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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey! Awaiting your update!

Also I would like to remind you that this is YOUR story, you have every right to write whatever you want about your characters be it based on real or fictional. If it's the fact that creatives have been known to stalk IF, then please update on wattpad! If you don't mind CVs reading your work and your imaginations then please, by all means, carry on!

Reminder: this is your story and you can write whatever you would like according to you!

Update soon 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Avneil_forever


hey loved the update!! 😳 really love your style of writing so was waiting for it. also, i dont think it's fair for one readers opinion to change how you feel the story should go or stop others enjoyment of it. I dont find it inappropriate at all, this is just fantasy not real life- so how is it inappropriate? theres more intense stories written on this forum. I think some people are just too easily offended these days with all respect.
Please carry on with the slightly more intense scenes also.. makes it more interesting.
Look forward to next update ⭐️

Hi, thank you so much, im glad youre enjoying the work and im sorry the update has been so late!
Ive decided to ask for a vote and what comes out overall is what shall happen, because I dont wish to offend anybody but I dont want people to be dissapointed in the story either!
Thank you!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: aditi07

Waiting for update... pls update soon

Sorry its been so long, I am writing the next update now!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: vaish_patel

Hey! Awaiting your update!

Also I would like to remind you that this is YOUR story, you have every right to write whatever you want about your characters be it based on real or fictional. If it's the fact that creatives have been known to stalk IF, then please update on wattpad! If you don't mind CVs reading your work and your imaginations then please, by all means, carry on!

Reminder: this is your story and you can write whatever you would like according to you!

Update soon 😳

Hello, I am going to update soon, sorry it has been so long!
Thank you, I appreciate it, it doesnt bother me as such, but I dont wish to offend anyone so will leave it up to the readers!
But thank you again!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 11-
Hello, so before I deliver the update I have a question! Please dont just scroll down, because your opinion will help me deliver this story in the way YOU want!
As I have always said, I write for you all and never wish to offend anyone with my work. So saying that, I was recently informed that this story has intimate scenes that can be misconstrued by the CV's who check India forums.

So if you would still like this story with the intimacy scenes, then please let me know, if you feel that they are inapropriate, also let me know, and if you feel this story should just be stopped or put on another reading site like Wattpad, let me know! Whatever the majority wants, I will do.
Id also like to remind you all that this is a work of fiction and many people write things as such about real life individuals!

Anyway, to the update you have all been waiting for, again, apologies for it being late.

Aditi felt Zain's fingers brush against her neck as he brushed her hair to the side, the blindfold was loosened and then pulled away from her eyes, she gasped at the magical scene before her. Candle tealights sat on the floor on either side of them, directly infront of her was a cream white curtain, pulled aside to show a table with two chairs.
She turned around to see Zain, but he was gone
"Zain, where are you"

She could hear his chuckle from the distance "Missing me already, im coming, sit down"
She smiled and made her way to the table, sitting down she looked down at the silk table cloth, stroking her fingers across it
She looked up as Zain rested his hand atop hers
"I wanted some privacy, a chance to try again, I know the way I acted with you wasnt okay, it was more because I was unsure of how to act, and I hope we dont lose what we have"

Aditi leaned on her hand "And what do we have Zain, because up until now I have only been described as your co-worker"
"I dont really know what this is Aditi, but I dont want to lose it, whatever comes from this, I hope we stay in eachothers life"
Aditi sighed, that wasnt the answer she wanted.
"Are we just friends" she asked, hoping Zain would take this chance to speak up about how he truly felt
"We are friends yes, but I dont think we are just friends, its just things are difficult for me right now"

Aditi nodded "And you dont want to make a decision about us until you know what you want"
Zain stilled "Aditi, that isnt what I meant"
She pushed her chair back slightly and stood up
"I dont want to be second choice, I want someone to be sure of me"
Zain stood up in a hurry "I am sure of you, its just the timing"
Aditi nodded "Its okay Zain, youre still caught up on your ex, now excuse me"
"No, im not , thats not what I"
But Aditi had already walked away
He sighed, falling back into his chair
It was clear, he still had a lot of making up to do

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Aditi was up bright and early, stepping out of the car she stood outside the temporary set for the shoot today.
She flicked through her scenes and smiled up at the sun. She hoped she could finish quickly so she could spend some time basking in the sunlight
She watched as Zain's temporary car pulled up, he parked and jumped out
She turned away and walked inside, in no mood to converse with him until he knew what he wanted

