Neil runs to the hospital to look after Juhi and leaves Avni standing there at the wedding...my heart completely broke for her...Neil bohot acha hai...in fact he's more good than he ought to be...and I kept thinking and convincing myself the whole time that no matter who it was, Neil would have reacted the same way...but what happened with Avni was not right and I wanted to read something like this <3 thank you! Please update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Just amazing... Plz plzzz continue... Want Neil to go to bring back Aavni...Avni should not forgive Neil easily
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Originally posted by: Sanakhan67

Wow amazing!!!update next one soon...



Thank You so much.I know late update but I promise I will finish the series.
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Originally posted by: zainabmoshin

amazing...loved it...will be waiting...plz do update soon



Thank You for liking it.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: neeraja91

Great update! Please write more soon



Thank You so much.I hope to finish the SS.

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