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Posted: 7 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Superb start

Continue soon



Thank You for the compliments.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445

My eyes got teary reading this part.

I wanted to read something like this since long.
Pls update the next part soon



Oh !! Thank You so much.I am updating it.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 2
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Neil came back to Khanna Mansion in a defeated manner.He had never imagined that Avni would be this hurt that she would have to leave the country for some time.Neil was begining to realise how deep he had hurt his wife.Neil slumped down near the living room itself.Bebe and Sweta along with Prakash hurriedly came inside the house.Sweta had it today.Because of that Juhi there were differences between Avni and Neil.

Sweta (Yelling)-Juhi !! Juhi !!

Juhi-Ji aunty.

Sweta (angrily)-Ye tumhe achanak suicide karne ka kya socha.Hh !!Samajh ti kya ho tum khud ko ??

Juhi-Aunty mera aisa koi irada nahi tha.

Sweta-Tumne ye sab jaan boojke kiya hai Avni aur Neil ki Anniversary kharab karne ke liye.Aab bas bahut ho gaya hai.Pandit mar gayi hai na Neil aab to Juhi ko koi khatra nahi hai hai.

Neil (No answer)

Sweta-Tu bol DD.

DD-JI aunty ji aab inhge kisika koi khatra nahi hai.

Bebe-Toh theek hai kal mei Neela se baat karke kisi Women's shelter ko mil ke aati hu.

Juhi-Par Bebe...

Bebe (Silencing her)Par war kuch nahi Juhi.Tum Neil ka atit thi aur Avni uski biwi hai,uska present hai jisse Neil bahut pyaar karta hai aur woh hamari beti hai.Tu aur Avni ek saath ek ghar mei nahi reh sakte.Ye Avni ke saath nainsaafi hai.

Defeated Juhi goes away.But Neil is still defeated and extremely sad over Avni's decision.

Neil (Sad)-Aapne Avni ko roka kyu nahi.

Sweta (angrily)-Kya rokti mai use Neil.Tune jo kiya uske baad mei use kaise rokti.You breaks her heart.

Prakash (patting his head)-Neil woh aajai gi.She is very mature.Oye tu chinta na kar !!


After 1 month

Khanna Mansion

Neil was getting ready for Neela Ma's house.This had become his routine for 1 month.To know as to how was Avni doing in New York.Meanwhile in Khanna Mansion Bebe and Sweta and Prakash were missing Avni so much that they almost reminded him of his huge mistake.While Neil had given Juhi's custody to her brother.

Parekh Mansion

Neil rung the bell and Neela opened the door but gave him a serious smile.He had not seen the smile since long maybe since Avni had left.Wait was she back ??Neil slowly asked the question in a sort of secret code way and Neela just nodded her head.

Avni (shouting from her bedroom)-Ma kon hai ??

Neela-Neil come inside.

Avni (came outside form her bedroom)Ma Kon h...

Avni couldnot even complete half her sentence.She was stunned seeing Neil.She was seeing him after 1 month.He looked tired and maybe even guilty but she was not ready to forgive him right now.She was not even in that mood.But she could not help but notice that he was over the moon seeing her back.

Avni (Speaking to Neela)-Ma mei apni unpacking complete kar leti hu.

Neela (stunned)-Avni tum Neil se baat to k...

Avni (cutting her conversation)-Mujhe kise se koi baat nahi karni hai.

Neil-Lekin mujhe karni hai tumse baat.I donot even get a say in it. ??

Avni (angrily)-No you don't get a say not since the wedding.

Neela-Avni Neil said he is sorry.Bacha maaf kardo use ab please.

Avni-Ma sorry toh Mr Ashish Mehta ne bhi kaha tha jab woh Mumma ko haldi mei akela chod ke chale gaye the kyuki unki Ma ne "suicide" commit karne ki koshish ki thi.Toh kya mei unhe bhi maaf kar du ??

Neil (stunned)-Mei Ashish Mehta nahi hu !! Nahi tum Ayesha ma.

Avni (sarcastically smiling)-Sorry Neil having hard time believing you right now.

Neela (calming them down)-Ok enough.Tum dono shant ho jao.Avni mei office ja rahi tum aur Neil please apne differences sort out karolo bacha.

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Pre-cap--Avni (angrily)-Maybe tumhe mere saath rehne ke liye mujhe sab se pehle suicide commit karni chaiye maybe that would grab your attention.Right ACP Neil Khanna !! Because aaj kal suicide tumhare liye bahut matter karta hai.



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Posted: 7 years ago
#14
Bechaari avni...I totally understand her anger. But she will melt for sure eventually...look forward to seeing how Neil reassures her.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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The whole drama what they showed us was a mockery to marriage . This plot is so good . You have brought the exact feelings of Avni . This is the worst way Neil can hurt her by pulling Ashish Mehta . Precap sounds so good ! What pushed her to this extent ? Neil can never bear this .
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Posted: 7 years ago
#16
Wow what a mind blowing chapter
Here Avni is behaving just the way we expected her to behave
Update the next soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17
Read both chapters in one go! Damn you know how to tell a convincing tale. This was really good and I wanted to see something like this in NK as well! I just love it so much. Waiting for the next chapter, update soon!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: neeraja91

Bechaari avni...I totally understand her anger. But she will melt for sure eventually...look forward to seeing how Neil reassures her.



Yes obviously she will melt let's see how long can she be mad at Neil.
Thanks for reading it.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: AgnesFan

The whole drama what they showed us was a mockery to marriage . This plot is so good . You have brought the exact feelings of Avni . This is the worst way Neil can hurt her by pulling Ashish Mehta . Precap sounds so good ! What pushed her to this extent ? Neil can never bear this .



Yes while we cannot control the show FF and other writing things things we can control.
Oh you will see what went to this extent.Avni Ayesha is going to be showing her wrath.
Thanx for reading.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanx for reading.
Sure will update it.

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