Zain looked over at Aditi doing her scene, he waited patiently for her to finish and then beckoned her to the side
With a heavy sigh she moved to the side
"Hello, whats up"
"Look, I dont want to be just friends, I want more than that, im not caught up on any exes, I just am unsure of how to handle the situation and I am not used to feeling this way, this quickly, this strongly and usually I run from this stuff, not run towards it, im confusing and I will drive you mad, get on your last nerve, but theres nothing I will regret more than if I let you go"

Aditi blinked, unable to believe what she had heard
"So what youre saying is" she asked, needing him to clarify
"What im saying is, lets try and see where this goes, I want more and I hope you do to"
With a sigh of relief she went to agree then stopped herself
Smiling slyly she decided to make him wait a little for an answer.
"Hmm, I mean, I dont know, its difficult"
Zain's jaw dropped

"What do you mean its difficult, ive just poured my heart out to you and this is all I get"
Aditi shrugged "Its just, things are difficult for me right now" she repeated Zain's earlier sentence with a nonchalant look on her face
Zain stepped closer, his hand on her arm making tingles run up and down her skin
"This is a dangerous game youre playing"
Aditi smiled "How so" her minty breath fanned over his face as she leaned closer
Zain gulped and stepped back, "Because, im the wrong person to play against, very risky" he tutted

With a sly smirk she rested her hand on his shoulder "I like risky"
She turned and sauntered away, her ponytail flipping from side to side
Zain rubbed his chin with his right hand in thought

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Aditi finally arrived back at the hotel and decided to change quickly for a late stroll on the beach, plugging her earphones in after changing she grabbed her keycard and shut the door, running down the stairs she sighed peacefully as she reached the beach

The stars twinkled above her, sparkling just like Zain's eyes when he smiled at her
The water came in slowly, falling over the white sand and then going back, as if teasing her the way Zain did, sometimes so close but then so many steps away.
She reached down, putting her hand in the warm water and sat down, crossing her legs
She hummed softly as she grabbed at the sand and watched it fall from her hand

"Aditi" a rough voice spoke
She looked up to see her ex looking down at her
She stood up slowly
"I didnt expect you to be here" he muttered, scratching the back of his neck
She shifted from one foot to another in anticipation
"Im glad ive seen you again because I just wanted to say, I hope you're happy, thats all I have ever wanted for you, no matter who that may be with"
Zain's face came to mind and she smiled "I really am, thank you"
He nodded and went to walk away

"Hey, wait"
He stopped and turned back to her
"I hope you get your happiness to"
He smiled "Thanks Aditi"
She waved as he walked away, then turned and continued strolling down the beach
Zain watched as Aditi walked alone, he jogged over to her, calling her name but it seemed she couldn't hear him
Aditi turned her music up and rubbed her arms, she stopped and looked up at the sky

She watched the shooting star and closed her eyes, making a wish
She wished that she would find the happiness she wanted with the person she wanted it with
Then carried on walking
"Aditi" Zain shouted
Finally arriving behind her, he picked her up by her waist and spun her around, she squealed as he tripped and fell on the beach, he turned her over so he was led above her

She looked up, not sure if Zain was the reason her breath was knocked out of her or if it was the fall
"Hi" she whispered
With a cheeky smile he brushed his nose against hers
"Hi" he repeated
"Nice walk" he asked
She giggled "Is this really time for small talk"
Zain rolled his eyes "I dont know, is it"
Aditi tried to push him off of her but he shook his head

Rolling out from underneath him she wiped the sand from her clothes and smiled
Zain smirked "Nice view from down here" he said, looking her up and down
Aditi kicked her foot in the sand making it go in his eyes, then laughed and ran away
Zain stood up slowly "Youll pay for that one" he shouted
She turned back around and saluted "Yes boss"
With a wave she ran back to the hotel

Sorry again this is late! Whatever your thoughts are on this story I love you all either way!
Enjoy x

Edited by -Rehanna- - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Loved the chapter and I am loving the way of ur writing so no need to change the plot or no need to write it elsewhere.
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Posted: 7 years ago
I am happy with the way the story is progressing , please continue the way you were writing it's a story so if you want to include intamcacy it should not become an issue.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hi, I've always liked to be the silent reader type of person but since you asked, I felt like I should answer since it will affect how I experience this story further on. First of all, I love all your stories, pretty sure I've read all of them and I look forward to read more from you 😳 I really like this one too and I wanted to say.. although it felt a tad weird to read intimate scenes between them at the very beginning, I actually like it now and I personally have no problem with it.. but if you do wanna avoid further problems then maybe you could make this story private? Frankly, I don't see a problem with this at all, as long as we're all enjoying the story. Much love, r ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
yayy i love love your updates.
please carry on exactly as you are, as you can see majority are fine. please dont write anywhere else. look forward to next update
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Superb update

Love it

Thank you lovely!

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