The Magic Of Adiza P14 PG23 24th March - Page 11

Originally posted by: shivdamon

Hi I'm sorry I really don't want to be a spoilsport and I also loved your writing style... I'm just really not sure how appropriate it is writing an intimate scene assuming real non-fictional characters...Since you are talking about Zain and Aditi and not Avni and Neil I just think that writing such scenes is a little inappropriate. Please don't get offended and try to understand my point of view.

Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445

Writing for a non fictional character is good as long as it doesn't affect others. This work is done only for fun purpose. We are not like other sns fan who openly make them conscious.

Originally posted by: shivdamon

Hi I'm sorry I really don't want to be a spoilsport and I also loved your writing style... I'm just really not sure how appropriate it is writing an intimate scene assuming real non-fictional characters...Since you are talking about Zain and Aditi and not Avni and Neil I just think that writing such scenes is a little inappropriate. Please don't get offended and try to understand my point of view.

Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445

Hey Rehanna finally u updated . God I was waiting for ur updates for so long even I lost the count of time. Thank you a lot for updating. Loved it from the bottom of my heart.

Originally posted by: Neetu94

Nice update yaar

Waiting for next update

Originally posted by: -Rehanna-

Hello, no I am not offended at all and completley understand your point of view and up until now never thought about it like that, I really appreciate the feedback and will ensure to not write anymore intimate scenes when writing about Adiza, thank you for taking the time to comment:)

Originally posted by: Avneil_forever

hey loved the update!! 😳 really love your style of writing so was waiting for it. also, i dont think it's fair for one readers opinion to change how you feel the story should go or stop others enjoyment of it. I dont find it inappropriate at all, this is just fantasy not real life- so how is it inappropriate? theres more intense stories written on this forum. I think some people are just too easily offended these days with all respect.

Please carry on with the slightly more intense scenes also.. makes it more interesting.

Look forward to next update ⭐️